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Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: All Bad-moody

Developing nicely. Glad to see we have the conflict finally set in place, of William being "lower class" than Buffy and therefore unworthy. It's kinda obvious they want each other (Buffy is buying him stuff/thinking about him and William is venting his frustration), but with obstacles like peer pressure and social class, we're really in for a show. Also very nice to see you've implemented more characters and made the plot thicker, with an appearance of Buffy's boyfriend Angel, the Scooby gang, Cordy's disdain, and Drusilla. It's really nice to see all these elements starting up, and I can't wait to see where you take it.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you think so. Yes, I thought they'd gotten to know each other enough that it was time to start bringing in the other characters and setting the stage for things to come.

Thanks for the lovely review. I'm working on more :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 05:33 pm Title: All Bad-moody

Enjoying.. but Drusilla at a gym? It seems William has her figured out already. At least he will be able to defend himself if Angel tried to start a fight over Buffy.

And I am sure Angel will demand Buffy stop seeing William or ? Just as her grades are improving.



Author's Response: Yes, although she wasn't there to work out. She's just stuck waiting there at the moment. William isn't the pushover he seems, that's for sure.

We'll have to see how Angel's feelings come into play in the next few chapters.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 05:29 pm Title: All Bad-moody

I love love this story. I love Dru and Spike. Of course not as much as Spuffy. Nothing comes to close to spuffy. But are we going to see some William and Dru. Yay, if we are.

I love Cordy. But she is so mean to the people who she thinks is losers or geeks.

and i'm sad that buffy is ashamed of William. But I guess that goes with the popular crowd.

When I was a loner in high school. I was one of the ones who wanted to hurry up and get out of high school. But for some reason I still had popular friends.
Anyways, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! There might be some Spike and Dru, they've just met so anything's possible!

Yes, Cordy's a little socially focused.

Buffy's holding on to her popularity. She's not willing to admit that *gasp* she might be friends with William. But even after her conversation with Cordy she did buy William a gift, so that's a good sign.

I did too. Oddly, I had friends in all the social circles, though they never seemed to mix well :(

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2007 - 04:16 am Title: A Little History

Oh, Perceptive Dawn! I like her :) I hope this puts the bug in Buffy's ear and she starts to make some headway...

Author's Response: Maybe! Yes, Dawn's perceptive, or Buffy's not, whichever way you want to look at it. Heh, Dawn is blunt with a touch of brat. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: A Little History

Yes, Buffy he likes you, you little moron! She needs to watch what she says around him, even though she isn't meaning to hurt his feelings, she obviously is. Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. Buffy's clueless. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 05:40 am Title: Kiss Me Again

Fabulous first paragraph!

I'm enjoying the story - thanks for posting.

Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that paragraph too. Nail polish really is so tasty looking, it's kinda like cthe aroma of coffee. The taste of coffee is always such a disappointment to me compared to the smell, hehe :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 04:05 am Title: A Little History

Another great chapter. Any chance Dawn could contract a severe case of laryngitus in the next update? lol ...just kidding but I mean really, irritating much? Still loving this. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, at least we can't really hear her. She's definitely a brat in this one, that's for sure. Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 12:54 am Title: A Little History

I'm so glad you haven't made William overly-sad; bit of a stiff upper lip sort of guy, isn't he? Please write more! :)

Author's Response: Yes, he is. He's keeping everything inside. If he were to dwell on all of his problems he'd be all weepy all the time.

I've finished "Taken" and this is the only thing I'm focused on now, so hopefully I can update frequently. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: A Little History

Hopefully Buffy is starting to get the picture! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Buffy is a bit clueless still, but eventually she'll have to notice him, right? Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: A Little History

so buffy's ashamed of william......that's what i gathered from her meeting him where students would go. of course she'd be that type of person but hey...it's the beginning so i'm hoping that she realizes that caring what her friends think about who she hangs out with is pointless. and not thinking of him as a boy...way to make the guy feel wanted buffy? i'm sure she didn't mean anything by it but that was kind of harsh. william seems to be a little more stable in this story than in other ones that i've read before. he obviously isn't trying to fit in. he seems a little bit more like spike without he dye job and all black attire. a little more confident.....great job. more soon.

Author's Response: Yes, she's keeping him away from her friends for now.

Buffy and words are sometimes not "mixy" either. She didn't mean it to sound as heartless as it came out. She just meant, hey, not my boyfriend, he's my tutor, but it came out a little harsher than intended.

