[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Mr. Gordo
It's only been a year since Spike died in the Hellmouth. Callie would be one, not two, if Buffy got pregnant at that time.
Author's Response: Ack! You're right! I thought I caught that one. It's been appended. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:08 pm Title: The Cloaks Come Off
Oh indeed a very good excuse and it still fits. And a new prophecy, huh? Russia. But they are still in America.
Awe and a very good reason that like Andrew put it Buffy was...er...incapacitated.
Spike's I guess? Looking forward to read more about Spike's reaction.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 07:55 am Title: Battle Royale
Good handling of a battle scene. They can be hard to do. Willow (I'm assuming) speaking to the dragon was an interesting touch. And the Slayers wearing hoods and coming in and out sneakily is a good idea, too.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 07:42 am Title: Battle Royale
Oh the big fight. Neat the trick with the ice to save Spike from gettting toasted.
I like the start; looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Battle Royale
great beginning! i love it... :D
can't wait for the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:46 am Title: Battle Royale
Great start, looking forward to read more!