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Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 02:56 am Title: The Human Touch

Loved it!!
Buffy was so funny when she saw Spike in the towel!! Loved how her lusty reaction made her completely maleable to why he repacked the suitcase.

Sunburn treated with vinegar? Never heard of it - but I will definately try it. (with a sideorder of Spike of course)

Loved the snuggly, sleepy bit! So sweet. And ofcourse - what happens in Florida wont stay in Florida - will it.

Hope you enjoy your trip and your man: )

Author's Response: Hee hee, I think I'd react the same way, jaw open, drool coming out, totally forgetting what I had to say, chapter up on a good snuggly note. Thanks for the great review hon - smoches to you.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 02:25 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

That was a chapter full of delicious 'page turners'.

Hope Angelus gets his nose ground into the dirt like the horrible person he is!

Loved the Riley background - wasn't that a surprise. Hope Spike just jumps her soon - it is sooo what she needs. Even if she has no clue...;)

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm so glad you liked it - I tried to add in as much as I could. As for Angelus, he won't be getting anywhere, trust me, *winks*. Yup, the Riley background explains a lot of Buffy's apprehension and true, she does need tobe jumped, but she doesn't know that, giggles. GLad you liked the chapter darling - thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: The Human Touch

Dang site!

Wow, a rational suggestion from Mr. Horny.....yet, it does sound like something an intellignet player would memorize to put girls at ease.
They're like cymbals - inevitable to crash together and share the same space. Poor Buffy, LOL. I can definitely relate to the nasty burn.

Author's Response: LMAO - indeed it sounds like a well rehearsed 'line', but this time, it wasn't. He's human underneath all that testoterone, giggles. ANd what a beautiful analogy - I really like that - two cymblas crashing together - couldn't have said it better myself. Thanks for the awesome review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 10:45 pm Title: The Human Touch

ooh! you spoil us with such a lovely long chapter! i loved spike the care-taker and snuggler. *sighs dreamily* thanks for this and enjoy your man!
:)

Author's Response: Aww, i'm super pleased you enjoyed the long chapter and that Spike really can be a good caregiver with a big heart. He still has a ways to go, but, well, that's a slow progression for the sake of it being realistic. And hey, we all know its spuffy in the end, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon and I had a WONDERFUL time with the hubby - thanks so much. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 07:55 pm Title: The Human Touch

Another excellent chapter , too too funny . I'm glad your husband is coming back for a visit , enjoy it and although i'll miss the update next week i'll wait for a good cause. Oh and don't forget to thank your husband for me again and anyone else serving our country overseas.

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed the laughs. And I did indeed tell my hubby that you said thank you - it brought a smile to his face and made me smile. He never gets tired of hearing those thank yous. And thank you for such a lovely review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: The Human Touch

omg i wish i could fall asleep like that! that'd be freakin' awesome! this was such a great chapter! i loved it! and when i get a sunburn, i might actually try that cider recepie. maybe! and if he's such a genius, he should come up w/ better ways for them to get together. stretch his mind gurlie! and i really wish he would've dropped that towel! :)

Mon

Author's Response: Hahahhaa, wouldn't it be awesome? All wrapped up in a Spike blanket with his manly smell and strong arms... sighs. But I had to settle for my husband, DOH - I didn't mean that, bad Tina, hee hee. Oh yes, that vinegar treatment works like a charm, trust me. Well, he may be a genius but common sense eludes him sometimes, lmfao. Thanks for the review my friend - you're awesome. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: The Human Touch

Thanks for both chapters. Happy Easter to you and have fun :)
Heh heh good timing for Buffy or not, having to face an almost naked Spike now :)
Loved their banter :)) Spike didn't think other men would see her looking like this but he quickly remembered. And he was right about the sunburn ;-)
Cider vinegar ? I didn't know it had that effect.
And Spike managed to get Buffy in his bed after all *g*. Loved his speech. ~ Till in two weeks :) Enjoyed the long update (chapter) a lot

Author's Response: Not a problem, I figured if I have to disappear for two weeks, I may as well give readers two weeks worth of updates. Giggles, Buffy was stopped dead in her tracks after seeing a freshly showered Spike - who wouldn't? LOL. And yup - the vinegar thing works like a charm, used it many times myself. Thanks for the review my friend - hugs you tight sweety.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 04:41 pm Title: The Human Touch

