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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 04:28 am Title: chapter 21

The shopping excursion in this chapter was fun. Again all the detail you into the scenes is amazing, they really do come to life for me. Loved the update! :D

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it... more soon and thanks for the review

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 01:10 am Title: chapter 21

Great as usual! You make it quite real to us.
Looking forward to more ASAP!
Who is the Amber for? I know that sometimes lapiz and amber were worn as beads...Amber is considered a "fiery" stone, and therefore masculine in trait...Also sometimes considered magickal. Is it for a talisman or maybe even a keepsake to Wm? I also wondered if it were for Faith or Willow.
I will have to ask Mr. F. about that fancy steel---it's something I haven't heard of...he is a smith, but not THAT fancy.
Here I raised sheep and it took me a few to realize what woven in the grease was---the term had totally slipped my mind! Duh! I've laughed many a day at folks who wore modern fabric blends to historical events/reenactments; and been thankful (especially in our hot humid climate in FL) for my linen shirt, which wicked moisture away rather than being sodden and soggy as cotton (especially more modern, cheaper short staple cotton as opposed to fine long staples, pimas, batistes, etc). and for my woolen cloak or plaid (worn as an airsaidd ( I KNOW that ain't spelled right!), pulled up over my head....while I moved about fairly dry, others would be soaked & soggy...yay, natural fibres... and woven in the grease would repel water all the more, plus insulate to keep warm in, cold out...and I forget how I kept a li'l jar of lanolin for my hands, and to rub on wool I was spinning by wheel or drop spindle, if it was too dry, or would not spin well and "grab" together (lambswool is a bitch, the fibres are so short)...the lanolin (grease) would also stregthen the strands, like running threads for handsewing thru a beeswax cake first...
Look at ya---making me remember things I'd forgotten over the last five yrs or so!
And ladies---lanolin--sheep grease---does wonders for your hands!
I was right there with ya about divin' head first into a cart load of fabric bolts! Been there, literally done that! I firmly believe that she who dies with the most fabric, wins!
Thanks, and more please!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: amber had very special properties back then and yes its a gift for some one as is some of the silver... I have linen underdress and woollen hangeroc for when I'm going Viking and keep lovely and warm even in Orkney's wind...when the members of public are freezing in their coats and jeans:) add on my double thickness cloack with its greased outer (very swish, split herringbone in brown and cream) and I am toastie:) and dry!! and as for she with the most fabric winning..you should see my stash:) glad you're enjoying it...more soon

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: chapter 21

Wow! Awesome chapter! I felt transported to what a market must have been back there. I love reading William's pov on all the new things he's discovering and how they compare to what he knew from his past life. I'm looking forward to more. *hugs*

Author's Response: thakns for the review and glad you enjoyed...I am such a sad history Buffy, my two favourite periiods. Viking/ dark ages and regency, can't you tell.. then victorian and medeavel, sad for those around me:) lol more soon

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: chapter 21

Grrr, my original review didn't take.... ugh. I loved the haggling that went on! Can't wait for your (hopefully) luvy duvy chapter with William and Buffy!

Author's Response: there will be some lovey dovey just not yet.. they are all crowded into one tent/ booth:) more when my muse allows

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 04:27 pm Title: chapter 21

‘William went over to him and the two men were joined in their mutual love of bright shiny weapons’, HAHAHA, men, shakes head – and to this day, they’re STILL like that. And William feeling jealousy? Giggles, yup – he’s in it so deep he can’t breathe. And the scene with Buffy falling in the cart – hysterical, I was laughing out loud at that one. Seems William’s eyes are now wide open to things beyond what he knew. He keeps seeing the world is a bigger and sometimes better place and yet can’t help but keep comparing it to home. He’s homesick, yes, but I think even he sees this is a far better way to live than where he came from – and of course there’s Buffy as well. Such a wonderfully jammed packed chapter of neat little facts – it’s like I get a history lesson (which I adore history) all wrapped up in a fantastic spuffy story. Simply delicious. And go Buffy – boy, she sure can shop no matter what century, huh? LOL. Looking very, very forward to your next update sweety.

Author's Response: I'm afraid the falling into the cart bit was taken from real life...I looked very silly too... Yes William is in deep and changing, although he doesn't realsie how much yet... more soon and Thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 04:23 pm Title: chapter 21

Yay :) At the moment you're posting the updates very quickly *smile*
Couldn't resist but: Men and her toys, huh? Weapons seem to be very attractive. Well if they are so shiny :)
Thanks for the visit of the market because it read as such a one. It was fun :) Especially with Buffy and Spike being there too ;-)
Unbelievable how valuably the spices once were (most of them at last aren't any longer). It's easy to forget./*end ramble*
Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: pepper was so expensive most people hadn't even heard of it!! a small box would have its own guard.. adn men can't keep away from the shiney toys no matter what century. my husband is drawn like a moth to the flame when the armourer is around... vara

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 20

I love your original characters, even if she's only making a brief appearance Aldis is also a great addition to the story. I found it very realisic that William brought up the Harmony situation, that's just not something he would ever forget. It was good to see him laughing by the end chapter though. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more from aldis later i think, if my muse plays nicely thanks for the review

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 20

Shopping is definitely a cure-all for women of all times and places it seems. William has made himself a place in Connor's hall, ransom or not. He has come to care for every one of them, but now I feel like the other shoe is about to drop. Excellent update, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: yes, you're right there is another shoe...wait and see. glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 20

Ariadne made a nice banner.
The story is looking good. William is certainly changing.

