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Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 01:32 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Once again, keeping me hooked on ML with another fabulous chapter.

I'm glad Spike finally came to the realization that smart girls are hot. DUH! What planet has he been on? Oh yeah, planet womanizer! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Wow, I've had too much caffine)

Parker is a douchebag, but everyone knows that. Love the direct quotage from Season 4... made me have a flashback and have a sudden urge to go watch it. Thank goddness Buffy handles herself so well in this. Silly Parker, you mess with Buffy and you get lit on fire!

I wonder what Buffy will think of Spike's little switch... And I'm still anxiously awaiting that overnight trip. Seems like there are rampant plot bunnies about to be unleashed!

~KatieGrrl1016

Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, he's been living on planet 'all`boutSpike' I suppose. Yes, he;s discovering more and mroe, little by little things about Buffy that only serve to make him want her more. Glad you enjoyed the S4 Parker talk - always hated him but the btvs lines came in very very useful in this situation - before I flambed the the room, hee hee. Buffy won't be happy about the switch of her clothes, but, what can she do so far from home? Giggles - I think you'll really enjoy their little trip - it's full of some surprises. Thanks for the awesome review hon - smoochies.

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 09:47 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Well, who doesn't want to go to Florida?! Looking forward to updates!

Author's Response: Hahahahhahaha, and to Florida they will go for some much fun, laughs, and a bit of intimacy - just nothe type you might think, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweets - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

just found this fic and read it all in one sitting! i'm enjoying it muchly. great humor and characterizations. i look forward to reading more!
:)

Author's Response: YAY - I'm so pleased you found ML and are enjying it - I so love writing comedy. Thanks for the great review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 08:17 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

::rubs hands together:: ooooh this is getting goood!!!! keep it coming gurlie!!!

and i always knew that guy was a creep. thanks for proving it, although i did sort of cring at Spike's "suave" routine! lol

Author's Response: Giggles, that's SPike, acting upon instinct rather than thought, lol. Glad you enjoyed and Parker......... what an ass!!! Thanks for the review - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: The English Patient

i really liked it but i would've tried to feel him up...or her....just some feeling up!!! she has more damn restraint that i ever would have!!!

Author's Response: Giggles, and she's control freak to an extent with her rigid rules about co-workers and all, hee hee. Thanks for the great review sweety. Kisses.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 07:37 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

oooooh lots of possibilities!!!!!!! gettin yummy girlie!!!! i'll be his nurse guar-an-teed!!!

Author's Response: Hahahahahaha, who wouldn't wanna be, right> GLad you liked and thanks for the review hon - luv ya.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 05:40 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Oh trip to Florida. New opportunities :-D
Loved Spike getting hot when Buffy showed her knowledge / her brains.
Ah Parker.... he really tried it but Buffy didn't want to. First I thought Spike only trying to read their body language wouldn't go well but it wasn't that. The fire Spike caused had me giggling. Good that he was able to go unnoticed, he would have to answer some questions if he stayed.
Even better that Buffy didn't know he was there, checking on her. :)
I so knew it when I started to read that, Spike exchanged the underwear in the suitcase *gg* Buffy won't be pleased.
~ Saw your entry on LJ but didn't have time to take the pool; I'm good with both days, whatever you choose.

Author's Response: Giggles, yeah, he got a bit turned on by her brains- whooda thunkit? GLad you liked the fiery scene - I couldn't help a classic move such as that - kinda get's Parker for being an a-hole and Spike for spying all at the same time, hee hee. Yup - Spike has traded out some of her clothes for more girl, provacative ones, question is, how will she react after there's nothing she can do about it, *winks*. Glad you enjoyed the update hon, and thanks for letting me know the day of posting makes no difference to you - smooches my friend.

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

You are so sweet for asking the readers what days they prefer updates! Personally I don't have a preference as long as they're weekly :) ! Ch. 8 restaurant scene- HILARIOUS! Talk about a comedy of errors! I can hardly wait to read the adventures our duo will have in Florida!