You're right. While he's not really fitting in and perhaps he'd like to, he's not completely lacking in confidence and doesn't hate who he is. He won't let even Buffy run right over him. Well, at present anyway, not sure about the future yet.

Thank you! Thanks for the review too. I'll try to write fast :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: A Little History

What a polite tutor Spike is! I like this story really. So pure and uncomplicated. Makes me remember my highschool days and my crush, lol! Hope Spike will have more courage to show more interest in Buffy. Im sure Buffy will never turn him down. He already got her attention!

More!

Author's Response: Yes, he's a sweetheart. Thank you! I love to hear that. He's very shy. At the moment, he's just happy spending time with her. I don't know, the question is does Buffy like him? Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: A Little History

Oh I love it. more please.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:21 pm Title: A Little History

awww! I like them studying, and William wise-cracking about the U.S. being a baby country...though no doubt he should keep in mind the Native Americans that were here first, then all the colonies before there was a U.S....um.
Dawn is such a brat!


Author's Response: Very true! He was referring to the U.S. in its current form. Truthfully, I don't remember all that much from high school it may have changed since then (I'd hope!), but I do remember boggling at World History being so condensed. Also being embarrassed when my friend from India knew all about my country and I knew sadly little about his, beyond fairy/folk tales that I'd read, a little bit about religions and myths and some rudimentary facts.

Yes, in my other story Dawn's sweet and caring. This Dawn isn't a grown up just yet. She's still got some Buffy issues. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: A Little History

Another good chapter. I'm glad you haven't rushed anything; it's nice to see small progressions each chapter. I cracked up when Buffy said "He calls everyone pet," that was just hilarious. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you. No, they're still at the noticing and becoming friendly phase.

Well, he does! She thinks. Maybe... hehe. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: A Little History

More please. Pretty please. Pretend I have "the pout" on my face.

Author's Response: Haha! Who can resist "the pout"? Except apparently William, it seems. Thanks for reviewing. I'll do my best to write fast.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: A Little History

I thought first Buffy didn't want to study, that she had an excuse but I was wrong. Still she doesn't want the other people to see her with William and he noticed it.
Loved the banter between Buffy and Dawn, typical siblings. Dawn has sharp eyes, noticing William's reaction. And she got Buffy a bit of thinking :)

Author's Response: No, she's serious about studying. She needs to make sure her grades come up. Yes, she's still being careful to keep him separate from her "real life" and "real friends".

haha, can you tell I have a younger sister? Dawn's not dumb and yes, she hit Buffy with the clue bat a little. Yet to be seen if it registers, though. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: A Little History

Adorable!!! William seems to be very observant.

Author's Response: He is. Like Spike on the show, he's perceptive too. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: A Little History

Aww that was really sweet! Felt sorry for William though, when Buffy said he's just her tutor. Can't wait for the next chap. :)

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. Buffy hasn't really wondered much why he's doing this for her. Not that he's sure why either! Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Kiss Me Again

This is really a cute fic! Can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 04:20 am Title: Kiss Me Again

I love this story. I can never get enough William stories and the fact that you're quoting one of the books I would not be without if stranded on a deserted island, doesn't hurt either. I'd love to see how this fic progresses. Please update soon?

Author's Response: Thank you! I love William stories too. I have some more of this written, I'm just trying to get ahead a little this time. But there will be more :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2007 - 09:16 pm Title: Kiss Me Again

Buffy's already weaving her spell over him :D The minx! I like this story...it's a lot fresher than some of the other high school drama fics I've read.

Author's Response: Oh, that's the nicest compliment. I'm trying. There are (perhaps) unavoidably going to be really familiar settings and situations, I'm just hoping to do the best I can to dress them a little differently if possible. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Oh, I think I'm going to like this! :) I like William, with just the hint of Spike underneath. Can't wait to see his journey.

Author's Response: Oh, good! Yes, there's a little edge to my William :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Kiss Me Again

Ah, Wuthering Heights. One of the few books of the 19th cent (and egg on my face if it's actually 18th) that I found easy to read. That's cute, that Buffy isn't that dumb. They will have more in common.

Author's Response: Yes, neither of them is dumb :) Nope, it's 19th, you're right. Safe from the egg! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 02:53 pm Title: Kiss Me Again

I'm loving this story. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Me either! lol :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 02:50 am Title: Kiss Me Again

Oh, PLEASE keep going with this! I'm so excited to see how you get them together. :)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you like it :) I'll keep going. Hopefully I can get something on this and my other story done this weekend. Thank you for reviewing.

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