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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Tara is still cute :) When Dawn and Willow were surprised to see the band there, that was fun. But they'll still have a hard time to convince Buffy. (What scars does she have?) ~ Till next time.

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 03:40 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Awesome! Loved it so far! You rock!

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Yummy Mummy's

Keep it coming. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 11:28 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

Liked this sentence a lot:
'Brings a whole new meaning to the words yummy mummy' Spike thought smirking.

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 10:41 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

i don't want to be rude, but i would suggest getting a second beta to help you with this story. it's always good to have more than one, i saw way too many mistakes in this chapter, they tend to be a bit distracting. like you have a problem putting your when it should be you're, and to when it should be too. i think this is a good idea for a story, it just needs some work.

Author's Response: i have been trying to find a second beta and have sent 5 emails out to people that are on a beta list at the bloodshed verse but none of them have replied:(......Pet is having a crack at betaing this story for me...so hopefully when u read it again soon their will be some changes

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 08:17 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

I don't like to read fics that aren't finished and to be honest, I don't know why did I read your fic today. This first chapters were great. I loved how Spike connected with Tara right away and that Angel isn't so interested in Buffy. Can't wait to find out who violated Buffy and how. I hope she will go with the band and that she will take Tara too.
Please update soon!


Author's Response: sometimes half of the good fics r still in the process of being finished....i used to be like that until i found awesome ones that were half done lol

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 06:23 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

Ooh! Great job so far. And such a cute story. I loved it from the first chapter. I just had to read all the chapters even though I have lots of other stuff I should be doing. lol Thats how it always works though. I will definitely be looking forward to more.

Author's Response: lol yeah i should be doing assignments atm but i get distracted so easily....theirs so many awesome stories out there just waiting to be found lol...i'm glad your liking it.....another chapter should be up in a few days...week or so at max

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 06:22 am Title: Yummy Mummy's

Oh it was great, I wonder who Tara's father is and what all he did to Buffy.

Just every time I read this I keep thinking she is Willows Tara and going to sudden be kissing Willow and that stuff.

Author's Response: lol yeah its really weird writing Tara as a little girl but *shrug* she's a fun character to write.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2007 - 06:07 am Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

I have never heard of that song before. It is awesome. On to the next chapter. ; )

Reviewer: sexiespikelover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

OMG! I love it! Keep up the wonderful work!

Author's Response: :) thank you....i have a new chapter that's being Beta'd as we speak....should be up soon so be on the lookout:)

Reviewer: K. T Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:45 am Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

hmmm i wonder what's going to happen keep it up....

Reviewer: K. T Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:44 am Title: Mothers And Daughters

interesting and a bit different to your other story...i'm liking where its going cant wait to read more

Reviewer: jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:44 am Title: Mothers And Daughters

i loved it cant wait to see what happens next:)

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2007 - 03:02 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

I just started reading this story... It's really good.i can't wait for an Update

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

And they meet. Spike is interested even with a child...
no ring and not rejected...

Enjoying

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

Oh perfect timing, they walked in into Buffy singing. And what a small world, they met again. Even better if Angel isn't interested in Buffy now; Spike is it even more *g*. Looking forward to more; good to see an update.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

I LIKED IT , I WOULD READ MORE, BUT TGERE WERE TWO INSTANCES WHERE YOU USED THE WORD DEFIANTLY INSTEAD OF DEFINITELY . i'LL LOOK FOR UPDATES.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 09:16 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

Really loving this! More please!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 03:40 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

good update

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

im absolutely loving this, im excited to keep reading, keep it up. and i like your idea to change it so Spike brings out that side. the characters are true to form, its a great read!

Author's Response: thank you so much for your kind words:) it is greatly appreciated....i'm glad your enjoying the story:)

Reviewer: LuvsBitch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 12:10 pm Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

That was SUCH a good chapt, !! I loved it xxx

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2007 - 05:39 am Title: It's Just A Matter Of Finding Talent

oh I loved it, more please.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 05:38 pm Title: Mothers And Daughters

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Mothers And Daughters

There seems to be a secret behind who's Tara's father. Not everything is what it looks like.
Interesting summary; looking forward to read more.

Reviewer: Taylor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 11:10 am Title: Mothers And Daughters

Loved it!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

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