Author's Response: And it does matter to me b/c I know some people are just too busy on certain days - so I thought a poll of sorts might be best. And yes, the updates will come weekly, that I promise. I think you'll really like the business trip, *winks*, lots of fun to be had in Florida, hee hee. Thanks for the review sweetheart. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 03:03 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Any day works for me. Love Spikes plotting with her luggage. And the little vibes they have as roommates are just glimpses of what could be. Another great chapter... BTW... so glad that Parker got what he deserved. :)

Author's Response: Great, thank you for your input hon. Hahahahhah, glad you liked Parker's comeuppance, and a little bit for Spike too. Yeah, Spike is slippery alright, but I think you'll enjoy their little trip, it doesn't turn out all that bad, *winks*. Thanks for the lovely review darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 02:53 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Wonderful story so far! I love how Buffy stood up to Parker and I can't wait for their trip.

Author's Response: YAY, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it. Yup, Buffy stood her ground with Parker, just as she would with Spike, despite her harboring a crush for him, giggles. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 12:37 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Yay! An update. :) Great to find after I got home from a big ol' trip this weekend. Can't wait for more! sneaky spike, that'll definitely be interesting.

Author's Response: LOL - glad you enjoyed the chapter hon and sneaky Spike - he's a slick one huh? THanks for the review darling - smooches.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

I can't imagine that Buffy is going to be happy that Spike messed witht he stuff she had packed! And really, it sounds like only 1 day, all business except the overnight stay, so really not much need to bring all that anyway -- unless they get stranded down there by weather or something!

Author's Response: Well, you know that typically - I use the word loosely b/c not al lwomen do it - women tend to overpack 'just in case' - which is fine by Spike since he meddled with her things, bad Spikey, hee hee. Thanks for the review darling - glad you enjoyed the update. Huggles.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Oh, Spike. You have really done yourself in now. Cute little stunt but Buffy will NOT be pleased. Restaurant scene was hilarious (love the usage of the Parker/Buffy dialogue), love their evolving comfort with each other, love Spike's inability to keep a lid on his libido. Can't wait for more, and any day of the week you post, I'll be reading as soon as I can!

Author's Response: Hee hee, he has, hasn't he. Glad you enjoyed the flambe scene - who could resist such a disaster in a comedy - me me me, lol. Thanks for letting me know it doesn't matter which day I post and of course for the awesome review sweetheart - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:43 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Loved it! I wonder what she'll say about her suitcase ;) It doesn't matter which day you choose to update :) just as long as you post :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: Hee hee, she'll blow up at first, but then what can she do since they'll be in Florida already, *inserts evil laugh*. I promise to keep the posts regularly coming and thanks so much for the lovely review - kisses.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:04 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

loving it and whenever is convenient for you :) just as long as we get story sometime :)

Author's Response: okay hon - gotcha, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yup, updates will come regularly, I promise. Huggles.

Reviewer: Scooter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 12:46 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Just loving the story. And yep, the restaurant scene was so funny, Thank you.

Weekend updates are great, but really whatever is best for you.

Author's Response: THank you hon - I'm glad you liked the watery comeuppance for both P & S. I couldn't resist it. hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 12:34 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Spike is going to be scalded when Buffy realises what he has done. The man just begs for a verbal whipping doesn't he.
My update preference is Monday & Tuesday & Wednesday & Thursday & Friday & Saturday , you can have Sunday off. :)

Author's Response: Hahahahha, indeed he'll be in deep water. Giggles - I wouldn't mind updating more frequently, but alas I've a few more chapters to write before the ending. Once it is finished, I'll try and update twice a week though, *winks*. THanks for the lovely review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 09:47 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Boy Spike sure is looking for trouble. Going through Buffy's clothes he'll be lucky to have all his parts intact! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hee hee, yeah, you can bet there will be a blow up about that - but they do have some fun during their trip. GLad you liked the update hon - thanks for the review - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 09:32 am Title: The English Patient

So like a man to totally draw out the whole sickness thing (I know my hubby totally does this - and its really annoying sometimes). Loved her overhearing his private moment. Reread the hottub scene many times - its just so funny (specially the 'italian' misunderstanding and the part where she calls him a kid ; ) The wake up scene was classic, since I thought it revealed her ambivalence towards him.

