[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 10:31 am Title: Ice-cream and shattered dreams
Sweet chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thank you! I won't post the next chapter as quickly, but soon I promise
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 08:56 am Title: Ice-cream and shattered dreams
great
Author's Response: thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 - 07:22 am Title: Ice-cream and shattered dreams
Exchange of personal but sad information. Giles would probably love the sound of Dawn's chatter and a Christmas of new beginnings.
Seeing where this goes...
Author's Response: I think she'll be a little trying for him first, but with her charm it won't take her long to win him over...
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
OH great I like this so far ,yu write very well,very well so far.
Author's Response: Wow! thanks so much. I'm happy you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
lovely au.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
Oooh, what a lovely beginning, darling! I'm loving the interaction between the sisters and Spike. It's truly a delightful read and I'm very looking forward to the second part of this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so excited you like it! I'll definately try to post part two tonight.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 12:53 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
Just a tip: The spacing like you did on your LJ looks better ( = makes it better to read, the dialog I mean) or simply more spacing between the dialog.
~ What a nightmare... not only doing the last minute Christmas shopping, Dawn wondering off. Almost impossible to find her.
Dawn can be lucky that Spike found her first, working for the security.
Love the start and looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment on my LJ too, it's all still too new for me. Totally appreciate it.
I know, Christmas shopping is terrible at the best of times, but when kids decide to wander...
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
Great start! I look forward to reading more. :D
Author's Response: thank you, I'll try to update it again tonight :)
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 12:17 pm Title: Little Girl Lost...
I loved the beginning of this story, I can't wait to see what happens next! Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 11:55 am Title: Little Girl Lost...
i actually would have wanted to read this, but i can't with it written like this. you really need to space it out more, i would suggest getting a beta to help you out.
Author's Response: I know, thanks for telling me, I posted the chapter so late at night that I didn't even do a proper read through, I promise the next chapter will be easier to read. I also post them on my live journal which is generally easier for me to do layout with
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 11:22 am Title: Little Girl Lost...
Really like it so far. Keep going.
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Little Girl Lost...
I like it. I can´t wait to see more.
Spike is very sweet with Dawn. ^^
Author's Response: yeah he is really sweet with Dawn, and she's still a little devil.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 09:14 am Title: Little Girl Lost...
wonderful start, looking forward to more
Author's Response: thank you! I'll post again soon
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2007 - 09:10 am Title: Little Girl Lost...
Saved by Spike...
Waiting to see what happens.
Author's Response: thanks, I'll post again soon in a better layout that's easier to read
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