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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow! That was a very dark chapter... you really made me feel Buffy's terror, humilation, and pain. Good update.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow You surprised me , this isn't your usual story line it;s very good once you get past any thing to do with that gross fiend Angeleus ,,, That was horrid, I Hate that bastard , I know you'll have Spike help her ,but if there's going to be any more Angelus and Buffy scenes i'm going to have to skip chapters ,he's an animal and extremely gross. I have always enjoyed your stories.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean. I would never read anything like this, that's why I'm so surprised that I could actually write it. No worries, the last of the grossness between Buffy and Angelus is the beginning of the next chapter. I couldn't have that go on for too long. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wouldn't normally read stories of rape, but think you handled it well.It's obviously in context of the story and is continuing to set the scene for the rest of the fic. Well done.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow...Spike saved someone. That's a good thing right?

Poor Buffy. I hope she's not left with him for too long.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Buffy...
Spike didn't kill the woman? He save her but he couldn't save Buffy. But I hope he will *shudders thinking of Angelus*

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

No suprise, then. Disgusting rape, and the victim comes anyway, like always.(As if!)
Well, maybe next time.

Author's Response: I knew you would have a problem with it when I read your last review, but it doesn't really bother me. What rape isn't disgusting? And I warned about that, so it's not like it came as a shock. My story isn't like others out there, but if you don't wanna stick around to find out, it's no great loss to me.

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was a good chapter, I liked it ...It had all the fear of Buffy wrote into the rape...And Spikes displeasure at having to listen to Angelus try to break Buffy's spirit....I was glad at the end that Spike also let the girl go and feed off the biker guy instead...

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

i can understand why this chapter would have been hard, but i think you did a great job with it. you really showed the pain that buffy was going through. can't wait to see how spike is going to help her.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

wonderfully written. looking forward to next update. interesting that Spike didn't kill the woman, just the bad guy. does he have the soul?

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1

I like the beginning of this, although I hope it won't be too angsty. You know me, I'm perfectly fine with writing angst, but reading, not so much. :) But I couldn't resist reading, and now I'm glad I did. Looking forward to read more!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start! I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: spikeslovley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2007 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1

ooohhh yay!!!! L0o0ovvveeee it :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooh evil! and lovin it

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh that ending leaves me with chills! Can't wait to see where you're going with this, it's a great start

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

So Spike just goes along with Angelus' plans. That's not good. Poor Buffy. Are they gonna turn her or just torture her? Looking forward to see what you come up with.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like the start; looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I* think I'm goin to really like this, I can see a full out war starting between Spike and Angelus over ownership of The lovely Buffy....More Soon please and I'll give you cookiesPhoto Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

awesome start, can't wait to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

love the start of this and dark and angsty is just my thing!! Update soon!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start, Iīm going to look forward to the next chapters. That moment Angelus pointed out Buffy to Spike seemed foreign, though. I canīt imagine Spike just doing Angelusībidding without comment or laying claim to her himself, sorry. And why wouldnīt Angelus "hunt" her himself?
I hope itīs not the usual Angel/us-gets-there-first-routine, and Spike rescues the damaged goods out of his evil clutches, yawn, that has been done so often.
Please surprise me!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2007 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1

enjoyed the start of this looking forward to more. really hated angelus, spike is interesting, don't know if i love him or hate him yet.

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