

Date: 11/07/2007 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Really interesting start. I don't think I've read a story set this far back in time before. Nice to read that personal hygiene was top of a monks list. Fastidisous = bathing once a year!! I want to read on but have to get kids ready for school so I've got to wait. Looking forward to it though.
Author's Response: thanks for the review, hope you like the rest, between motherly duties:)
there was a letter written by one of the saxon queens when she boasted, and i mean boasted that she had only bathed twice in her lifetime, once when she was born and once the day before her wedding!!!
more soon

Date: 11/05/2007 - 02:55 am Title: chapter 4
Yay another update! Oh it's so cute between Tara and Connor (and I guess Harmony really is a silly ditz no matter what universe she's in, right?) Really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see another one
Author's Response: Harmony is the most stupid woman I have ever seen and that's what I needed:)
more soon

Date: 11/04/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: chapter 4
I swore I wasn't going to start another WIP, i'm already ears deep in so many good ones, but how can I not read this one when the premise is so original. I love your characterization of Tara and Connor in this fic, I'm gonna guess that when they reach their destination Buffy will be his sister or cousin, i just hope she's not a bitch. Ok i'm caught in your web and need more soon please.
Author's Response: you'll have to wait and see about Buffy:) like your guesses, more asap

Date: 11/04/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: chapter 4
Ooohh... a little Tara/Connor maybe? :) Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks for the review.

Date: 11/04/2007 - 07:49 pm Title: chapter 4
Wonderful chapter yet again. I love how you transport us to that period of time with your story. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks for the review, more soon

Date: 11/04/2007 - 06:24 pm Title: chapter 4
This is one of my favorite new fics to look forward to! Thanks for being so faithful in updates.
Author's Response: will continue to try and update regularly, RL allowing

Date: 11/04/2007 - 06:11 pm Title: chapter 4
Harmony is playing with fire. The Viking won't ask twice... and maybe forget about the ransom. Silly woman.
Poor Tara (another promise broken) yet she got the cross. For now things are going well for her. But I'm not sure if it will stay this way. ~ Looking forward to more, no time today to write more.
Author's Response: she's lucky they asked once:)!!
thanks as always for your reviews

Date: 11/04/2007 - 06:05 pm Title: chapter 4
Aww, Connor's a sweet boy.
Author's Response: sometimes:)
thanks for the review

Date: 11/04/2007 - 09:09 am Title: chapter 3
I thought that the other woman was Buffy, so you surprised me... Harmony was a good choice though ;) and Tara knows a little healing, that's good! :)
Author's Response: more soon, Harmony had to be the choice she was the only stupid enough to cause that much trouble in an open boat in the middle of the north sea

Date: 11/04/2007 - 08:52 am Title: chapter 2
What a great update! :) I wonder where they will go.... I'm sure that Tara is grateful, he tried to help her, he was very brave :) Off to next chapter! :)
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, this one is close to my heart.
more soon

Date: 11/04/2007 - 07:42 am Title: chapter 3
Hi :)
I just found your fic today, I'm very new at the Spuffy Realm. I'm from Denmark, with a dad in Norway and a whole lot of family in Iceland, and as such the Viking era has been a huge part of my history classes since I was 6 years old.
I think your story so far is really fascinating, with good descriptions and captivating language. I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
Will there be any talk/description of the Viking gods and sagas? I find it's the most fascinating of all the history of the Vikings. I was even named after one :)
Sincerely
Freah
Author's Response: I intend to show a feast and what's a feast without a skald:)
Oh yes, they will not be Christian Vikings. the date line is around 900
thank you so much for your review. I live in a Viking rich area (Orkney) many of the local words are more Norweigan than English. If I can keep you happy I have really got it right.
update soon

Date: 11/04/2007 - 02:24 am Title: chapter 3
I am really really enjoying this story, and it seems as if you know what you're talking about (or else you've got a great imagination) I hope to see more soon! Not in a pushy way but just cos I'm enjoying it lol
Author's Response: push, push. i need it sometimes:)
This period of history is one of my favourites. The way women were treated between Saxon and Viking households, the lifestyle, the freedoms and the culture. they say you should write about what you know so I have:)
thanks for the review. i love your stuff, and it meant a lot seeing your name there.

