I've read all four chapters and so far you definately have me captivated. That kiss though this past chapter...woo had to turn up the air conditioner.

A great struggle of desires you have created for these two. I like the friendship you made between Cordelia and Buffy I always feel that people always make them out to be enemies. I wonder what could happen next.

The only way to find out is if you grace us with a new chapter. AND SOON!!!
~Spuffy_Obsessed

Author's Response: Wow, what a super great review! Thanks ever so much! I am having a really good time writting this one and have had to force myself to leave it and work on my other one. I know a lot of people don't like Cordy, but I always did. She was a spitfire. Of course, I didn't like it when she poked fun at Willow, but her banter with Xander was great! Thanks again!

you can't leave it there! you just can't, that's just evilness! oh my god, you hafta update, like, in the next 5 minutes! please!!!

Author's Response: As i have said before, i am a bad, rude woman! TeeHee! Thanks for the review, pleased as punch that you like this so far. Thanks again!

In reality.. Evie wouldn't care. On ly Buffy and Spike feel bad about it.

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Glad to hear you liked it, Pam. Evie more than likely wouldn't mind Spike cheating on her, except for the fact it is with Buffy. We're talking about a very vain woman and how would she react to finding her very young lover with an even younger girl? Pretty pissed off? Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the update!

I'm glad that Buffy finally acknowledged that Spike is currently in a relationship with someone. It doesn't matter that he doesn't love Evangeline, or even that it's possible that Evangeline is not exclusive with him (or at least that she wouldn't be completely crushed if things ended between them). The passion between Buffy and Spike is electric, but it's not an excuse to cheat on someone. That said, I hope that the various obstacles that our couple is facing will be overcome, leading the way for more Spuffines :)

Author's Response: Some major decisions will have to be made soon! I will be having things move along pretty quickly over the next couple of chapters which will lead to some big time drama for our favorite couple! Thanks for the review!!!

DAMN WHY DID SHE HAVE TO PANICK AND PUSH HIM AWAY!!! i LOVE thsi story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that he kissed her and then she pushed him away. i really hope that they talk and that they get together, thats how its is suppose to be. also i hope that he breaks things off with cordys mom, gros and that things work out. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. PLEASE update as soon as u ca, im DYING to read wat happens next. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sarah G. i am so glad that you liked this chapter, it was really fun to write. I will try to have something out soon, but since I will be having houseguests this weekend, I don't know how much will get accomplished! The next probably two chapters will be moving things along a great deal and be prepared for some steaminess as well as heartbreak. Damn me straight to hell, right? thanks again!

AWWW THEY TOTALLY LIKE EACH OTHER AND WOULD MAKE EACH OTHER SOO HAPPY!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. oh why did cordy have to come it, he was being soooooo sweet and i wanted to know wat she would have said. i really hope that they get closer and then get together. also i hope that when they do get together, it doesnt cause any problems between cordys mom and them. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx soo much

Author's Response: WoW! What an enthusiastic response. Makes me all fuzzy and warm to hear that you like this story so much! Yeah, damn that Cordy for wandering in on them. There would have been total smoochies and it woulda been hawt! I will try and update asap, but it probably wont be until next week sometime. Aiming for a chapter a week on this story and 2 a week for the other if all goes well. Thanks again!!!!

Ooh, cliffhanger! :) Enjoying this fic more and more for each chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks, Pet! You know how i love a gripping cliffhanger to keep all of my dear readers on the edge of their seats and coming back for more!

Just started from the beginning and I love it. Blimey you could cut the sexual tension with a knife. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Love the tension! Drives em mad! Thanks so much, Same!

oh that was good, for some reason I think Cordy interupted a kiss.
More please.

Author's Response: UST, anyone?! TeeHee! Thanks so much for the review!!!

Squeeeeee!!! *Give serenity a huge thank you hug*

OMG! I loved this chapter! Hehehe Spike all protective over the younger girls and such!

Angel.. shy? WTF??? ok, really don't see him as a shy guy... you writing him as a nice bloke, or is it all just a cover?!!!

Next chapter soon please! xxx

Thanks!

Author's Response: Hey there, Katkin...thanks ever so much for the uber-enthusiastic review! Glad to hear that the story is still keeping your interest! As far as Angel....stick around and all will be revealed. Thanks again!

Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks for the review!

OH I want to know how he is going to ditch the mom and go with Buffy, they both seem to be liking each other.

Also why do I get the feeling something is going to happen to Buffy.

Author's Response: In due time, dear! Thanks for the review and Buffy will have some things to deal with but they aren't too terribly bad. No where near the drama I put her through in Breathless!