

Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:03 pm Title: Off Course
You amaze and humble me with the beauty of this piece. Although it totally satisfies as a one shot you still leave me wanting more. I'll keep my fingers crossed that you decide to continue.

Date: 01/28/2008 - 04:18 am Title: Off Course
I really, really, really liked this! Wish it had gone like this in the show. The beginning caught my attention right away and held it right until the end. Of course I'm hoping for a sequel, but don't force anything forward.
Absolutely great! I'll definitely check out more of you're work as soon as I've time.

Date: 01/27/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: Off Course
OMG, this, *sigh* this was really, really good. I enjoyed it to no end. Have I mentioned just how much I miss your writing? Well, I know I have but I'll say it again. I miss your writing, Sue. I hope you can do a sequal, even if it's only one chapter.

Date: 01/26/2008 - 05:04 pm Title: Off Course
Awe :) Beautiful gift! I enjoyed reading it.
(PS: Is this the end? It's marked unfinished. I would love to read more but I guess it's finished.)
It was good to read you again; I've missed that.

Date: 01/26/2008 - 02:25 pm Title: Off Course
wooow, this was beautiful!!!
i love it!! and of course you most continue, a fan fic whit a happy star?? this it's so unusual... but i love it!! i'm gonna be waching for updates, don't disappointments me.... please

Date: 01/26/2008 - 10:33 am Title: Off Course
I really enjoyed that, suspense and all and I think you shoud continue :)

Date: 01/26/2008 - 10:20 am Title: Off Course
Here is Buffy's epiphany: Spike the vampire sees her, warts and all, but still he loves, sees beauty and good in her. To Buffy, these warts were exactly that, she felt ugly and dark-hearted, capable of cruelty and deceit. In Off Course, you have the shadow lifting from her eyes as she sees him, truly and instead of running, as usual, she settles in with her new thoughts, becomes comfortable with them, and shares her new-found affection and appreciation of him, with him.
This is undoubtedly a much better ending than in canon.

Date: 01/26/2008 - 09:37 am Title: Off Course
Love it! thanks for sharing this with us :)

Date: 01/26/2008 - 07:51 am Title: Off Course
I have happy tears in my eyes!!!
This was so beautiful and so the way things should have been (would have been if Joss wasn't a sick-sick little man! lol)
I loved this and will be waiting for more! Happy Birthday to Slaymesoftly and a great big hug to you!
Thank you!
XXX
Sotia
PS. *keeps fingers crossed for 'Buyer Beware' :P