Author's Response: Isn't it - almost every man I know does - my hubby included. YAY - glad you liked Buffy's drunken rant in the hot tub - loose lips sinks ships but she also got him good with her 'kid' statement too, giggles. Plus misunderstandings are always fun between these two. Glad you enjoyed the chappy and the wake up scene too - thanks for the review sweety - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 09:25 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Ding Dong Parker sure went down. Loved how Buffy missed the whole fire chaos - very funny - served Spike (and Parker) totally right for being too Alfa male-y. Really looking forward to reading about their trip!!
Posts during the weekend - much appreciated - since the week with work, familiy and other stuff - makes for bogged down Heidi (but that may just be me)- but feel free to post one more monday or tuesday this week- he he

Author's Response: YAY - I'm pleHanks for the input on your preferred day hon and of course for the fab review - hugs you tight.ased you liked the restauraunt fire - I couldn't resist causing a blaze to dowse those two, hee hee.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 07:28 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

I gotta agree with all the other reviewers the restuarant scene was hilarious... lol! And I loved Spike's musings about smart chicks, although I get the feeling that Buffy could read a phone book and Spike would probably get turned on. ;) Can't wait to see what happens when Buffy finds out Spike tampered with her suitcase.
Any day you choose to update works for me. Loved the chapter! :D

Author's Response: Hee hee, he probably would get turned on by that huh? I think you'll enjoy the business trip scene - its not what everyone is expecting - aside from the blow up on Buffys part - but I garauntee you'll enjoy it. THanks for the review hon - kisses.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 04:08 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

OMG this is just amazing and the restaurant scene was just so funny. With regards to updates, my preferred choice would be daily - can that be arranged please? Really don't mind when because this is brilliant and I'll read it whenever. Absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: YAY - glad you liked the restaurant scene - I couldn't resist a classic form of chaos and all unbeknownst to Buffy - P and S kinda deserved it too, hee hee. LOL - I wouldn't mind updating daily, but I still have to finish up the story - I've about 17 chapters done and a hadnful to go. What I can do, is when the story IS finished, update perhaps twice a week - gotta polish them up every time before I post and all that rot. Thanks for the awesome review darling. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: gizmo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:42 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Really can't put in words how much I Luuurve this story!! Seriously, if I had a choice, I'd choose to have updates/chapters every half hour!! *winks*

This story has got just the perfect mix of humour and sexual angst!!

You're Bloody fantastic girl!!

Bring on the business trip, I say!!
Really can't wait for more!!
xxx

Author's Response: Hahahahha, but then it would be over so quickly. I'm pleased you enjoy the blend of banter and inner pov. I especialy think you'll enjoy the business trip - it's not quite what anyone is expoecting, *winks*. Thanks for the wonderful revioew. Smooches.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 01:10 am Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Loved it and as long as you update I'm happy.

Author's Response: Thank you hon, glad you like the story and I do promise to give regular updates - hugs.

Reviewer: OKDeanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 11:41 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

So if I said Mon-Sunday for updates, would you post everyday? Haha!

Seriously, I love this story so much! Spike is so much fun in this. Buffy, too. Their thought processes borders on comical at times while the subject of their speaking words is quite different, and you manage to segway both with enough subtext and tension to really draw the readers in. I love that!

I so can't wait for their trip! I have a feeling it's going to be great!

Deanna

Author's Response: LOL - if only it were that easy huh? Yup, they certainly do conflict between their thoughts and what actually comes out of their mouths, huh? Ah yes, the business trip - you're going to like that, I promise, *winks*. THanks my darling friend for the wonderful review - can't wait to chat with you again soon - luve you.

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