[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 11:36 am Title: 33
Aw, that's a terrible dream. And the flashback too. God, I can't believe people would do that. It kind of hit me a little harder than I expected since I just found out a friend of mine has been raped by his own father for many years. That's just sick and twisted. But you wrote it good, not too much gross details and all that you know. Looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response: Have to admit, writing that scene sickened me. It's absolutely awful that there are people out there who would actually do things like that. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 10:27 am Title: 33
Yeah, I can see why that would be hard, but you did it well. I have a feeling about what might happen next. Spike is probably going to end things with her in order to keep her safe from Ethan, but that never really works out. I hope that bastard gets what's coming to him. Monsters like that don't deserve to live.
Author's Response: We'll just have to see if you're right then. ;) And I'm sure Ethan will get what he deserves eventually. :) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2008 - 12:34 am Title: 32
Ooh I hope Spike does kill Ethan! A violent, gruesome, painfully excrutiating death might be fitting enough for the slimy bastard. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: He sure would deserve that, wouldn't he? ;) Thank you so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2008 - 05:30 pm Title: 32
Spike should warn Buffy. After all Ethan threatened to hurt her to get back at Spike. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: He really should. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2008 - 05:31 am Title: 32
Amazing chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:53 pm Title: 32
ERR I HATE ETHAN, WHY DID HE HAVE TO COME BACK! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that he left without really hurting spike, though i really wanted spike to hit him back. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that ethan either goes to jail or dies soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon, thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:51 am Title: 32
wow Pet. awsome story. cant' wait for more. spike really should tell Buffy about Ethan, but i can understand why he's not. please more soon. i hope everything turns out okay in the end.
Author's Response: Thank you daisy, so happy you liked it! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 11:17 pm Title: 32
Well done, but very scary.
Author's Response: Good. :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 09:24 pm Title: 32
Okay, glad that Ethan left. I know Spike is looking through the eyes of av victimized child, but, even though, the voice in my head is screamin', "STUPID!" He should know by now that he shouldn't keep what happened from Buffy. For one, she loves him & can help him through it. And two, he's putting her in danger. If she doesn't know that there's someone out there out to harm her, then she can't be prepared for it. I know his decision is needed for angst and to progress the story, but ARGH! (BTW, if you can't tell by my review, awesome chapter! Inspired a rant, which only comes from writing that evokes passion. Great job!)
Author's Response: *lol* I love a good rant. I agree with you; keeping this from Buffy wouldn't be Spike's smartest decision. Thanks for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 01:00 pm Title: 32
Wow, this was an awesome chapter! I hope you know you're a wonderful author. You captured every single feeling Spike felt during Ethan's visit. Incredible! And glad the writer's block is over, I could need some inspiration too ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I really hope you'll get that inspiration you need to keep writing on your wonderful stories. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:21 pm Title: 32
Oh my GOOOOOOOOD, of COURSE Buffy has to know!!! How can she be ready to defend herself otherwise??? Or help him???
You know what you are (hint: starts with an 'e', lol) so no need to repeat myself :-P
No more, please?
*hugs*
Author's Response: *lol* Think I know what you mean. Thanks for your review, honey! *hugs back*
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:06 pm Title: 32
If Ethan can't have children, Spike isn't his son too? (I can't remember if that was mentioned before.)
I'm glad that Ethan is gone with leaving not too much damage behind.
I think Buffy will notice... but we'll see. Not telling Buffy is a bad decision though....
Author's Response: Ethan's not Spike's real dad, only his stepfather since he's married to Dru. It was mention in the first chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 10:38 am Title: 32
Oh Spike! The poor baby. Buffy absolutely needs to know. That will not go well. :(
Update soon please-I need it!
Author's Response: Will do. :) And yes, she needs to know. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 10:15 am Title: 32
Oh no! Stupid Ethan! And, not telling Buffy can't be good at all. He's supposed to be letting her in, not pushing her away and keeping things from her. So proud of him for standing up to Ethan though.
More soon please!
Author's Response: Yeah, keeping things at this point would be of the bad. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 09:02 am Title: 32
how sick can ethan get? loved the update and glad your muse is back. more soon please
Author's Response: Absolutely! :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 08:45 am Title: 32
Oh, not telling Buffy can't be for the good. She needs to know for so many reasons.
So proud of Spike standing up to Ethan. That was a huge step in itself. :)
Happy news about the muse (look I made a terrible rhyme! lol)! Does this mean more soon? :)
Author's Response: *lol* Of course. :) Thanks for reviewing, hope you'll like what's coming as well.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 08:02 am Title: 32
great chapter!! Keep 'em coming kiddo!! You always leave me hungry for more!! :)
Author's Response: So happy you're still with me, thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2008 - 06:54 am Title: 31
Absolutely great chapter.
I liked how S tried to stand up for himself, but failed, which really isn't surprising. I can't wait to see what will happen when B comes back. Will S drive her away or... Well, I can't wait.
Author's Response: Thank you, so happy you liked it. :) You'll find out more soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 06:46 am Title: 31
Don't let Ethan hurt him... Please?
Author's Response: Not making promises I can't keep. *evil grin* Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2008 - 05:53 am Title: 31
I just got the chance to come back to the latest update and review! I am so happy that Xander is trying to make some type of headway with Buffy and I hope that friendship works out.
I am currently wishing a terrible and violently painful death for one Ethan Rayne and I hope that Spike is the one to dole out the torture. Great story, still loving it and very eager for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you'll like the next chapter as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2008 - 06:59 am Title: 31
uhhh...This is very bad thing....O.o I don't know if i wanna read the next chapter or just jump over it. Can you kill Ethan in a very painful way? Pleaseeee T.T
Author's Response: I'll think about it. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2008 - 02:38 am Title: 31
Awesoome chapter, i can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 - 11:38 pm Title: 31
Kick his ass, Spike! He's a miserable old man, you can take him. I really hope Spike gives the bastard what's coming to him, I don't wanna see him get hurt anymore by that loser. I wonder just what Buffy will walk into.
Author's Response: We'll see about that. Soon. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: 31
ERRR HES SUCH A DISGUSTING BASTARD, WHY CANT HE DIE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that he threatened spike with hurting buffy. i really hope that buffy comes back soon and saves him from ethan and that buffy stands up to that bastard. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next. THANX
Author's Response: He deserves to die, doesn't he? :) I'm so happy you still like it, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: 31
Damn! My mind is screaming "Hurry Buffy!" I know she'll figure out who Ethan is as soon as she sees Spike's reaction to him. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Will try. Thank you so much for your review!
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