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Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 03:57 am Title: Damaged Goods

Oh dear LORD! Spike seriously needs to keep his wandering ass dick in his pants and not in the crotch of some nameless bimbo! GAH! Ok, calmed down now, enough of the rant. Thankfully, he seems to finally understand the impact his skirting around and that his feelings for Buffy might just run a tad deeper than wanting to boink her and move on.

On the other hand, Buffy seems to have taken her fairly intelligent brain and firmly planted it right up her ass. Geez Louise! I seriously hope that she does refrain from doing anything stupid....namely, Angel. I have faith in her so far, and you as well. LEt's keep it that way! LoL!

Looking foward to more! Job well done!

Author's Response: LMAO - indeed he does, but at least hhe's starting to use his other brain now, giggles. Yup - Buffy isn't aware of Angelus' intentions at all, she's blinded by her head being up that spinchter muscle big time. But alas, there isn't to much to worry about - it's light angst here, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review darling - you really got me chuckling. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 02:27 am Title: Damaged Goods

Nerghhh! I could've sworn I left you a review last night... but when I checked today for your reply, it's nowhere to be seen!

Never mind... I'll repeat what I said.

LOL at Harmony! Sloppy seconds indeed. :D And you gave me a warm, "awww" feeling when Spike finally contemplates the word "relationship". 'Bout damn time, you daft bleached head! *pats his head affectionately*

Also, your endnote can't help but remind me of In The Army Now. Sort of like the Oz + Willow + Spike + Main Course - Dessert = Spuffy. Hey, lookie! Maths! :D

Thank goodness you've updated early... I ran out of couch material to chew on. *g* Keep up the great work, it's fantastic. :D

Author's Response: Oh wow, you're like the 3rd or 4th person that's said they had trouble leaving a review, huh. Don't know what's up with that but glad you got one through to me sweety. Giggles - Harmony as sloppy second, I couldn't resist, I simply couldn't. Lmao over the equation from IAN. Yeah, although you might wanna throw in some more things like divide and mulktiply - when it's time, *winks*. Sorry for your couch honey, hee hee, more to come this weekend, promise and thanks for the awesome review, you rock! Luv ya.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 01:48 am Title: Damaged Goods

Love how spike is dealing with this whole scenario and I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you like how Spike tried to handle things - and he is thinking now about the ramifications of things, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon - smoochies.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 01:24 am Title: Damaged Goods

I have a feeling there will be some tears and more angst coming our way. I'd love for Buffy to overhear one of the conversations between Will and Angel so she can see what Liam is really like.

But bad Spike for sleeping around, again. Ya gotta love that ol' double standard.

Author's Response: Well, maybe a little, yes, but I'll go mild on it - nothing ike the type of angst that was in TE... that took too much outta me. Glad you liked it hon and I'll of course be updating this weekend. Thank you so much for the review - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 10:41 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Ugh, Angel is so annoying. Loved the Spuffy moment after she came home from her date. But Spike is never going to get anyway if he doesn't stop sleeping with other woman. Plus, the way he treats every woman except Buffy like trash is sooooo not endearing. Another great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Isn't he though? SUch an ass - but it's fun to write him like that. Glad you enjoyed the spuffy moment, if only Spike knew just HOW much he affects her, but then again, it's a good thing he doesn't. He's learning though, especially after talking with Angel - it got him thinking in the right direction. So glad you liked the update hon and thanks for the awesome review - huggles.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Damn it , tina! she's gonna go out with lunkhead again? Can't wait for her to find out what a piece of dirt he is. Glad spike is starting to see that emulating Angel is not what a man should be. Great update , can't wait for this wkend.

Author's Response: *ducks head*, yeah, she is - she's a weeee bit blind right now - been outta the loop in the dating scene for too long. But the upside is that b/c of Angelus, it has gotten Spike thinking in the correct direction - as soon as he figures it out, lol. He's clueless in the emotions dept, but he'll get there. Glad you enjoyed tha update hon - thanks a mil for the review - smooches to you.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Good chappy. Will be interesting to read about Spike's revelation. However, I think Buffy's actually the harder nut to crack here. Wonder what will bring her thoughtful moment? hummmmmm Oh yeah, BOO Angel!!