Author's Response: yes, william is changing a lot. and the banner is georgous. I am very grateful to Ariadne

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 20

It's true - shopping does heal all!

This is a great story and I look forward to every update. I'm anxious to see how they get to stay together (they do get to stay together right?) Thanks for all of your hard work with all of the detail!

Author's Response: wait and see about the staying together, but I do know this is a spuffy site and I love a happy ending:) lots more to go before the story is finished

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 20

Awesome update! Still waiting on what honour price Conner will pay to William... sigh, guess I'll just have to wait! Dang it! It was very amusing to see William getting all worked up over what they were willing to pay for his 'little' cut. Can't wait for next update!

Author's Response: more soon I promise. Connor is Rich, think Bill gates, and Buffy richer, so the price will be good. more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 20

Mmm the banner looks good :)
You sure do know that some things are rediscovered like using honey for wounds. Some time ago I saw it in TV, it helped to close wounds that didn't want to close with the modern medicine. Just because the knowledge is old doesn't mean it's bad or worthless. /*end ramble
But the Buffy medicine is priceless (and kept William calm too) :)
Robin will work for Faith, huh? *wonders......* ;-)
~ Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: there are a lot of the old medicines that have been found to work well. Silver as an antiseptic mild anti biotic for one. more on its way

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 20

And another lovely chapter to show how things work with the Norsemen. This particular line, along with Buffy being Wiliams' world, intrigues me... Connor looked at William. The saxon had become more than a hostage in the five months he had been with them, and now he earned his ransom, near enough, in gold, just by saving Connor from a nasty injury. Makes me wonder what he's thinking - either that or I'm reading something into it that isn't there. Can't wait for the next installment sweety. Well done - hugs.

Author's Response: No you're not reading anything that wasn't meant. I love it when people pick up on the tiny clues. more soon, but we have a long way to go before the story ends

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad that even if William was angered by the money thing, he understood at the end, that was just what was supposed to happen, nothing he could have done to prevent it, other than as he said he'd knocked Harmony out so she didn't create more problems. The scene with Aldis was a wonderful addition to the story. I loved her almost as much as I loved the chapter! Looking forward to more!

The banner for the story is gorgeous! *hugs*

Author's Response: more on its way!! glad you enjoyed. Aldis is lovley isn't she. this story has a long way to go

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 05:55 pm Title: chapter 19

I had to chuckle at poor William's hangover, seems like he had himself a good time. And wow did the sparks fly at the Thing. And when the 2 men realized there was no hope for them with Buffy.... divine. I hope William's protection of Connor goes a long way towards their view of him. Anxiously awaiting more sweety. LOVED the chappy. Kisses.

Author's Response: more on the way. thanks for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 03:24 pm Title: chapter 19

Well done, you still got me in your net :) I just loved this :) Now he'll get his scar and the others know he's the one for her ;) Sweet ending! :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: there's a way to go with the story, glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 03:12 pm Title: chapter 18

I liked that story a lot! :) Now I'm off to next chapter :)

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more to come

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 01:10 pm Title: chapter 19

Ooooooo so Graham and his family had to pay high were-geld. He is definitely lucky he only escaped with that! And...awww, Buffy running to William because he was hurt....gah, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy in side! It will be interesting what kind of debt will be owed to William because of his actions in protecting Conner. Maybe he can stay?

Author's Response: Yes Connor will have a debt of honour, and there will be a way to repay later. glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 07:49 am Title: chapter 19

The action that took place at the Thing was definitely intense and exciting. I especially loved the imagery of the William/Buffy interaction during the closing scene. Angst might be on the horizon, but those two are so much in love it just warms my heart when they share sweet moments like that. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: chapter 19

Awesome update. I love how you keep things so historically accurate, it makes the story so much more believable and interesting. I had forgotten that the colors were switched for boys and girls, it seems so absurd now. Great chappy, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: more soon, glad you like the balance of history and story

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 08:06 pm Title: chapter 19

Oh, wow, poor William getting cut. And Buffy was so worried for him.

Author's Response: Buffy showing her feelings in public was a huge thing. and I had to explain that scar:) more soon and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:58 pm Title: chapter 19

Awwwww, that last scene was so beautiful, I love the way she showed her feelings for William, without caring what anyone else might think. *happy sigh* And God, I never imagined things were like that in that time, but I'm loving the history lessons. Fantastic update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed. more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 06:14 pm Title: chapter 19

Poor William has a hang-over? And a really bad one *gg*
Even more brave of him to step in when Maggie tried to kill Connor. And so he got the scar...
Buffy showed where her heard lies when she showed her worries for William so open.
Till next time :)

Author's Response: thanks for the faithful reviewing... more soon.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 07:54 am Title: chapter 18

Hey lady, just wanted to let you know I finally got a chance to read and adore your story, especially all the neat historical things you've included here. It seems like our couple is in love and I do wonder, how they'll wind up together - all that honor stuff aside. Absolutely brilliant story.

Author's Response: wow, what a review, I love your stuff and enjoyed your chapter of shadow. glad you enjoed this story. I've tried to get the balance of history and story right and its nice to know I have suceeded. more soon. and you'll have to wait and see about the how:)

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 03:29 pm Title: chapter 18

Oh, I can see why that's one of your favourite myths - what a lovely story!

Your writing is very visual. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you always get the level of description just right; you paint a picture with your words which I can see so clearly in my head.

More soon please.





Author's Response: can you picture Thor, a giant amongst the Gods being made to wear a dress? so glad you enjoy. more to come and Thanks for your lovely sweet review

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