[Report This]Date: 08/09/2007 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter 4
DAMN WHY DID SHE HAVE TO PANICK AND PUSH HIM AWAY!!! i LOVE thsi story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that he kissed her and then she pushed him away. i really hope that they talk and that they get together, thats how its is suppose to be. also i hope that he breaks things off with cordys mom, gros and that things work out. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. PLEASE update as soon as u ca, im DYING to read wat happens next. THANX
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sarah G. i am so glad that you liked this chapter, it was really fun to write. I will try to have something out soon, but since I will be having houseguests this weekend, I don't know how much will get accomplished! The next probably two chapters will be moving things along a great deal and be prepared for some steaminess as well as heartbreak. Damn me straight to hell, right? thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2007 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 3
GRRRREAT!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
AWWW THEY TOTALLY LIKE EACH OTHER AND WOULD MAKE EACH OTHER SOO HAPPY!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. oh why did cordy have to come it, he was being soooooo sweet and i wanted to know wat she would have said. i really hope that they get closer and then get together. also i hope that when they do get together, it doesnt cause any problems between cordys mom and them. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx soo much
Author's Response: WoW! What an enthusiastic response. Makes me all fuzzy and warm to hear that you like this story so much! Yeah, damn that Cordy for wandering in on them. There would have been total smoochies and it woulda been hawt! I will try and update asap, but it probably wont be until next week sometime. Aiming for a chapter a week on this story and 2 a week for the other if all goes well. Thanks again!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Not sure how about the whole story yet, just from the perspective that so far Spike seems like a prostitute here - give sex for money and favors. However, I love your Spuffy interaction so much that I'll keep reading for those special moments, this chapter being one of them. Loved when he touches her face and whispers, "You really are, you know:"
Author's Response: Well, I am glad that you will keep on reading. Just give it a chance. Spike isnt a prostitute, remember that he has his own income and is going to college; not just sponging off Ms. Money-bags. And, he really does like Cordy's mom, which I will delve into further in the next couple of chappies. Anyway, thank you so much for the review and I promise to make Spike a more upstanding citizen in the future!!! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, cliffhanger! :) Enjoying this fic more and more for each chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Pet! You know how i love a gripping cliffhanger to keep all of my dear readers on the edge of their seats and coming back for more!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter 3
i love it, i can 't wait to find more spuffy. i especially love the plot line. who wouldn't take a fresh college student hottie like spike? i would. update soon, keep up the good work!!1
Author's Response: Wish there were hot college guys like Spike at my school. Sadly, there were none. boo for me. thanks so much for the review and I am happy to hear that you are liking the story!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Just started from the beginning and I love it. Blimey you could cut the sexual tension with a knife. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Love the tension! Drives em mad! Thanks so much, Same!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying this very much. Looking forward to see where it goes from here. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am aiming to update at least once a week from here on out. This is my secondary story (the one I work on when my brain goes blank on my other!) Thanks again!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 3
oh that was good, for some reason I think Cordy interupted a kiss.
More please.
Author's Response: UST, anyone?! TeeHee! Thanks so much for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Saved buy Cordelia. Spike must be going to school... term paper and personal trainer and cook. What else could a girl want? Of course we know what else silly :).
Enjoying.
Author's Response: Saved? I guess one might put it that way. Me...I'd be pissed! LoL! Yes, Spike is in college and that will be discussed more later. Thanks so much, Pam!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2007 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Squeeeeee!!! *Give serenity a huge thank you hug*
OMG! I loved this chapter! Hehehe Spike all protective over the younger girls and such!
Angel.. shy? WTF??? ok, really don't see him as a shy guy... you writing him as a nice bloke, or is it all just a cover?!!!
Next chapter soon please! xxx
Thanks!
Author's Response: Hey there, Katkin...thanks ever so much for the uber-enthusiastic review! Glad to hear that the story is still keeping your interest! As far as Angel....stick around and all will be revealed. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
SPIKE AND BUFFY TOTALLY WANT EACH OTHER AND BELONG TOGETHER!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!
Author's Response: I agree. That is unless Spike can be with me, then Buffy can just sod off! HeHe! Thank you so much for leaving a revie and I am glad to hear you like the story!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Hi, hope u enjoyed yur vacation , I loved reading breathless and I really like this new fic now too, can't wait to read more I just hope u update this one as quickly as u did breathless.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jo. Yes, I did enjoy my vacation, but then again I wasn't at work so there wasnt any question about that! LoL! I am glad to hear that you are liking this story as well as knowing you liked the other one. This is my secondary story so it probably wont be updated as much as my primary, Lose Control. But, I will try to get something up every week! thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter 2
OH I want to know how he is going to ditch the mom and go with Buffy, they both seem to be liking each other.
Also why do I get the feeling something is going to happen to Buffy.
Author's Response: In due time, dear! Thanks for the review and Buffy will have some things to deal with but they aren't too terribly bad. No where near the drama I put her through in Breathless!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1
OH I think I will like
Author's Response: Well, I am glad! heHe!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Loved the update! So they're both attracted to each other at first sight, that's so sweet! Looking forward to the next chap. :)
Author's Response: Yep, they are very much attracted to one another at this point. Still have a great deal of flirting to do as well as an obstacle or two. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 2
wow a wonderful chapter, looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks! I was a bit unsure about this chapter. It just didn't seem to flow as well as I normally like it to do when I am writting. Maybe it was just because I kept getting interupted? Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Ms. Chase isn't upset because she will just get another "one" to boost her ego. Angel huh... shy?
Enjoying.
Author's Response: Well, yeah...Evie can have just about anyone she wants; why would she worry about what Spike wants? As far as Angel...just wait. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Spike half dressed... always a looker.
Author's Response: I think so! LoL! Thank you so much for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2007 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved the way your story is going so far. I just hope there is not alot of Angel .
Author's Response: For the sake of not only my tummy, but everyone else's there will not be a whole lot of Bangle loving. Some specific details and what not needed for the storyline, but I honestly don't care to write an actual love scene with the two. Good? Yes? Thank you so much for the review, Shay!
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2007 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
NOO!! You're going to leave it like this?!?!? Hateful woman! Lol, just kidding! Please update as soon as you can, even if it is in a week and a half. *pouts*
Author's Response: I may just have to be punished for being such an evil woman. Do you think Spike is available for that kind of task?? HeHe! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review on this story. When I left for vacation there wasn't a whole lot of feedback and I wasn't sure that I would continue it. But, seeing as I have since received a good number of reviews I will be continuing this fic. Thanks again!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2007 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Good start. Can't wait to see how it pans out.
Author's Response: YEA! Thank you! Now I can stop pestering you to read it! I figure you have to read all of my stories since it was your devious mind that got me to start writting them!!!! WooHoo!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Me likey so far. I hope Spike isn't a cocky jerk with Buffy in this fic. And I hope that she plays a little hard to get. That's always fun to watch! I'll be looking for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, J! I've been playing around with a lot of different outcomes for this story and as of yet, I haven't decided which way to go with their personalities. I may play it out both ways. I generally do a sit and type kind of approach to writting, only deciding which path to take when I start typing. Oh well, guess we will both see who is a total jerk at the same time, huh? Thanks again!
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