Oh if Buffy doesn't want Spike in her bed every night (right!!) can I have him - PLEASE? Absolutely loved it (as ever). He was just caring then. He hadn't forced the situation for his own ends. Have a fab couple of weeks and I'll be waiting for my fix. xx


Author's Response: Giggles, ok, you can borow him for awhile until I need him back. Yup, he wasn't 'trying' any funny business on her, he genuinely saw how nervous she was and was only concerned about relieving her of her fears and it is important to have touch and snuggles, it's soothing to the soul. THanks for the awesome review dear - hugs and kisses to you.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 04:08 pm Title: The Human Touch

Love him taking care of her. Really makes her have to re think some of her ideas about him. And convincing her to sleep in his arms. That was pretty adorable. Wonder how she's going to react when they get back home, to their real lives. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, it does make her rethink a few things even if she's still leery. But he does have a good heart despite his young and reckless attitude. THat will change though, slowly, but it will change. Glad you liked the update darling and thanks for the fab review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: The Human Touch

My, my! Spike must be making chinks in her armor cuz she generally handled the thing with her clothes remarkably well!

So the guy is a genius on top of everything else, huh? Figures Buffy would get that and I'd spend Saturday night with... *grumbles*

Loved, loved, LOVED the final scene together (not that I liked the rest of the chapter any less, of course!) but I can't help but worry about how both (and especially Buffy) will react the next morning!

Love ya lots, and I'm honored to be your friend honey! *hugs you tight* Have fun with hubby!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, chink after chink, that's true. Aw, I'm sorry about that sat. night, but you know... at leeast you don't have to wonder what if anymore. AH yes, the last scene, I felt they needed a good to honest little talk and touch with nothing more going on -it'll go a long way in Buffy's thinking, but...... that won't be revealed till later. I love you boo, thank you for always being there for me. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: The Human Touch

loved the update glad things are going nicely between hem. looking forward to more, nice trick with the vinegar, hope he doesn't louse things up now. still think she should look for another job.

Author's Response: Hahahhaha, well, she's spent 8 years there and isn't about to allow one man to shake up the world she's established for herself - she's a proud woman. Yup, they had a pretty good time in FLorida despite it all and are slowly but surely falling into the 'like' zone. THanks for the review darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: The Human Touch

Loved it the attractions going to go nuts before they leave Florida I hope. More please soon.

Author's Response: GIggles, indded it does, thanks for the review sweets. Huggles.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:00 pm Title: The Human Touch

Oh, he just keeps right on surprising her, both for the good and for the bad. Love the chapter, love that this time it's HIM taking care of HER and despite his bad-rude-man-ness he didn't really expect anything in return. Lots of laughs and sweetness, excellent update! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yup - that's SPike, surprises of all natures up his sleeve. And he really is a good soul, just in desperate need of some life's lessons, which he'll get, *winks*. Glad you liked the update sweetheart - thanks for reviewing. Huggles.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 12:20 pm Title: The Human Touch

Never heard of cider vinegar for sunburn. I use tomatoes ;)

Very good chapter!!!

Author's Response: Oh neat - now I just learned something. Not only do tomatoes work, but vinegar as well, thanks for the info and of course thanks for the review hon - glad you enjoyed the update. Hugs.

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Loved that almost kiss - why oh why did she fall? Can't wait until you update again.

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked their , somewhat intimate moment - Spike truly can't help himself, in many ways, he's still just a kid. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter sweets - thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Yay! Thanks for posting! I'm so glad your husband's coming home for a bit!!! If you don't end up writing while he's there, you have a very good excuse. :)*

Author's Response: THanks hon - I can't wait to see my hubby. I'll definetly post the day before he comes hom, just not so sure I'll be able to post the following weekend, we'll see. THanks for the review sweets - glad you enjoyed the chappy. Huggles.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 02:24 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

This chapter ramped up both the friendship and the sexual tension beautifully. Spike's infantile jealous rage over the spa appointment was hilarious, and his seething at seeing Buffy all wanton and relaxed over the supposed sexual encounter was a delight to read. Her real explanation, and his immediate shift into leer mode was in character, but can't he see all his pushing and innuendo are getting him nowhere?

