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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

Heh heh Buffy and Spike wanted to do some matchmaking? Seems Anya don't need help *gg*

Author's Response: Nope Anya is to forward or blunt to let anything pass.

Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

“We normally keep our liquid in our mouth, Xander,”

i love that line lol lol lol

love the story

cant wait for more

Author's Response: yeah that just kind of came, it would be like something Willow would say. Thanks.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

So sweet, Spike being overprotective, worrying about the baby, really caring for Buffy :)
Anya was funny, you made me giggle. Seems like Xander has a lot to look forward to... ;) And Fred and Willow would be cute together. / Ariadne

Author's Response: Thanks that is what I was thinking, and I love Willow and Tara but wanted to try something different.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 12

yay I love updates, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 12

Love the Spuffy!!! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

Naughty Spike, trying to distract Buffy from her phone call ;-)
Giles has kids of his own? So he does not only in theory know about ill children, he was 'on the other site' too, having his own children ill. (Sorry, can't say it better. Hope it makes sense.)

Author's Response: Yep Spike is Evil.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

I wonder what has happened to Giles' daughter? Nothing bad I hope...

Author's Response: Nope let hope not.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2007 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Rouge Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2007 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 11

Hey. I've read your story so far, and I must say that the plot isn't bad, but writing.... well, let's just say that I agree with lots of the reviewers who said that you need help with it. Plus, present tense and the fact that you write mostly about what's happening at the moment, not describing the feelings and emotions behind words and actions, isn't too good. But still, you've created a nice plot. I think that if you'll work on your writing, or try to copy a style of some good fic writer, your story would only gain from it.

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Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 11

I love your story so far and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Callie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter 3

I hope you don't take this the wrong way because I'm only trying to help, but you might want to add a little more in between the dailogue and just add a little bit more depth to the actual words because the plot is great but it could be written a little better. I meant this in the best of terms. good luck with the story

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Reviewer: Cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2007 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 11

Awe, he asked her to marry him. Buffy's reason to wait made sense (even more that they have more time then to get the other to know better. Maybe Spike should invest in his house to get more hot water ;-)

Author's Response: Yep more hot water is of the good, but then we would have prune Spike and Buffy. Very good reason, it just kind of popped in there so I went with it. Thanks

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2007 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 11

Wow..Spike is just insatiable huh? Can't wait to how Buffy handles the phone while Spike is having fun!!!

Author's Response: Yep, he just truly found out he is going to be a daddy, and his love is with him. Thanks

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 10

Okay I've got a smilie for you just for this chappie hope you like it,,,, Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket ... love that I get the sneak preview of this thanks for letting me edited for you....

Author's Response: are they not cute

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yay! Spuffy reunion! At least Spike knows she doesn't love him for his money. Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I don't think that is really why Spike never said anything to her in the first place, when he first went to Sunnydale he wanted a break and to go some place where no one knew him or of his money.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10

Glad to see them happy, especially Spike with becoming a father. Now Buffy will get (or better: got) a surprise as well, not knowing that Spike was rich.

Author's Response: Yep I guess she did

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww, that was very sweet. I liked it a lot. Looking forward to next update. :)

Author's Response: I bet you will be, hope you like it too.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

I don't think I ever left a review for this story. Bad me. Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story. I like the part in this chapter where Spike was scared to go fast with buffy thinking that he will be hurting buffy. LOL And now she knows that Spike has lots and lots of money. I bet Buffy is shocked.
More please.

Author's Response: I think most men are like that when they find out their partner is with child, thanks for liking it.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 10

Not bad at all :) So, she knows that he's a millionaire now...
I wonder if the baby is a girl or a boy.

Author's Response: I guess you will just have to wait on that one. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks more to come.

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 9

Please...i want some more. Anything soon would be fabulous. I love this story.

Author's Response: More will come. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 9

Glad she's finally awake , can't wait for the reunion. Update soon.

Author's Response: Oh I think you will like it, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh cliffhanger again! At last she was able to talk to William. I bet it won't take long and he'll be home :)

Author's Response: Yep I am sure there will be Spuffiness in the next chapter, so way or shape or form.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yay!!! They're gonna speak to each other!!! Can't wait for the whole conversation!!!

Author's Response: Oh I think you will like it.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loved your update! I'll wait for next chapter impatiently, lol.



Author's Response: I would want anything less, but you will like the wait.

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