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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 05:48 pm Title: chapter 52

Oh, good, nothing bad happened to her.

Author's Response: he got her out in time:) glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 08:52 am Title: chapter 52

Oh wow. That was definitely a close call, too close in fact. Believe it or not, when I read how tired Buffy was earlier I had a fleeting thought that she could be pregnant. I remember being that tired in the early stages of pregnancy. That dumb oaf Col... somehow I wonder if that's going to be the last we see of him. He gives me the major creeps. Thanks for the b-day wishes my friend. I absolutely loved the chapter - hugs and kisses.

Author's Response: too close for william's comfort and i'm glad you enjoyed. hugs and kisses

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 06:42 am Title: chapter 52

Whoa! This chapter was action packed, I literally held my breath during the fire scene. *breathes a sigh of relief that Buffy made it out safely* Loved Buffy's revelation, it was definitely a nice surprise. :D Can't wait to read more, should be interesting to see how Col is dealt with for the destruction he caused. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: more, on its way and so is Col thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 - 01:11 am Title: chapter 52

Loved it I almost thought she wouldn't get out. More please soon.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 09:56 pm Title: chapter 52

Baby number two - hooray! What a scary night. I'm glad everyone made it out alright, though. And tying Nordlys with a rope - lol - I guess I just had a mother's instinct about that one. Thanks again for the beautiful writing.

Author's Response: i actually tethered my son when camping, cause he used to wonder of:) and baby no 2 on the way

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: chapter 52

No need to beg me, I love this story too much to not review. And awww, that's too sweet a revelation! I'm pretty sure that's not the last we've heard of Col, although I hope I'm wrong, but at least he'll be gone for now. He did quite a bit of damage. I was holding my breath wondering how he would react to what William said and then during the rescue scene. Very well done, sweetheart!

Author's Response: more from col soon:) glad you liked and more soon

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 05:59 pm Title: chapter 52

A very exciting chapter, and such a dramatic way for Buffy to let William know he's having another child! I hope they deal with running Col off in the next chapter. The description of Buffy and of her people trying to look out for her was great. Another great chapter.

Author's Response: You didn't leave a name, i should imagine buffy wanyed to keep quiet for a little while longer, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2008 - 05:28 pm Title: chapter 52

Bad hole... so that's why Nordlys could escape.
Wow, didn't expect Col to burn the old hall down. Well even if it was kind of an accident but he started the fire anyway.
Relieved to see Buffy is okay and even had news for William. This time he'll see the baby grow, won't miss it again. :))

Author's Response: He gets to see it all this time:) glad you enjoyed and more soon

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: chapter 52

What did I think? Same as usual !
Another lovely descriptive chapter.
Still enjoying this story immensely; your writing just blows me away.

I know it's probably not appropriate to mention here but for some reason I don't get the review box on Ultimate Betrayal (probably my crappy old computer) but I loved that story. I'm torn - so pleased that you finished it but also heart broken that there won't be any more.

Author's Response: what an amazing review, thank you. don't know what happened with UB..the review bit seems fine now. glad you enjoyed that ride as well

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2008 - 01:34 am Title: chapter 52

Every parent's nightmare. At least she was found safe and sound. Perhaps they should put a harness on her and tether her to the clothes line. lol Just kidding. Thank you for the update. Your muse is leading you in the right direction now. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: have you read the next chapter? LOL glad you enjoyed and more soon

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: chapter 52

*relieved sigh* Right now I'm just about as thankful that Nordlys returned home as her parents, but I'm a bit curious over how did she ended up in Andrew's garden. I understood it's fairly far away from the hall. And also the fact that everyone seemed to think the girl was with someone else. I wonder if there was someone behind this disappearance. Anyway, very well done, and I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: all will be explained, but glad you enjoyed, more soon

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 04:41 pm Title: chapter 52

Whoa! Things were very scary there for a moment, I'm so glad Nordlys was safe. And I loved that Andrew was the one that found her, reading Andrew's thoughts after the incident was really heartwarming. :D Fantastic update!

Author's Response: I had that scare with my son once, and i fainted when he came home safe. thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 02:24 pm Title: chapter 52

Wheww, for a minute I thought that Col would get his hands on either Buffy or Nordlys. I think you just described every mother's worst nightmare but what a wonderfully realistic job you did my friend. Loved the chapter sweety and can't wait for more - hugs you tight.

Author's Response: written from experience!! ny son was the wanderer...but Col will return

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 12:23 pm Title: chapter 52

That was kid, I am very familiar with the freak out feeling when you find out your child is missing. More please soon.

Author's Response: been there, done that. my son kept wondering off and geting lost. its what made me go grey

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 10:58 am Title: chapter 52

So happy to see another update on this story. You are doing a tremendous job. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: thank you for the review and the compliment, i'm glad you like the story

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2008 - 10:41 am Title: chapter 52

Ah... the 'normal housework'. Without a washing machine not so easy back then. (William is gone? I hope Buffy will be save regarding that idiot.) Seems he did with Nordlys now gone. This sounds very bad.
*sniff* Glad that went well. Cute how Nordlys was found by Andrew.
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: glad you liked nad thanks for the review

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 51

A beautiful descriptive chapter as always.

Thank you for the taking the time to write and share with us all.

Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: thank you, there will be more i promise....

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 51

Ooh, I have the feeling this Col will stir some trouble in William's hall. Doesn't seem like the kind to take things like these lightly. I loved the chapter, sweetie! And I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!

Author's Response: thanks for the review, gld you enjoyed and more soon

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 51

Awwwwwwww, thank you hon, it did cheer me up. And funny how I emailed you just the other day to say I was looking forward to the next update and WHAM, here it is. They're really putting a lot of hard work into their place and its starting to show so well. Only have Col to worry about, GULP! Hope he's not too much trouble. Lovely chapter as always darling - hugs you tight.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and glad i could make you smile at the moment...more soon hopefully

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 51

It's nice that things are progressing so well for William and Buffy, gotta say Col is making me a bit nervous though. Loved the chapter! :D

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing and glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter 51

Loved the routine, but I sense trouble brewing on the horizon.

Author's Response: there is trouble on the way for our couple, thanks for the review

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 51

I get a bad feeling off Col. If he's a freeman and can leave whenever he likes, right? I hope he does, and soon. He's going to be a thorn in their side. At least the other workers have had enough of him and are willing to stand up for Buffy and Spike. Wonderful update, as always, thanks.

Author's Response: even if he is free there are restrictions on his movement, and yes there is trouble onthe way, more soon

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 51

hee, the Abbess is named Edith.

Nice chap.

Author's Response: I couldn't resist:) glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 51

So the new hall will - hopefully - soon be ready. Neat, having a stream to keep everything cool.
But uh-huh... Col is bad news. He's only waiting till he can hit.
But good to see the others so supportive of Buffy and William :)
Enjoyed the update! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: more on its way soon, glad you enjoyed and yes Col is bad news

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2008 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 50

Of course I want to review ;) I guess they will have to deal with some people, people like Col, and I hope everything will turn out well, with the hall and the animals.

Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoyed. there will be an update soonish i hope. still things to come and i hope you enjoy them

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