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Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 05:14 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Loved both the Parker bit, where Spike got all posessive and maybe started to feel more towards his assistant than just the conquest part. Also liked the UST in the car and in the elevator. Looking forward to the 24/7 thing. Yay sparks!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Parker scene - nothing like a little competition to bring out growly, possessive SPike who acts before he thinks, lol. More sparkage to come in next chapter - a LOT more, *winks*. Thanks so much for the review hon - hugs.

Reviewer: OKDeanna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:07 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Okay, so I'm not sure which one I'm more in love with at this point. That elevator scene with a shirtless Spike or that kiss! Gah! Are you trying to kill me? I mean, seriously, first you and Maria and Sotia conspiring to send me the naught pictures on YM and then you post THIS and put those images on a whole different playing field!

And you three call me evil for not updating! Hmph!

So, when can I expect more of this gem of yours? I did tell you I was addicted to it, right? Because yeah, I totallly am. I want more of your Spike, too!

Deanna

Author's Response: Hahahahhaha, those pics did the trick, huh? And I couldn't help stripping SPike down here a bit for a drooling Buffy in denial. The kiss - couldn't help that either, caveman Spike at play here. Next update wil be probably this monday - if things go smoothly. Now you get back to work and write yourself so I can read more of your stuff sweety - drools with anticiaption, lol. Thanks for the review boo - smoochies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 04:07 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Seems as if Buffy's choice of clothes was the right one to distract Spike ;-)
Loved Spike becoming possessive when Parker looked too much at Buffy.
The others (like the driver) noticed too how jealous Spike became *grins*
Playing with the elevator buttons? Hilarious when they got stuck.
And I bet that Buffy is including Spike into the any man in the circle of this company's business dealings

And already checked the story out :)

Author's Response: Indeed it was, but it backfired a bit on her as well after the encounter with Parker, hee hee hee. Of course I couldn't resist a spot of childish behavior in the elevator and the subsequent squirming Buffy went through after seeing Spike half naked - glad you enjoyed that bit. Thanks for the great review my friend - and glad you enjoyed Sandara's story too. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Evil of him to give her those reports over the weekend... I guess he just wants revenge ;) I wonder what she'll do about it ;) By the way, it was funny when they got stuck in the elevator... Enjoyed! :) More soon I hope. / Ariadne

Author's Response: He's thickheaded here, thinking it's all her fault - of course - little spoiled rich boy that he is. But he'll get what's coming to him, you can count on that - next chapter, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweets - kisses.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 07:52 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

That was just brilliant. I am still laughing. Could Spike be any more possessive? I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Giggles, glad to have made you chuckle - that's the whole point of the story that underlines the UST. ANd yeah, Spike can definitely get more possessive, *winks*. THanks for the review and I do hope you enjoy the surprise held in next chapter. Hugs.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 07:34 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

beautifully played as always :D can't wait til next installment in a week :)

Author's Response: Thanks sweetheart - glad you enjoyed the banter and sparks. More of the same to follow soon. Hugs.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 04:17 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

That was definitely one interesting business meeting... lol! Loved the little show Spike put on for Parker, he totally deserved the slap he got for the kissage though. ;) And the elevator ride that followed was also quite an experience. :D Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, he deserved a punch actually, but Buffy went easy on him considering what she could have done - giggles. Glad you enjoyed the elevtor ride - it was fun to write Buffy squirming and undressing Spike is always of the good. Thanks for reviewing darling - smoochies to you.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2008 - 03:56 am Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

i love this line!

"Too bad there wasn’t enough blood in his body to run both brains simultaneously"

Jesus woman, are you trying to kill me? and so early in the day too!

Ok u officially killed me, i love possesive Spike! mmmmmmmmm!

Anyway! i LOVE the chapter! can't wait for the next one! lol!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHAH - I loved using that line - I first heard it from Robin Williams during one of his earlier stand up shows - though he worried it differently. Glad you like my possessive Spike - he's my fav kind to write. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 10:51 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Whyyyy doesn't she just knee him in the groin and get it over with??

