

Date: 03/02/2008 - 12:50 pm Title: chapter 33
Great update! :) Now, I'm off to next chapter! ;)
Author's Response: glad you liked it. hopefully you'll enjoy the rest

Date: 03/02/2008 - 06:58 am Title: chapter 34
Oh, I hope Anne has the chance to meet Buffy and find out what a good daughter-in-law is like. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: thanks for the review and next one when I can

Date: 03/02/2008 - 02:45 am Title: chapter 34
Yikes! William and Anne's visit certainly was a disaster. Poor Anne, I never would've imagined she was being treated so badly when William was away. :( Loved reading Anne's musings about Buffy. *crosses fingers hopes someday the two women get the chance to meet* Fantastic chapter as always!
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. I just wanted to show how evil Dru and Darla were. more when I can

Date: 03/01/2008 - 06:38 pm Title: chapter 34
I need some timing clarification please.... Is this visit to Winchester taking place the same autumn as Connor & Willow & Tara's wedding? I presume as much but just wanted to verify that we've hopped back in time a bit in William's chapters from where we last left Buffy, et al.
I'm also a bit confused as to how much autonomy Anne has. Clearly, she owned her own property as she was able to sell it to provide William's ransom, and she seemed free to accept the position in Shrewsbury at court, but the talk of her basically living at Harold's mercy threw me for a loop. I need a history lesson!
As always, appreciate the update.
Author's Response: right, yes visit taking place the same autumn as the wedding. Anne would have very little autonomy. she would be able to sell her dowery lands etc as they were her's. but would have needed permission to live there. basically she was desperate when she accepted the position in Shrewsbury, she had also lived there before and could have argued that her early vows to Athelflaed superceeded her mothering duties, though not her wifely ones. if she'd stayed in Harold's hall she would have been totally at his, and therefore his wife's, mercy. a man had total control over the women he was responsable for as head of household in Saxon times. her only escape would have been a nunnery. and she can't do that now as she has no dowery

Date: 03/01/2008 - 03:50 pm Title: chapter 34
Poor Anne. So far she still has Buffy's brooch.
Author's Response: yes and she'll keep it. glad you liked it. more when I can

Date: 03/01/2008 - 01:45 pm Title: chapter 34
Oh, really not liking Dru or Darla. Here's hoping Anne may one day find her way to Buffy's hall permanently. Great chapter sweety.
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more as soon as i can

Date: 03/01/2008 - 01:21 pm Title: chapter 34
Oh I'm really sad that they had such a bad time in Winchester. I was thrilled when I saw it mentioned in the summary because it's such a lovely place and has so much history (of course I maybe just a little tiny weeny bit biased because I live there!).
Author's Response: I love winchester too, but I really really needed to show how evil Dru and Darla truely were.

Date: 03/01/2008 - 12:42 pm Title: chapter 34
Oh, poor Anne, what she's had to endure at the hands of those evil witches. I'm glad she kept the brooch hidden and that she realizes how bad Dru and Darla are and of course Buffy would be so very different to her. William keeps rising up in life, becoming worthier by the chapter. Loved it! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: she doesn't know how good Buffy would be, glad you liked the chapter. more when I can

Date: 03/01/2008 - 11:55 am Title: chapter 34
I've read about your visitors on the tag. I hope things will go well for you!
Oh yeah, the king is right about William having to protect his back.... with brothers like his.
Wow, indeed, with brothers like his or sisters in laws like he has he doesn't need enemy. Stealing from their MiL? They dare a lot. Would be good to put them down a bit (but there is nobody that would do that).
Buffy would be horrified if she get to know how her MiL would be treated. She would do better.
~ Looking forward to more if you have time.
Author's Response: glad you liked and yes they dare a lot. more when I can

Date: 03/01/2008 - 10:59 am Title: chapter 34
Ah.. hmm... so... could you perhaps push Dru and Darla over a cliff? Would be nice :) ! A wonderful chapter as always... I love to read your side of this part of time. And its nice to see the difference in living between British folks and Northman folks.
Please.. continue your fine work here and tell your story to all of us.
Author's Response: a cliff now that's a nice idea, but don't worry I have plans of my own. glad you enjoyed. more as soon as i can

Date: 02/28/2008 - 02:06 pm Title: chapter 33
That was a really sweet chapter except for the ruthless blood and guts murder parts of course.
Loved the horse called Finn!
Can't imagine Spike not managing to perform his husbandly duties on his wedding night though ... but then again he is a lot more of a William in this story so I guess it fits with the character.
Author's Response: me neither, but i would think up any excuse not to have to amrry some one else and given the times that was about the only one that would work

