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Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 11:01 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

I'm a weekend fanfic reader and got lucky enough to read Chappie 7 & 8 today. Things are definitely heating up with the hot tubbing/opening up and the upcoming trip. I love your work!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much hon. I may switch to Sundays for posting since most folks don't seem to have a preference, only a couple said they'd like Mondays. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story hon and thank you so very much for the great review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 10:49 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Is every day a choice? Great chapter, I can't wait to see what shenanigans these two crazy kids get up to.

Author's Response: Hahhahaha, I wish I could, but I still have a handful of chapters to write before its finished, sorry. I can update regularly though, that I promise. Glad you're liking the story darling - thanks so much for the review - smoohies to you.

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 10:01 pm Title: Who's the Boss

He leaned a shoulder against the door jamb and slid his hands inside his pockets. “If memory serves me, lunch is `bout takin’ a break from work.”

“Not from work. From you.”

*sigh*

You just write Buffy so beautifully... I'm so very, VERY picky about how people write her. But, I can always count on you and Holly to stay true 100%.!

And you're write, this Spike is an ASSHOLE!! I love it! :D

Author's Response: YAY, what a compliment, thank you sweetheart. I do try to retain their canon personalities as much as possible. And of course I love writing Spke as an asshole - call it a sickness, hee hee. I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story hon, very much so and thank you so much for the great review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Oooo, he is so dead!! LOL, and he really doesn't know women, as we never leave the suitcase alone until we're ready to carry it out the door!

LMAO at the fire scene.....served both of them right.

Author's Response: LOL - that he will be, she'll be right mad as hell. Yeah, I couldn't resist dampening their tempers with a little water, giggles. Glad you like the update hon - thanks for the great review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 07:48 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

ROFLMAO!!! The scene at the restaurant was priceless, reminded me of the Three Stooges or something slap sticky like that! Hahahhahah! Oooo and naughty Spike, going through her things like that, tsk tsk...all for a good cause I'm sure. Oh I can't wait til you update again. How about Mondays? Gives me something to look forward to when I come home from work! And I'm just waiting for Spike to go all caveman on Buffy and knock her up side the head with a club saying 'Buffy Mine...Ugg!' hehehehe.

Author's Response: Hahhaaaah, it was rather a bit classic huh? But of course no less hilarious due both men's actions. LMAO - that would be funny, clubbing Buffy and dragging her of caveman style. I gues I'm having more votes for whenever and a couple of Mondays or Sundays, but regardless, I'll update regularly - that I promise - smooches to you my sista and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Oh, honey, this chapter was just delicious!!! Loved the meeting between Buffy and Parker and the entire scene at the restaurant was hilarious! Possessive Spike (even when he ends up on fire *giggles*) is irresistible!

Seems things are better between them... but what will happen when she figures out he re-packed for her? Can't wait to find out her reaction, or how the entire trip will turn out for them!!!

As for when you should update, doesn't really make a difference to me! You know the drill: you write, I read, I love. So simple!!!

Love you lots and lots!

Author's Response: Hahahhaaha, yup, he was literally, 'hot' huh, in all his protective mode, huh? THanks for all your help my darling friend - and oh boy, the business trip will be most interesting for the readers, huh? LOL. Luv you babe.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

OMG Tina the restaurant scene with the fire's was just too much! i'm still laughing from thinking about it. I loved that Spike keeps thinking of her as his girl, it would be cool if Buffy got a taste of the same jealousy pill though, just to even things out. Til next time, ciao.


Author's Response: Hahahhaha, glad you liked it - I couldn't resist such a comical moment brought on by both men. Ah yes, Spike does keep thinking of her as his girl, whether he likes it or not, giggles. As for the jealousy pill for Buffy - it's coming, trust me, *winks*. GLad you enjoyed the chapter hon and thanks for the awesome review. Huggles.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Great update!!

Author's Response: THanks hon - smooches.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 05:38 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Oh god... I think Spike signed his death-certificate with this stunt :)! Don't think so Buffy likes it so much when someone is going through her things. Hehe.. I love to see her face when she sees her underwear.
And the scar on her wrist.. hope its not that what I'm thinking of. I really hope it was an accident.

So.. I'm looking forward your update.. doesn't matter for me when..!

