

Date: 01/17/2008 - 04:03 am Title: Hell & Back
I like your story and your style is your style. Donīt change it - but please write a sequel, because Spike always promised not to leave her - donīt make him a liar

Date: 01/15/2008 - 06:44 am Title: Hell & Back
Really enjoyed the plot once got used to the script style of writing! But I'm with Pari, write how you like to write not how others expect you to! Well done!

Date: 09/15/2007 - 12:49 am Title: Hell & Back
This was an excellent read, and I like your writing style. Don't let anyone deter you from that style ;)

Date: 09/05/2007 - 07:39 am Title: Hell & Back
I liked it. Except for the ending but that was only because Spike made the stupid decision of leaving her. Next time I suggest not writing it in script format. If it doesn't work or flow as nicely then you know for future references.

Date: 09/03/2007 - 01:52 pm Title: Hell & Back
This was an excellent first fic! But I do hope that you don't intend for the story to end here--say it ain't so!!!
Here's hoping that you'll be writing a sequel with a happier ending. Boy--these two need constant supervision because they sure end up doing lots of dumb things where each other are concerned.