Date: 11/03/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: chapter 3
Thanks for the link! I'll check it out later.
I wonder if William is right, if there will be a ransom. Maybe they are worth more when staying a slave. I guess there will be a language barrier with the most people. Oh no, good that William knows his Latin, huh? Spared Tara and Harmony some embarrassment.
I see... maybe they'll be lucky after all and ransom will be paid. But Conner took an interest in Tara (why should he asked what William meant to her?) :) Always helpful (taking care of the wound). Whatever happens that should keep Tara safe. ~ Looking forward to more; hopefully I'll read in time next time :)
Author's Response: you're welcome to the link.
more soon

Date: 11/03/2007 - 11:47 am Title: chapter 2
I was late reading because of RL so I missed two chapters; added to favs now so I'll notice the updates earlier. :)
I know now where to put the time line (roughly).
William was brave, going unarmed against the Vikings. Sadly he couldn't save Tara and fell into slavery too. Change of location, huh? On to Northumbria now. :)
Author's Response: going further north than that:) Lindesfarne is in Northumbria, William was brave, and caring. more soon

Date: 11/03/2007 - 09:00 am Title: chapter 3
i love this...do you plan on updating often? Please do.
Author's Response: I plan to update frequently, RL allowing. Chapter 4 is on the way, outline done, just need time to fill in
thanks for taking the time to review

Date: 11/03/2007 - 04:02 am Title: chapter 3
Latin's helpful to know. :) I sense some chemistry between Tara and Connor.
You have a fine descriptive style. Single quotations are used for thoughts, however. You'd want double quotes for spoken language. :)
Author's Response: I will try to do better:)
glad you like it

Date: 11/03/2007 - 03:52 am Title: chapter 2
Poor Tara and William!
Author's Response: its going to get worse in some ways. hope you enjoy the rest

Date: 11/03/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice job setting things up. I can just imagine how they all look.
One thing - "bible" should be capitalized, as it's a book title. The Bible or The Holy Bible are both appropriate.
Author's Response: many thanks for the correction. that one slipped passed my Beta
thanks for the review
Author's Response: The correction has been made

Date: 11/02/2007 - 07:38 pm Title: chapter 3
I loved your explanation at the beginning and the article at the BBC site. It's nice to put a face to the author that's bringing us this wonderful tale. I love the vivid descriptions you're using in this story, it's obvious you really know what you're talking about and that you know how to transmit it to us, the readers, in a way that we can truly understand how things worked back then. I'm liking Connor very much and I hope we will see more of him, perhaps with Tara? *g* Hee, it was fun to read that Harmony, no matter the era, is annoying as only she can be. *giggles* I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: More coming soon. I used to lecture on the woman's roles in Viking society, sounds very good doesn't it but the hardest bit was trying to get people to believe they had a culture at all.
I was really delighted when we were invited aboard The Sea Stallion. It was my birthday as well:)!!!
She is truely a remarkable ship, she would have made the journey from Trondheim in 3 days if she hadn't become becalmed off Orkney, Very rare thing, no wind around the isles.
there will be more of Connor and others.
update soon

Date: 11/02/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: chapter 3
Oh god... poor, poor people on the ship! With Harmony there everyone will be going crazy in two days.
I liked the play between Connor and Tara... perhabs there will be more of them :).
Very good update... I'm looking forward your next one.
Author's Response: Next one soon. Harmony is digging herslef deep in it without realising, just as Tara is protecting herslef without knowing it

Date: 11/02/2007 - 05:51 pm Title: chapter 3
Yay! Great update... can't wait until we meet Buffy!
Author's Response: she's on her way, or is it they are on their way to her

Date: 11/02/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: chapter 3
This is excellent. So different to read about these characters at this time in history. It seems Harmony is the same in any time period though huh?
Great job - looking forward to more.
Author's Response: more when I can get the children off of the computer:)
glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review.

Date: 11/02/2007 - 05:38 pm Title: chapter 3
This is excellent. So different to read about these characters at this time in history. It seems Harmony is the same in any time period though huh?
Great job - looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Harmony is NOT a period name, but she has to be there, hope you enjoy the next chapter

Date: 11/02/2007 - 10:59 am Title: chapter 2
three slaves and a pile of gold and silver would not have been a good haul for a viking sweetie.. denmark and norway are not that close to the british isles that it would be worth it ...
Author's Response: OK you didn't leave any name, so I can't answer you personally. Lindesfarne is somewhere between 5 days and three weeks sail out from Norway, there were Vikings based in Orkney, Shetland Scotland and York in this time period, To go Viking meant to go raiding, The nOrthmen were also traders and business men who traveled as far as Russia and Istambul. there was a distinct trade route up both the east and west coast of the UK during the viking periodThe Isle of Mann, Dublin and The Wirral on the west Coast, York and ther cities on the east. Lindesfarne was hit quite a few times, with the monks seeking shelter with the King of Nothumbria.
Where i live in Britain is two days sailing to Lindesafrne and four days out of bergen, as proved regulaly. a haul like that, gold silver and slaves would be considered a good summer's pay. The Curdale hoard weighs 40 Kg ( about 90 lb) that could be carried easily by two or three men, hack silver was used as currency, and a penny weight (there are two hundred and forty to the LB) would buy you 16 chickens so the Curdale is 345,600 chickens worth, about £ 172800 in today's money:) $that's $3456000 so not bad for a couple of months work.
Slaves were expensive as well and ransoms would have been done in silver.

Date: 11/02/2007 - 01:42 am Title: chapter 2
This is promising! I can´t wait to read more. Whre is Buffy? Is she a Viking? In need of a slave?. ..
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review. hope you enjoy the rest