Date: 02/28/2008 - 08:36 am Title: chapter 33
This new glimpse into William's life was great, I liked that Buffy's influence is always with him... nice choice of name for the horse by the way. :D William certainly is taking pride in his new sword... since it's from the spoils of this battle, I can't help but wonder if it's going to play into the story later on down the road. And I loved Athelflaed's idea to send William to Ingimund, this new position is all kinds of exciting. I look forward to finding out what new adventures await for him there. ;) Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: thanks for the review. and I'm glad you liked it. hope you like the rest as well

Date: 02/28/2008 - 12:00 am Title: chapter 33
William seems to be doing very well for himself. Nice to see him thrive out from his brothers' shadows.
I have a hunch that news of Buffy's delicate condition would've made its way to Ingimund over the course of the winter, since the wedding gathered guests from far corners of the land. Won't that be a shocking bit of news for William to learn when he arrives in the Spring?
Author's Response: it wouldn't be a man's place to tell:) in fact it would be the height of bad manners
glad you liked the update. more soon

Date: 02/27/2008 - 10:12 pm Title: chapter 33
…a dapple-grey stallion who answered to the unlikely name of Finn... I had to laugh out loud at this. I believe it’s the highest elevation any writer has ever given Riley, ROFL. Personally – I would have made him a gelding – inserts evil laugh here. YAY – glad to hear William has indeed come into his own as a warrior and a man, putting down the ‘dogs’ as it were and being able to ward off any potential wives. Me-thinks the queen’s idea will eventually bring William round to Buffy again – at least I hope so. I adored the chapter sweety, bravo on a job well done.
Author's Response: I wanted to put him on a gelding but they didn't use them very much. glad you liked the chapter. I've been working it for days

Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:31 pm Title: chapter 33
Squeals! So is William going back??? Bounces up and down in excitement! Oh I hope so, I hope so! OMG, you have to update soon! Evil woman!
Author's Response: evil am I ..laughs manically
glad you liked. more soon

Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:27 pm Title: chapter 32
Egads! I teared up! Gah, woman you are making it hard to read this fic with a smile! UGH. *sniff sniff* Sigh, I wish poor William could have seen his daughter. Maybe he'll see some other children??? hint hint!
Author's Response: I like hints:) I'm pleased the fic made you feel it, so many don't. so thanks for the compliment. more soon

Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:18 pm Title: chapter 31
Bravo! Very well done indeed! A great threesome sex scene! Were you blushing while you wrote it?? LOL. No, honestly, it was tender and awesome! Great job!
Author's Response: had help from IBE... but it wsa fun to write

Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:10 pm Title: chapter 30
Gah, I just feel... sigh, poor Buffy, amidst all this happiness. I don't know how she does it and remain composed! I'd be bawling at the drop of a hat, making myself sick with want and worry. UGH, she is very strong indeed. And will Conner be up to preforming on the wedding night? Let's go have a look see!
Author's Response: I tried to show Buffy clinging onto duty when all else was collapsing around her. thanks for reviewing every chapter

Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:02 pm Title: chapter 29
Awwww Buffy's gonna stay with them!! YAY! And it seems strange, two brides and one groom...but hey, not knocking it! Great update!
Author's Response: takes all sorts and this makes Tara secure for life, cause Willow's beomes hers. glad you liked

Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: chapter 28
OMG! William beat Liam! SWEET! And Anne loved the brooch, *sniff sniff* Oooo but William doesn't know. And that haunted look... sigh. It's good that Anne won't divulge any of William's secrets to the rest of the family... god only knows what those women would do with the info! Great update!
Author's Response: glad you liked. more soon

Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:51 pm Title: chapter 33
Ooh, wonderful chapter! I'm so happy the King of Mercia and his wife are so taken with William, and that they not only were so understanding of his reasons not to marry but they also put a stop to the marriage offers. William truly has changed so very much and now he's well on his way of becoming worthy of his Buffy. :D Loved the part with Anne and how she's so happy in Court, but still notices William's suffering over not being with Buffy. I'm loving this story more with each chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: more on the way soon. glad you enjoyed

Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:43 pm Title: chapter 33
I'm feeilng a sense of anticipation - could there soon be a reunion? I hope so!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: i wouldn't say soon:) but there will be more

Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: chapter 33
Good to read the update today and to see that William and his mother are happy where they are now (as happy as William can be in his case).
Heh heh, William even tamed the stallion.
William in on his way now, gaining a name. And you'll sure know that I'm not mad that William managed to stay unmarried too :)
Till next part, when you have it ready.
Author's Response: next part being sorted when RL allows

Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:43 pm Title: chapter 32
Another lovely installment to this fascinating story.
Thank you for taking the time to write and post.
Author's Response: you are most kind. more on it's way

Date: 02/25/2008 - 07:46 am Title: chapter 32
"If you keep talking and are scrupulously honest with each other you will have a far stronger marriage." Very good advice from Buffy, I'm glad Connor worked things out with his wives. :D
*smiles* A baby girl, how sweet... and what a pretty name too. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: yes, its terrifying how many couples aren't that truthful with each other, pretending one thing and feeling something else. it makes for shakey foundations to any relationship