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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 26

Yeah. They just need to have sex, stat.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapters 24 & 25

The movie was loads of fun. Why are these two not flinging themselves onto the nearest bed and having their wicked way with one another?

Oh, yeah, #10.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

Whee! Suntan lotion and massages and spankings, oh my!

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

I really enjoyed their getting to know one another, and Buffy pretty much having a porno soundtrack going through her head whenever she's in Spike's presence just cracks me up.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 21

I love the sharp, funny dialogue in this, and when the characters get serious they're still perfectly in voice. It's a delight to read.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 20

How can Spike possibly show any restraint after that blowjob admission? I admire his resolve.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 19

Cooking as foreplay was delightful.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

Buffy imperiously calling Spike Ken and making him model shorts was hilarious, and then you get them tussling and touching and my mind goes to a very happy place.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 16

And the sexual tension just keeps on getting tenser. I love drunk!Willow. She's so cute and nosy.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ooh, I loved Buffy defending Spike and putting Dru into a rage.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 14

Buffy getting Spike's car detailed was cute, and had nothing to do with not wanting to be seen in it otherwise, right?

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 13

You're building the tension beautifully.

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Date: 11/28/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapters 11 & 12

Perfect Cordelia voice, and the way she keeps referring to Spike as "It" is both awful and hilarious.

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love drunk Spike ham handedly hitting on Bouncy, fluffy Buffy. He's going to feel dreadful in the morning, isn't he?

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 9

Excellent tension building under all the seething and insults.

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love Xander and Anya in this. This exchange made me laugh out loud:

"What kind of a name is Buffy?" Anya wondered.

"Rich," Xander said.

"Oh," said Anya, considering it for her first-born." Anya contemplating naming her first born after some random rich person is delightful.

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapters 6 & 7

Great set up. Buffy all alone and Spike heartbroken and at loose ends with her forgotten cell phone...

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapters 4 & 5

This was hilarious: "I didn't get your name."

"Buffy."

He laughed, "I'm serious." She was glaring at him. "Oh. So are you."

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

It was all snappy and snarky until that last line. So, he really was trying to kill himself.

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Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: Chapters 1 & 2

I just love this story. Big, mean, drunk Spike intent on killing himself only to kill Buffy's car instead. Their dialogue is a delight.

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Date: 11/26/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 34

Excellent chapter! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

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Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 34

Oh and I meant last time I didn't read this story before... not the twist, to be exactly.
Who had thought that Cordelia telling Buffy's secret would lead to some closure for Buffy now :)
For threatening Angel Cordy made it up again ;-)

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Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 34

Oh that was good.

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Date: 11/26/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 33

Oh that was good.

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Date: 11/26/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh that does not look good for Buffy and Spike.

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