[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 07:40 pm Title: 73
AHHHH IM SO HAPPY THAT IT FINALLY HAPPENED!! i LOVE this fic and am so happy that u updated. im glad that they both enjoyed it and that everything worked out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so glad you liked it! More coming asap. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 06:24 pm Title: 73
i loved his chapter:).... and as for you thinking everyone will hate this chapter i thinks thats way off the mark..... you wrote it beautifully and i can't wait to see what you have in store for the couple next:):)
keep up the amazing work:)
Author's Response: I'll do my best. :) Thank you so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: 73
Glad to see neither Buffy broke Spike nor did he freak out. Well done, your chapter. Sad to see the story come to an end.
Author's Response: Not over quite yet though. ;) Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: 73
OK your mantra should be "I must have more faith in my writing". You have absolutely nothing to worry about. So Spike is usually written as a sex god (and boy would I like him in my bed) but your Spike is normal and lovely. I think you have tackled an incredibly difficult subject with enormous sensitivity and for this Spike and Buffy this chapter was (if I can use the same word once again) perfect.
Author's Response: You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 02:10 pm Title: 73
ho dont you worry so much!
the chapter is perfect!!
the sex scene is good it describe how spike is feeling very good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so happy to hear that you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 01:41 pm Title: 73
that sex scene was amazing. nothing wrong with it
YAY!!! They finally did it!
can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Amazing? Really? Wow. Can't tell you how happy I am to hear that. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 01:25 pm Title: 73
well i think you wrote this sex scene great and its always fun to read a spuffy sex moment but anyway please update again soon
Author's Response: Update as soon as I can. :) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: 73
I thought it was perfect! It was sweet and romantic and a little bit awkward, exactly how it should be. I doubt Spike would all of a sudden become this ravenous confident sex machine, so I thought it was played perfectly right. :-) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 12:32 pm Title: 73
Sex scenes are the one thing I'm worst at, I always hate writing them, so I know where you're coming from. Although, you did a pretty good job of it. All I have to say is, yes, finally...lol! So, I take it this story is almost coming to an end. Wow, over 73 chapters. I applaud you for even being able to do that. I never could.
Author's Response: You too? Thought I was the only one. :) Glad you liked it. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 12:31 pm Title: 73
Written quite nicely... and glad Spike did not freak out... with any type of memories of the past..
Enjoyed..
Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2008 - 10:18 am Title: 72
OK, not calling you evil again. Now on you'll be known as "The Tease". This was uber sweet and cute, but you're such a tease for leaving it there. Again.
More please!
*hugs*
Author's Response: *lol* Was actually posting next chap as you reviewed this one, I think. Hope you'll like what's about to come... :) Thanks hon!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: 72
SO CUTE!! i LOVE this fic and am so happy that u updated. im glad that theyre taking it slow and that theyre ready. i hope everything goes well and that they end up happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: I just posted next chapter. I'm very glad you think it was cute, thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 05:00 pm Title: 72
Excellent writing! I think you're doing a wonderful job! can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! Next chapter is up, enjoy! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 10:24 am Title: 72
Feels very realistic, liked it a lot. Do I need to say I look forward to next chapter? I don't think so, you should know it by now ;)
Author's Response: *lol* Still it's very nice to hear. :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 05:40 am Title: 72
I absolutely love the pace of this story its so nice to have characters that care and want to look after each other. this is my first review but i love the whole story, please carry on its fab!!!!
Author's Response: Really happy you like it, thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 04:15 am Title: 72
Amazing chapter, I could picture it all in my head. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2008 - 01:51 am Title: 72
Love that they're taking it slow & communicating with one another by both touch & voice. You've done a brilliant job of capturing a very beautiful moment in this equally beautiful relationship.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! So happy you think so!
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 11:47 pm Title: 72
Seriously? You're serious right now?! You're really going to leave it there!?!? That's just evil and cruel on sooooo many levels!
PLEASE update soon because I am DYING to know what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: This soon enough? *lol* Thanks so much for leaving me a review!
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 11:17 pm Title: 72
i had a feeling it wasn't gonna happen this chapter...will be waiting for the next one
Author's Response: Hopefully you won't be disappointed. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 11:01 pm Title: 72
Too short! Totally left me on the edge of my seat. Those two are just so sweet. It is so lovely that he's finally getting to a good place where he can open up like that.
Author's Response: Glad you liked, thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: 72
that was awsome but your evil for leaving it hanging like that . i need more please update again very soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, next chap is up. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: 72
OMG you really are evil aren't you?
:oP
Author's Response: Yup! *lol*
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 06:19 pm Title: 72
You have me on the edge of my seat! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Just updated. :) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2008 - 06:12 pm Title: 72
oooo again with the evilness of leaving us in the middle of a very heated spuffy moment:P
update again soon hehe
Author's Response: Just posted another chap, seeing how my muse seems to be on the roll. :) Thanks so much for your review!
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