Author's Response: Oh yes, he'll be in deep s**t for sure, but I think you'll enjoy their business trip nonetheless, *winks* - I've a few tricks up my sleeve, hee hee. ANd the scar on her wrist is just that, a puppy bit her when she was little - I was merely borrowing some BTVS Parker lines to forward their conversation at the restaurant. THanks for the fab review darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Well, left a lovely review.. and with the code... must have messed up..

Anyway.. loved the puppy scar remark and both men deserved to be up in flames and wet all over.
And yes Buffy will be upset that Spike messed with her clothes... especially those. But gotta love a guy who will cook and clean...

As far as the day ... doesn't matter .. when you are retired every day is like a holiday/weekend.. and loving it..


Author's Response: Awwww, sory - those codes ca get confusing at times, I know. Yeah, I borrowed some Parker-btvs stuff to help move it along - and of course both men deserved to go up in flames, you're right - I couldn't resist. Thanks for letting me know any day is fine and I'm super glad you liked the update hon - huggles.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

I was so excited to find this updated this afternoon. As to updates, the sooner the better works for me! lol This is one of my favorite stories at the moment! Loved the imagery in the lunch scene....naughty Spike changing Buffy's things. Can't wait to see what she does! Have a great week!

Author's Response: Hahahahha, the sooner the better huh? I suppose Iplanned them to be a week apart to give me time to polish the chapters I've written - give me the time to do so rather. I'm so pleased though you're enjoying my little story, thank you so much darling - hugs. Yup, Spike certainly is a bad boy - God love him, hee hee.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 04:33 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

Hee, loved the chapter! Loved jealous Spike, loved the scene at the restaurant too and how naughty and devious he is at planning their trip and messing with Buffy's suitcase. I'm pretty sure she won't be too happy about that one. *giggles* Wonderful chapter yet again, darling! And as always it's a delight to help you in any way I can. *huggles* Love you, sweetie!

Author's Response: Giggles - you know SPike is a bad, rude man and we love him that way, hee hee. Nope, Buffy will be none too happy about her suitcase being repacked, but, well, that doesn't mean the trip will be a disaster, *winks*. THanks again for al your help carino - I love you.

Reviewer: rose_bud_50 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2008 - 04:26 pm Title: When it Rains, it Pours

this is one of my fave stories right now! i don't really have a preference of when you update. ASAP i guess:)

Author's Response: Gotcha - if you have no preference that's fine with me sweety - I'm just glad you're enjoying it - thanks so much - smooches.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: The English Patient

Buffy sure doesn't trust Spike much, does she. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hahahhaah, nope, she sure doesn't,m but with good reason. GLad you enjoyed the update sweety - thanks o much for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 02:04 pm Title: The English Patient

Spike's baser desire just to seduce and abandon Buffy are evolving naturally. There were still flashes of his crasser self in the sexual talk and leering, but Buffy's reacting to his softer side. Here's hoping he realizes it and lightens up on the inappropriate innuendo and grab and kiss behavior.

I love that he's a virgin to a real relationship, and his response to just sleeping with Buffy was delightful. Buffy, too, is disconcerted to find herself warming to Spike. Her confusion at the pleasantness of sleeping with him gave me a grin. They're both doomed!

I laughed out loud at Buffy's response to “So tell me, Buffy. Are you into fellatio?” I'm surprised Spike didn't spit out a mouthful of wine at her "I could eat."

Thanks for another delightful chapter. I'm sure the tension will ramp up once they're at the office, but this was a nice break in the bickering.

Author's Response: Yup, Buffy is definitely reacting to her motherly instincts, well, except when she was drunk, giggles.
And oh yes, their reactions to sleeping together were quite unecpected for both of them - frekaing them out in their own way, lol. And of course drunken Buffy is always fun to write with the misinterpretations, LOL. Glad you enjoyed the break fromth ebater and of course Mondy will bring back some of that, *winks*. Thanks for the swesome review darling - higgles.

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: The English Patient

SQUEEEEEE! This just keeps getting better and better! *Sing-songy* He's falling in love with her, he's falling in love with her!

Spike can be such a pervert sometimes, but we love him anyways!