I guess not. Spike acting human and interested was going a long way to getting them closer, and then he tries to close the deal. Was Buffy hinting that she's a virgin? Maybe Riley said she was a lousy lay and she's been self conscious ever since. Either way, Spike needs to be more gentle, not ham handedly throw them together in the same room in Florida. His seduction technique may have worked in the past, but not on this long haul gal.

Spike's becoming more compassionate and sympathetic, but he has a long way to go. Being roommates, a kitten may go a long way as an olive branch once they have the expected blow up in Florida. I'm looking forward to more of Spike's romantic bumbling.

Eight days with your husband - congratulations! I'm sure you'll have loads of fun.

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you liked the jealous SPike over the spa-treatment Buffy had. And you're right, they are slowly building a friendship - of course the UST is ever present, but that's b/c Spike has a ways to go before growing up more. He sees any little advancement as an opportunity for something else right now, but he'll learn, he will. As for Buffy, well, she has issues that stemmed from Riley, no doubt, but those issues will come out when the time is right. She just doesn't trust Spike right now enough to share everything with him - and rightfully so. I think you'll really enjoy the Florida chapter coming up. Yeah, Buffy will be upset, but since they will already be there, there's only so much huffing and puffing she can do about it too. Yup - 8 wonderful days with the hubby, I can hardly wait. Thanks for the review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

The entire restaurant scene was fun and funny. Spike's angry reaction to his completely innocent waiter set the stage for his uncontrolled fury at Parker's clumsy pass. The entire misadventure, from catching himself on fire, Parker lighting a second fire and the sprinklers going off was hilarious, and I laughed out loud at Buffy's dismissive "Looks like smoking is not only bad for your health but apparently detrimental to your attire as well..." You almost make me feel sorry for the lust addled idiot.

But, instead, he oversteps the boundaries just as badly as Parker. Going through Buffy's underthings is not a way into her heart. Idiot. It's lots of fun to watch him, though.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAAH and YAY, I'm thrilled you enjoyed the entire scene - I felt like a little Murphy's Law needed to step in and wreak fiery then watery havoc. ANd yeah, SPike's still a naughty boy - but he'll learn, trust me, it'll just take awhile, *winks*. THanks for the awesome review - huggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 12:30 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I loved it! That part with Lorne was sooo funny! :p

Author's Response: GIggles - glad you liked it, I couldn't resist throwing in that misunderstanding. Thanks for the review sweety - smooches.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 07:17 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

OH that was good, I wonder what happened and why she blames herself and why she seems so scared, when her and Spike almost kissed.

Author's Response: Welllll, it's a story that will reveal itself later down the road, adn truthfully, she doesn't trust herself around SPike - she's a stronger woman than I, hee hee. GLad you liked the updated hon and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 10:53 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

Please please PLEASE post the next shapter before then!!! i can't wait that long!!!

Author's Response: GIggles - i would but I need time to polish it up and get it beta'd again. I do hope you enjoy it once its ready and thanks for the review darling. Kisses.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:26 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

ooh! the plot thickens! the bit with lorne was funny. but now angel is in town! *meep*
it's awesome to see spike's slow descent into realizing he cares about her.
thanks for the update! and i'm glad to hear your hubby will be around. :D

Author's Response: Hahhahaah, oh yeah, things will get interesting with Angelus around and yes, SPike's slow descenet is something even he can't see right now - but it's hapening. THanks for the review and the well wished on my hubby's coming home. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

PLEASE don't let dirty Angel mack on Buffy!

Author's Response: Hahahahahha, well, you know how Angelus can be.... time will tell, but no fear, any S or B with other is soooooooooooo far from graphic it's not even on this plane of existence, *winks*, trust me. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 04:43 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

I loved it, and any day you pick is find for me for posting.

She is going to be so mad at him when she finds out, I wonder if she will open her suitcase before the trip.

Author's Response: Thank you darling. Hee hee - suffice to say Buffy won't be happy. Hugs and kisses to you sweety.

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 10:49 am Title: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words

I was so excited to see the update today, it didn't disappoint! Can't wait for the next! Have a wonderful time with your husband! *winks*

Author's Response: YAY, I'm so glad you liked it hon - I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well - it's full of fun surprises, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling - huggles.

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