Author's Response: LMFAO - that would be toooooo easy - I like the hard road, giggles. Thanks for the review my friend - hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

All I can think to say is, tee,hee, hahahaha ,snicker, snicker snicker . I can't help it I think their so funny even when you don't mean them to be,they way they treat each other is just to much . You know i'm loving this ,right, i have told u ! Your evil Tina,my type of person. Update soon this is too good.

Author's Response: HAHHAHHAHA, yup - I;'ve been accused of being evil before, and I concede, guilty as charged. But I'm ever so glad to keep you chuckling - that's the whole point underlying the UST of the story. Thanks for the awesome review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Gah! Stupid thing ate my review.

Poor Buffy...but that's how the sales world goes, anyway. You can sell to anyone any day of the week between 8am and 9pm. And Spike doesn't quit!! At least she got to leave a big red welt on his face.

Of course, Spike just sees her as a prize to be won, so it doesn't occur to him that she knows everyone in the biz better than he does, or that she's been doing this a lot longer, and on her own. She's had to be twice as smart, twice as aggressive, and twice as proactive just because she's a woman i a notoriously male business. She could eat Parker Abrams for lunch.

Author's Response: Yeah, sales is tough, no doubt about it. And the handprint he definitely deserved, even if she started to cave. And Spike has no frickin clue as to Buffy and her true smarts - he just doesn't 'see' things the way another adult would. Never fear though - he will in time. Thanks for the review swets - hugs.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 06:50 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Lovin' it! You've done it again, as only you can do it!
But then, I can't think of any of your fic I don't adore.
You write a wonderful Spike. His younger age in this is interesting, and I look forward to to see how you'll pique out interests with that.
Why, he'd barely be out of college, with scarcely any time for practical experience....c'mon, fess up---have you been secretly watching "Secret of My Success" on a DVD loop again??? (I know I love it...and somehow this reminds me of it a bit, tho' I understand JM is a leetle taller than MJF. But just a little.)
I love the way you write his bulldog tenacity---no, perhaps that's not even right---maybe that of a more hyper Jack Russell terrier. Grabs on, and hangs ON.
And the lovely thing is, his obsession & perserverance to the chase have already crossed over, past attraction, to possessiveness. Which implies that he wants her for longer...longer than just the win, for further than the finish line. He just doesn't know, it hasn't caught up to his brain & conscious mind yet, that he has already fallen HARD for Buffy. Say goodbye bachelorhood, goodbye former life.
And she's definitely attracted too...she likes the dominant man, but not necessarily likes a dominating personality. She doesn't want to give into either. She doesn't want to eat that crow. (MY advice is LOTS of ketchup!)
So he's also a spoiled rich boy. But the good thing is, he realizes it as a possible shortcoming. But come on! $4200 for a PEN????? I know life in the city is expensive but wow!
You've given us yet another thing to avidly look forward to, waiting with ever bated breath for the latest update from you!
My only complaint so far is, you didn't leave them in that elevator near long enough!!!
Thanks!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: WOW, making me blush here, pet, giggles and grins. As for Spike's age - add in his genius status and I suppose the difference in British education and it's suffice to say he excelled above the norm. It becomes apparent later. He definitely wants Buffy, in the worst of ways, and as time goes on, even he doesn't see how much that is and for the why and how long, *winks*. He just needs a bit more growing up - which will happen, I promise. Buffy is admittedly attracted and perhaps a bit scared b/c she recognizes his personality is similiar to her own - a combo that makes their lives difficult yet interesting throughouth the story. LMAO on your comment for not leaving them in the elevator long enough - but I felt Buffy was tortured enough, both by Spike and her own thoughts, giggles. Thanks for the totally awesome review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 06:44 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

And now he is all protective over Buffy's virtue.. Virtue he would like to wrap his body around for a while.

Surprised by the kiss.. of course not her reaction..
Waiting for the 24/7..

Love the banter.. and the little peep show.. for Buffy's sake of course.

Author's Response: LMAO - indeed you are right, 100% correct. Glad you liked the peep show, mmmmmmmm, never could resist undressing him. Can't wait to see your reaction over the 24/7 hapenings in next chappy. Thanks for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 05:57 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

24/7 huh? wonder how they end up being together around the clock ? Do they get to see each other in their every day domestic setting or something? Or is a late night in the old office? Can wait to find out.

