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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 04:34 pm Title: Crushin

Well that wasn't the studying that Buffy had in mind, that's for sure. ;-)

Author's Response: *eg* it gets better!

Reviewer: Valery Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 03:29 pm Title: Crushin

I like the story so far but the Spike/Dawn/Joyce friendship is too much for my taste. In the four chapters that I have read the story is repeating the same structure again and again. Maybe is time for a change. Good luck

Author's Response: i'm working on it! i just want Spike to have some love after all the crap he got on the show. and Dawn and Joyce liked Spike. i'd rather build it up before i get to the fighting. like i said WIP!!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Today's Lesson

Whoa, full on Spike lecture! Wondering what the payment will be and if the big bad is as bad as he says. Hoping Buffy starts changing her tune about Spike.

Author's Response: yea, but was it too much? did u like it?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2008 - 04:34 am Title: Today's Lesson

Seems it wasn't only Dawn that got a lesson this day. I wonder how Buffy will decide regarding Spike's help.

Author's Response: workin' on it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 08:24 am Title: Normal Buffy Day

If you know what you want to do with the story ("storyline") I would change the summary. It doesn't say much about the story.
I'll check out the next chapter too :) Not much to say about because I don't know what will happen (what this one is about).

Author's Response: i'm gonna do that. i've just been working out a few kinks. did u like the first ch. though?

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