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Reviewer: Ianto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 5

Awsome! More please!

Author's Response: Your wish is my command.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

OK once again.. because the first time it didn't go!
First of all... a pretty good update.
I'm curios how Buffy will answer. If she really understand what she is and how Spike will be around her after that. Is he going to dominate her or let himself dominate. Hey... how about equal rights :)?
At the end... I can't say it enough... I love your writing. Please write as much as you can.. it doesn't matte for me who is dominating whom.. I love all sort of domination :).

Author's Response: Yes I can see that :) don't worry there will still be plenty of battles between the sexes before they snuggle down as old marrieds.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

This was a fabulous chapter. Seeing both of them begin to soften towards each other, however minimal was a very pleasant development - and of course the part where he fed her was hilarious - at least to me. It's the small moments like that as well as their hand holding while they rest that were truly touching and made me smile. And oh boy - loaded question for Spike to ask, but - dare I say - when they discover what she is, he may see her more as an equal. Ok, maybe he'll shit himself at first and be angry, but it's like the flu - he'll get over it. LOL. Can't wait for the next update - such a refreshing storyline.

Author's Response: Unless its demonflu then he may never get over it (joke!). Pleased that you found the feeding scene funny - I never quite know if anyone reading this shares my sense of humour. Will Buffy do her usual turtle impression at Spike's question? We'll just have to see ;)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved the introduction of the new characters. And I'm glad Buffy and Spike are going to be okay. The closing scene was great, I enjoyed the Spike/Buffy interaction. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much Midnightgirl.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5

Fab chapter. Really love this world that you are creating, weaving in all the parts of the Buffyverse that we know and love and a tribble reference!! I loved the way you described Buffy's imaginary sister. This isn't a sister relationship it's her relationship with Spike. I'm so looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Pleased you liked the tribble reference - thought I might have a bunch of Trekkies descending on me from a great height for that. Perceptive comment about her really describing her relationship with Spike too. thanks.

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 5

I just found this story, I actually like it a lot. Refreshingly different, I'm very excited to see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far and that it isn't too far fetched for you.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 5

just the update i have been waiting for and it was wonderful. please hurry and update again soon, i can't wait to see how the newlyweds get on.


Author's Response: Thanks dee. More soon.

Reviewer: angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 5

I want to know how the hell he's dealing with those patterned markings.

Author's Response: Am sure that they'll be back with a vengeance soon - I thought I'd give him a break while they were both at death's door.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5

Oooh, so he's figured out she's not completely human... i wonder what his response will be when he learns that she has super strength and all that. Great update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hmm.. now will Buffy come clean or won't she?

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh,why do I have a feeling Buffy's about to get very defensive? As always, lovin' this. It's so creative. I get gloomy when I think of it ending. I just hope you have more of this caliber in your arsenal.

Author's Response: Don't get gloomy Raspy_Luv I'm working on the next chapter now. Hope it meets your expectations.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 5

Things are already deepening between them and now after a tentative bonding through shared danger and illness, he actually asks his first direct question. “What are you?” Well there’s a loaded question tagged after the “You can’t be human,” Not sure this Buffy’s going to like the implication that she might be alien.



I’m really looking forward to the next instalment of this fascinating story. I can’t tell you how much I’ve enjoyed what I’ve read so far…or how long I’ve waited for a story just like this. It’s really caught my imagination and filled a Spuffy/sci-fi hole that I didn’t until now realise was there. Thank you, thank you for bringing two of my favourite genres together. YAY, for you!!! More soon…please.


Author's Response: It was Liliaeth's challenge that set me off on this journey into outer space / fantasy land - I'm just glad that I nabbed it first. Perhaps others will join in - Spike the Barbarian anyone?

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awesome story, so glad I gave it a chance. You have a quirky style, and I love it!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you gave it a read too - and we Brits like being quirky sometimes :)

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow! What a tense ending to that chapter, especially after all that building domestic harmony. Your description of this world you’re creating is just taking my breath away…What a great story!! Really I can’t tell you just how much I’m enjoying this.

Author's Response: Thank you Greyangel - coming from you that's a compliment.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, I like the turn of your mind. An extra magical incentive to thoroughly satisfy his new mistress!!! LOL, yep just love that. And again with the decorated hands, another Arabian touch. The details and your story-telling is just lovely!

Author's Response: Funny how the flipside to utilitarian earthships turned out to be something out of the Arabian nights - strange how the mind works sometimes. Thanks greyangel.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, I just love all the great details...the cloth of gold...the red ribbon. The wedding almost Arabian in description. Just lovely...

Author's Response: Did wonder if I'd turned into an interior designer at one point . Glad it wasn't too OTT for you.

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter as usual :) I woder how he'll react!

Author's Response: Better than she will I think :)

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: One

Oh God, I just love this. It’s soooo different and in such a good way. I’m a hopeless sci-fi geek and am picking up on traces of Dune—Star Ship Troopers and my all time favourite—Farscape. (God, I loved that show and was bitterly upset when it went under…sigh!) And I’m loving this too!

Author's Response: My personal favourites are Bladerunner and Lexxx. Enjoyed Farscape too except for that greedy frogmuppet! You're right there are definite traces of Dune and am sure there will be elements of other SciFi novels/films as they filter through my subconcious. Glad you like.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

love the way you have kept the names the same but changed their spelling, it makes them unrecognisable.
wonderful story, lovely chapter. looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: I've read enough fantasy novels to know that all alien races have exotic names so I had some fun with that.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love it especially with the twist of Dawn. More please soon.

Author's Response: Good that you liked Dawn. More for you as soon as I can.

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 08:05 pm Title: One

Enjoyed the update. : )

Author's Response: Thank you DawnofMe.

Reviewer: vbloveswb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

I like the basis of this story and think its rather cool please continue with it.
10 out of 10

Author's Response: Wow - don't think I've had 10 out of 10 for anything before (well not for maths anyway). Thanks for the brilliant mark :)

Reviewer: Release_the_Sexy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Heehee* I'll wake up next to a pair of yellow eyes any time!!!

I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy wakes back up or when Spike starts to question her strength or the markings start driving them both a lil crazy

PLEASE more!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yellow or Blue - I wouldn't object either. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jewelsb4dawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful I just love this it has everything I cant wait for more

Author's Response: Everything? :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful story! I'm so happy that I found it! The idea of the arranged marriage is great and surprisingly good at showing how Buffy and Spike acted around each other when forced to work together on the show. I can't wait to see more interaction between them, you're handling it beautifully and still being realistic to their characters. I wonder just what he'll think of the monster in Buffy that the forest and his demon are getting in touch with? Will drowning bring it out even more?
I was a little confused about after the dream; did they sleep together or did she grab his hand during her dream, or was Spike trying to restrain her from thrashing around? The dream itself was rather telling and fun to read.
Wonderful story and I really hope you update soon. How will they react to each other now, especially when Buffy knows he could have let her be killed and not broken the truce? I can't wait!

Author's Response: Hi Ann. Thanks for the lovely long review. As to the dream - it was just that - but Spike is connecting to her visions somehow. The handholding is an unconcious need to join - but as yet that's all they've done (hold hands that is).

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm so glad I took a chance on reading this story. It's really excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I think a few people approached the synopsis with some hesitation. Pleased that you like so far though.

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