Author's Response: And you got it right, very, very right. Of the two, Buffy will be the harder nut to crack - particularly b/c of her past. As for what will bring her around, well that's simple, it's Spike, but how will she handle it when she does figure things out for herself is the real question, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review my darling and yes, booooooooooooo on Angel, hee hee. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 08:10 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Ooo, Buffy's mean when she fights. Any lesser ego would have wilted away by now. At least Spike realizes she isn't some dame he can wham bam thank you, ma'am to. She should be loved. And he's dangerously close to saying that word to himself in his head.

Gonna be a race to who punches Angelus first, Spike, or Buffy. The prick is bound to slip up soon.

Author's Response: Yes she is, she takes low blows for sure, but lucky for Spike he isn't too put off by it, it simply makes him want her more, *winks*. Good thing too, b/c it will help him to change. Thanks for the great review sweety - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 07:27 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Could there maybe be oil involved?

Author's Response: Giggles - sure, why not, hehehhe. Thanks for the review sweeta - hugs.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Damaged Goods

waiting with bated breathe for update :)

Author's Response: YAY, glad you liked it hon, more to follow soon- thanks. Smooches.

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Gah! You're driving me crazy. In a good way, LOL. Is Buffy going to sleep with Angel? I hope she doesn't, just because he's only going after her to go after her. Spike's going after her to go after her AND becuase he acutally likes her. Huge diff, LOL. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hahhaahha, I know, I'm prolonging the spuffy luvin, but it has to be. Of course when they do get together, you can bet it will be more than magical and all with the stars behind the eyelids orgasms, *winks*. Yah, Spike really does like her now that he's gotten to know her, and the more he does, the more he wants her - he's never been in this type of situation, so its a definite lesson for him in patience accompanied by growing pains. THanks for the review darling - I do hope you like this weekends update once I post. Snuggles.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 04:57 pm Title: Damaged Goods

So has the nameless brunette finally put an end to Spike's useless, take his mind of Buffy, one night stands? Please yes because she's never gonna like him if he doesn't stop. Angelus is foul. Buffy really is just another notch on his bedpost and I'll leave it there!! At least Buffy and Spike are having periods where they are getting along and he is saying some very interesting things to her. Am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the weekend and the update that I know will be as fab as ever. Loved it.

Author's Response: LOL - okay, twist my arm Sam, make Spike behave. somewhat. At least when it comes to other women. He's learning, he is. And oh yes but we have one really evil Angelus on our hands - just the right kind of guy to actually help Spike 'see' things more clearly, *winks*. You'll be seeing a lot more of SPike and Buffy getting along - even though the snark will continue. Thanks so much for the review darling, more to follow soon. Hugs.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 04:38 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Eee eee eee dum dum dum... dum dummmmm dum dummmmm (poor immitation of the Psycho theme) Poor Norman Bat - I mean poor Spike...tee hee. What am I saying? He shagged ANOTHER WOMAN! WTF? Please, for the love of Andrew, no more one-nighters! And awww they're sorta being nice to each other... sigh. Liam is such a bastard! Ewww gag Harmony as sloppy seconds.... *squicks out* Ok - glad you're going to update this weekend - will give me something to look forward to! Yay! Awesome work my twisted sista as always - wuv ya!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA. You are tooooooo fricking much my twisted sister. And for the luv of Andrew. Spike may just learned his lesson, *winks*. Luv ya back my darling and spank you for the review, hee hee - sloppy kisses.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 03:42 pm Title: Damaged Goods

