

Date: 10/12/2007 - 02:35 am Title: one-shot
I`m being honest: Nice story, but not at all outstanding. Sweet, but ordinary. If you expand it you could put in some ups and downs, obstacles, misunderstandings, etc. . Would be great, because there is potential becaufe of the initial situation.
Sorry for not complimenting you all over but I hope you don`t feel offended. I just want to help.
Author's Response: No offence taken. I'll be honest as well. I knew exactly what I was doing when I wrote this. There is no plot here, there is not suppose to be one. I think I made that clear in the A/N, that'll be for the sequel. I know not everybody read the authors notes, though. Which is a shame, because the authors write them for a reason; for the readers to know what to expect. Anyway, thanks for taking time to share your opinion, that is always appreciated.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:53 pm Title: one-shot
Oh that was a pleasant change to the normal of William/Spike being madly in love with Buffy the moment he laid eyes on her....
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel with your ready ....Spiks Mrs....

Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: one-shot
Oh such a cute little story! Lovely!

Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: one-shot
Oh... good chapter. I liked it a lot, it was sweet. Would make a good longer story too. = Would love to read it if you write it.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 12:31 pm Title: one-shot
Oh that was good.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 11:24 am Title: one-shot
Very cute, I would be interested in the longer story, if you decide to write it. I think you should post this oneshot in Spuffy Fantasy for the William challenge this month, but it's up to you. Great work=)

Date: 10/11/2007 - 11:15 am Title: one-shot
Two outcasts feeling a little comradery. And who wouldn't love a boy that would help a damsel in distress.
Waiting to see what happens next.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 10:45 am Title: one-shot
Great start! please continue

Date: 10/11/2007 - 10:35 am Title: one-shot
That was adorable. I loved it...and a longer fic featuring William? I'll never say no to that! Thanks for the cute story. It was quite the pick-me-up for me as well!

Date: 10/11/2007 - 10:19 am Title: one-shot
Awww! You definitely follow up when you get the chance.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 09:44 am Title: one-shot
Lovely! Can't wait to see where you'll go with this! :)

Date: 10/11/2007 - 09:34 am Title: one-shot
VERY CUTE!!! LOVED IT!!

Date: 10/11/2007 - 09:21 am Title: one-shot
I like it, is very good. I hope that you can update a sequel, I would like see William and Buffy in love.

Date: 10/11/2007 - 08:53 am Title: one-shot
This ficlet definitely caught my interest, I'd love to read read more. Good story!

Date: 10/11/2007 - 08:34 am Title: one-shot
loved this ficlet. looking forward to more if you expand the story

Date: 10/11/2007 - 08:30 am Title: one-shot
i liked it, but i didn't love it. however, i can see that it could be very promising, if you would continue with it. so write! :D /annie