Author's Response: Giggles, just wait and see - it's Murphy's Law that brings them together in that 24/7 way - much sparkage and fireworks over that coming up next chapter. Thanks for the review darling. Smooches.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 05:26 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

wonderful chapter. Just hope that Spike stops being an arse. Liked Owen more of him please, a friend for Buffy? If i were her I would be looking for another job by now.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Oh yaya, glad you liked Owen here - he'll make another appearence, I promise. Yup, Spike is A#1 ass here - a ton of growing up to do, but he wil, rest assured, it'll just take him awhile. Thanks for the review sweetheart - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Now look what you've done! I came back to my PC just to check my e-mails and I just couldn't resist reading it!

You know I love this, but I will repeat it for posterity! I LOVE this fic! Their banter has me giggling and the UST is oh-so-HOT! And don't even get me started on the kiss... *drools*

Too bad I'm never gonna have a boss like this (with my dad being one of my bosses and the other being his extremely overweight 55-yr-old best friend... I could just cry right now!)

Can't wait to see the 24/7 come to play or how the meeting with Parker goes *chuckles*

Love you, boo!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHHA, you are sooooooooooooo sweet boo. Ahhhhhhhhhh, the kiss - my evil muse couldn't resist. Hee hee - you know next chapter is like an atom bomb waiting to be set off, *winks*. Thanks for all your help my dear friend and all your review - hugs you tight and a big sloppy kiss for good measure.

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 04:45 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Awesome update! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it sweety and do hope you enjoy the next update.... things really start to get interesting then, *winks*. Thanks for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 04:40 pm Title: Revenge is Sweet, When it Doesn’t Backfire

Can I just say GUH! again to that kiss? Because it was totally droolworhty, panty-melting goodness. If that's one kiss... hell, I can hardly wait for when it's... ahem, more than that. ;) Loved the chapter again, it was the perfect blend of humor and UST that just keeps us begging for more. Soooooo.... more please? *bats eyelashes* Love you, cariño! *smooches*

Author's Response: Hehehehhehe - Spike kissage is always of the good - especially when he's such a bad boy about it. I'm evil, I really am, but oh well, lol. Thanks for all your help mi hermana - get ready for the explosion of next chapter, LMAO. Luv u boo.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2008 - 01:48 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Love how you keep Buffy's motor running. What a fun and enjoyable read!

Author's Response: Giggles - I feel bad writing her as going through this but it's serving a purpose and hey, kinda fun for right now. Glad you enjoyed the chappy darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 02:15 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Looking forward to your next update!! I wonder what she'll wear :)

Author's Response: It'll be torture for SPike, that's allllll I can say, *winks*. THanks for the review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 01:39 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Great chapter! Really enjoying this story. I wonder what he's up to? Maybe a journey? *grins*

Author's Response: Grins and wink, just read and see - thanks darling. Kisses.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2008 - 01:21 pm Title: Beneath Me

I knew it! :p He got her job ;) *off to next chapter*

Author's Response: Hahahahah, yup, he sure did - glad you like it hon and thanks for the review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Read this the other day but the computer jacked up and wouldn't let me leave a review, so being the nice person I am....

Great update! The interaction between Spike and Buffy is wonderful; all that sexual tension and frustration, on top of Spike's crude personality is enough to drive anyone insane.

Cannot wait for the next chapter! I'm on pins and needles waiting to find out what Buffy's plans for the meeting are, not to mention Spike's response.

~Serenity

Author's Response: Sorry to hear about your PC, but I'm glad to know you're enjoying ML and all the tension, giggles, it'll get even more interesting as we move forward, I promise, *winks*. Thanks so very much for the lovely review hon. Huggles.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

It's a wonder how Buffy hasn't started pulling her hair out of her head! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Giggles, she's about to after everything that's transpired, but she's tough, she can stand her ground, *winks*. Glad you liked the chappy darling, more to come soon and thanks for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 - 10:34 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

hee hee love it.

Author's Response: Thanks hon, glad you liked it - smoochies.

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