I love Spikes growing emotional awareness. He's not quite there yet, but he's finally thinking about what happens AFTER he gets her. There are so many nuances in play, and there's no way they can keep having those steamy arguments without just combusting at some point. Wonder what Spike's new strategy will be. Really loved this one, and looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Ah yes indeed, he IS starting to use his brain where his dick is concerned, giggles. The 'after' will become more apparent to him (and important) as he and Buffy get along more and more as time goes on Glad you liked the chappy hon, thanks so much for the review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 03:35 pm Title: Damaged Goods

God I'd like to smack Angel, I am so hoping that Buffy will overhear his crude remarks, and knee him where it will do the most good. I found it amusing that while chastising Angel he realized that he basically did the same thing, the old "love 'em and leave 'em" . It seems the alarms are going off in his head that this is something more, and was scuzzy just like Angel. It is nice to see that there is redemption in his future. He has a way to go, but there is hope. Great chapter, was so excited to see it. What a story spin. You are among my favorite writers. Hope all is well with you. Take care and hugs Debbie

Author's Response: Heheheh, you're not the only one to want to strangle the git's neck. Spike's little conversation with him has certainly provoked his emotions and awakened him to thoughts he never had before - so its a good thing. Oh wow - and I'm absolutely blushing and humbled that you enjoy my writing that much hon, I do try, may not always succeed, but I do try - thank you sooooo much for that, it really made my day. Many hugs and kisses to you sweety.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 03:31 pm Title: Damaged Goods

You posted early!! *dances* *realizes she'd rather be reading than dancing* *scrolls back up to read*
the mastercard line in angel's head is deliciously evil! hee!
oh, i can feel the heat radiating off the two of them every time they argue. woah! did spike actually think the word "relationship"? *hands him a gold star*
can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: LOL - I'm glad you you danced and read and enjoyed it sweety. Angelus really is a bastard in this one - I couldn't help but use the credit card logo - that's how he thinks... ass that he is, lol. Yup - Spike actually had a deep thought for once about Buffy - and indeed every encounter they have leaves them both frustrated and wanting - but you'll never hear Buffy say it, at least for awhile, giggles. Thanks for the review hon - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 03:16 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Thanks so much for the extra chapter this week; could sure get used to it! Glad to see Spike realizing his little sexcapades don't really do the trick. As usual, their confrontation was fantastic! Looking forward to the weekend!

Author's Response: You're very welcome and perhaps once I get all the chapters written out here at home, I can update maybe twice a week. I'm happy you liked their little confrontation and Spike's realization. He's slowly getting on the right road now, thank God, right? LOL. Thanks for the fab review darling, hope you like the next chappy once I post again. Kisses.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 03:12 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Oh, please, let Cordy gossip, let her tell Buffy about who Angelus really is... It was disgusting to know how much money he intend to spend... It was good that she didn't let him kiss her :) I think she can stop seeing him now, Spike is already jealous and it's obvious who she wants ;)

Author's Response: Angel is a real tosser here, I realize that, and it's actually fun for me to write him as such and serves the purpose, too. Buffy doesn't see it yet so she'll be out again with him, but she is a lady, so no worries over her doing anything too stupid with him, I promise. Thanks for the review hon, I'll update this weekend. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 02:45 pm Title: Damaged Goods

It really is hard to understand how they can't see each other if they're both in that place in Egypt... They really must cross paths a few times :P

Loved it, and thanks so much for the double update :)

Author's Response: HAHHAHAHHAHAH - now that was funny, I like that. Glad you enjoyed it hon, more to follow soon. Thanks for the laugh and the review, hugs.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 02:12 pm Title: Damaged Goods

This was a great chapter, really bringing things to a head emotionally. Angel's a calculating cad, and Buffy's playing right into his hands. The good thing coming out of it is Spike finally admitting his feelings run a lot deeper than just lust. Now what is he going to do with that knowledge? Probably repress it some more, but I hope not.

There were several great scenes and lines in this chapter, but I really loved Spike getting to slam the door in Angel's face. Again!

This made me laugh out loud: “Bet I could make you scream.”

That snapped her out of it and she swiftly pulled back in order to face him eye to eye. “Right before I run maybe.” The almost kiss was breathtaking, but so was Buffy playing Spike and running off. He doesn't know how tempted she really was.