I love where this is going, and I can't wait for the next chapter! An overnight business trip AND Parker... Looks like romance and major plot bunnies.

~KatieGrrl1016

Author's Response: Hhahaahaahh, but how long will it take him to relize it, that's the question. Yup, I do love me a bad boy perv Spike, I can't help it, I'm sick, giggles. THe overnight trip will be hmmm, interesting to say the least, *winks*. GLad you enjoyed the update darling - thanks so much for the review. SMooches.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: The English Patient

I loved it

Author's Response: Yay, glad you hon, thanks for the reivew. Kisses.

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Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:58 pm Title: Home Sweet Home

I really hope they are.

Author's Response: Hee hee, we'll see. THanks for the review - hugs you tight darling.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 02:19 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

OH is she starting to warm up to him.

Author's Response: Just a weeeeeeeeeeee bit, giggles. Thanks for the rewview sweets - hugs.

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 09:31 am Title: The English Patient

LOVING this story hun - I love these two snipey but her looking after him was really sweet and always gotta LOVE drunk Buffy - makes me giggle so much - your stories tear me in two cos I LOVE all the banter and back and forth so much I almst don't want them to get together if it means an end to that stuff but at the same time feel like I'll burst if they don't bloody shag each other soon!!
Oh I'll just be quiet and say thank you and please torture me more as soon as possible!!
Sarah
x

Author's Response: Giggles, drunk Buffy is always so much fun to write - with her big mouth just shooting off like that. Glad you enjoy the banter - that kind of S/B relationship is my fav to write, each of them trying to take the other down a notch or two while secretly, well in Buffy's case anyway, wanting each other. As for them shagging - you can bet when it happens it'll be quite intense, but they've a long while to go before they get there. *winks* - it's all part of the game. Thanks for the awesome review darling - smooches.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 10:27 pm Title: The English Patient

So many awesome parts to this chapter, it's impossible to name them all! The Vicks chest massage, the fellatio/cunnilingus conversation, Buffy overhearing Spike's bout of self-love, Spike being a big baby and Buffy enjoying nursing him back to health...OMG, it's all so sexy and funny and BRILLIANT!

Author's Response: YAY, glad you enjoyed all aspects to the chapter - I had to have some fun other than the bickering, a little break if you will, hee hee. But of course things will go back to normal - for some more fun bantering - you know it has to happen, *winks*. GLad you really enjoyed their weekend hon - thanks for the awesome review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 09:57 pm Title: The English Patient

ROFLMAO 'wee willy winkie' (ahahahahhahaha). Shouldn't that be "big billy bulging?" God, I need help! That's awesome that you had their whole weekend in this chapter...satisfied my curiosity... A TAD. What is wrong with you woman? I need vicarious smoochies, although the longing glances was soooo worth it. And awwww Spike is getting those "I like her for more than sex" butterflies. And oooo does Spike suspect that little secret about Buffy? heheheh dum dum dummmmm! Thanks hun for the shout out, you seriously rock my sista!

Author's Response: LMFAO - you are tooooooo funny. Vicarious smoochies huh? Hmmmmmmm, may take a bit, but we'll see - I know, I'm musch with the cryptic here, I can't help it. Nope, SPike suspects nothing - *winks*, and won't until it's spelled out for him, hee hee - evil laugh here. You deserve the shout out my sister - you're awesome - luv ya, and thanks for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: The English Patient

A business trip? Oh, she's gonna *love* that!

That weekend was all so classic, but you still make it so enjoyable. They're both softening....

Author's Response: HEHEHEHEHEH, indeed. GLad the weekend, though classic, was enjoyable for you - thanks for the great review hon, huggles.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 09:18 pm Title: The English Patient

Loved this chapter. Loved how they were getting along so well...until Buffy's guilty conscience kicked in. Yep, I think that's the reason why she got a little bent out of shape. She wants it just as much as him. Can't blame her though. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Hahahhahah, yeah, you're correct, but to what extent she wants him remains to be seen - cryptic I know, but that's the way my muse has been working with this fic, lol. THanks for the review hon - glad you enjoyued it. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: The English Patient

Can't wait to see everything blow up!!!

Author's Response: OHhhhhh, and it wil, just you watch, *winks*. THanks for the review hon - hugs you tight.

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