

Date: 11/05/2007 - 07:02 pm Title: 1
This is an excellent start! I can't wait to read more. There is no way to tell that English isn't your first language here...really!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Keep reading, it makes me keep on writing!:P
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: 3
Liked :-D
Love the banter so far. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I've already written 2 more chapters, but I wanna work on them a bit more!
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: 2
I am so happy that I have made you want to post the other chapters today instead of later. I am really loving it so far. Spike and Buffy are being so cute.
I must say again that your English is great.
Author's Response: I really can't thank you enough... I've had this story on my mind for a while but thought I couldn't get it on paper... or PC-screen... LOL
I'm so happy right now!!!
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: 3
heya, just started reading your story and finding it great.
just wondering if you had found a beta yet? your language is fantastic with only a few odd bits of grammer that are off. what is your first language?
the story line is really interesting and i like the twists.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you-thank you-thank you! (maybe I should say it once more... just to make sure I've gotten the point across:P)THANK YOU!!!
LOL! I've never dreamed of having my language described as fantastic! *huge grin on my face right now*!
I actually haven't found a beta yet, but I keep my fingers crossed. My first language is Greek. Thanks for liking my story!:)
Author's Response: Just realized I forgot my XXX to you!
So there you go:P
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: 3
Wow, I love the flirting that Spike and Buffy are doing while Xander doesn't even realize was is going. That is so like Xander.
I had to laugh at Buffy getting caught pleasuring herself. So, I take it Spike is a virgin but tries not to show it since he got all shy and blushed at Buffy on what she was doing. I like shy William/spike but at the same time Spike who is confidence. So, I think you are writing spike perfect.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: OK, now I'm blushing! Thanks for saying so, it means the world to me that people like what I've come up wit hand that I've actually managed to write it down in a way that makes sense:P
Thank You,
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: 1
See, I told you don't worry about your English. My first sentence in the last doesn't even make sense. I meant that I can already tell that this is going to be one of my favorite stories since it has an older buffy to younger spike. I also like stories where Spike and Xander are friends.
Yeah, I think I need to go work on my English now. LOL
Author's Response: I think your English is just fine, honey! thanks again for your kind words... they made me decide to post another two chapters today, to get you well and truly hooked:P and then start the weekly posting!
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: 1
I think this will one of my new favorites. My favorite stories are stories of a older Buffy and younger Spike. I prefer them to older spike and younger buffy. I think it is because i like the idea of a hot young guy being with a older experience woman. But something tells me that this Spike is no virgin. LOL
Please do continue and don't worry about your English. It sounds great to me.
Author's Response: Thank you! you've made my week!:P As to Spike's virginity, or lack thereof, you'll have to wait a bit for that *evil smile*.
Well you know Spike, anyway, he's a fast learner (hint!!!)
LOL
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Date: 11/05/2007 - 02:38 pm Title: 1
Great start... can't say anything for grammar because English isn't my first language too. But I think you did well.
Please update weekly :) I love younger William/older Buffy! Hope that don't make me a perv :)
Author's Response: Thanx for your kind words! ...and for being my first reviewer EVER:-P
I've actually already written a couple more chapters, so I'll probably be posting sooner than that! If you're a perv then so am I, I guess we'll have to live with it! LOL
The heavy Spuffy lovin' will begin a bit later on, but I promise to try and make it worth your while!
Thanx again,
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