Thanks for more of this terrific story.

Author's Response: Oh yes, emotions have come up and as for Spike, well, he's never been in this situation before, so he's not even sure what to do yet. All he knows is that he doesn't want to see Buffy get hurt. Giggles - glad you liked those lines they had during the fight - I like writing snarky Buffy, she always knows how to put a man in his place. And of course she hides what's going on inside her like a pro..... run Buffy run, lol. Thanks for the awesome review my dear - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 01:38 pm Title: Damaged Goods

aahh, I just hope Buffy finds out what a creep Angel really is, but not from Spike or she'll never believe it. really looking forward to the next udate. wonderful chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much hon, I'm glad you enjoyed the chappy and got a bit tensed up - its the whole purpose of writing, isn't it? LOL. Safe to say that Buffy is a lady... too bad for Angel. Thanks again darling - huggles.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:33 pm Title: Damaged Goods

Is it possible that I love this more every time?

Yay for Buffy not letting the poof kiss her! And double yay for growly Spike!!! I loved the pissing contest between him and Angel!
My brain is mush now, I really can't think after growly Spike.... Can't wait for more, honey, this ROCKS!!

Love you lots and lots!!!

Author's Response: LOL - I luv you boo, you always make my day when you comment. Pissing contest indeed and of course it gets worse before it gets better, sighs. But it makes the ending that much sweeter. Luv u boo - now go write more MBF for me, hee hee. Hugs and kisses.

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Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: Damaged Goods

I detest the way Angel thinks.. calculating the money he has to spend till he gets Buffy in his bed? Too bad that Buffy can't read his thoughts. ;-)
And bad enough in my eyes that Spike slept with the brunette. Well when it was such a waste of time for him, maybe he thinks twice next time.
So there is a history behind Spike and Angelus. Too bad the didn't tell Buffy so she knows what to expect. At the moment she doesn't believe him anyway when the just warns her.

Author's Response: He's a bastard, isn't he? But of course I like writing evil Angelus, it's easier for me to do and he's serving a purpose in the fic. As for Spike, he is in a whirlwind here - not knowing what to do with these sort of feelings going on inside him - its the firs time he's ever been in this sort of position. And he would have loved to have told Buffy his history with Angel, but at this point, she wouldn't believe him and see it as a means of trying to get her to stop dating him, so his hands are tied at the mo'. Glad you enjoyed the chappy hon and thanks for te fab review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 12:01 pm Title: Damaged Goods

For men.. experienced.. but for women we are damaged goods.

And it ended well.. maybe getting back to "partners" and a business relationship will steer them back together.

Angel- shy and making jokes..LOL Buffy has been out of the loop for a while.. got it planned including the gifts. Will she be bought ? Maybe Cordelia will hear some of the office girl gossip and clue her in about the True Angelus..

Waiting to know more about Angel's and Spike's relationship.. and family..

Enjoyed the mid-week update..

Author's Response: DOesn't it make you sick? But of course that's why I wrote it the other way around for Buffy to say, LOL. Poor Buffy though - she has been out of the loop for some time now and jaded a bit by Spike - thinking there's nothing worse than him out there when it comes to a player. But I'lll be moving the story along now and slowly getting them where they need to be, *winks*. The history between S&A will come a bit later in the story, and thank you so much for the review. Smoochies to you, boo.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2008 - 11:49 am Title: Damaged Goods

I am waiting for Spike to stop solving his disappointments with sex. Hopefully from this last encounter he has learned something. It is time for Spike to grow up. I hope that it is not the plan of your muse that Buffy is hurt by Angel. I don't mind angst I just don't want Angel to have one up on Spike.

Author's Response: Oh yes, it is indeed time for Spike to grow up, and he has had some things to think on lately now that Angel has entered the picture. As for Buffy getting hurt by Angel.... not the muses intention at all, I promise. Thanks for the review sweety, more to follow soon. Huggles.

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