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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

They are so much fun. So glad he is letting her live up a bit more to her potential. Should we all be so lucky. And their UST is quite impressive. Cannot wait until that bomb goes off. :) Wonder what will come about form that pen, too. That will be a fun argument. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: And he does believe he's putting her talents to better use - and of course her constant complaining earned her the move into his office, but she'll deal with it alright. The pen will come back into play much later, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Ohh when these two finally get it on , there's going to be a massive explosion all over the office, probably on his desk . The tension builds beautifully with each chapter , the banter is great and thier both so snarky ,lol , it's so funny.

Author's Response: Hee hee hee, it will be intense, that's alllllllllll I can say, *winks*. I'm super pleased you're enjoying the laughs hon - that's what will tone down the angst when it comes time. Thanks for the review - smooches.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

At last the good thing is Buffy won't have to work out; Spike is chasing her around too much, ordering her to his office. ;-)
Heh heh (Buffy being too strong for super glue).
Uh-huh... so that was Spike's plan. Bad thing for Buffy is she did indeed complain about the long way. Too bad for her. That solution wasn't the one she was hoping for that's for sure. Oh my and taking off her work.
Well I hope for Buffy that her new position will indeed bring her a pay-rise; she could use it.
And I'm still enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Hi sweety, *waves*. Yup, Buffy's complaints only dug her a deeper grave, lol. But it's all in the name of Murphy's Law. As for her earning more money, yes she'll make a little bit more, that's for sure - and I have a surprise up my sleeve in that arena a little later down the road. Thanks for the review darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

This is just brilliant. Who cares whether Spike is politically correct or not. He's Spike, she's Buffy and you're a genius with words (and what a lot of words there are)! I love long chapters but somehow it's still never enough. Cannot wait for next week.

Author's Response: HAHHAHAH, wow, thank you sooooooooo much for the compliment. You're the perfect type of reader - keeping in mind it's a comedy and to ignore all the PC crap. Thanks for making me smile darling - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 01:43 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

hey u!!!

i laughed till i teared...n rolled over..been reading them again n again...ure brilliant at this :) more more!!! pretty soon please!!! btw..how many chapters r we looking at? :D

Author's Response: YAY, glad I could make you laugh - that's the main goal here behind the romance. Chapters are going to run at around, roughly, 25. I have 18 of them written already and merely polishing them as I post while writing the remainder. So lots of laughs to go. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

Reviewer: SpikesLilChit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Hmmmm....Wonder what kind of outfit Buffy has in mind?!?!? And can I say nice pen?!?! Those pens go up to $80,000!!!! I'm totally loving this story! The UST is sooooooo....ummm.....FANTASTIC! I feel so bad for Buffy....I could only imagine what she is feeling! Things are gonna explode once it hits 24/7!!! This is such a great story!! Fantastic chappie....can't wait for more. BTW...Killer Banner! Hugs~n~Kisses!

PS....It was also nice seeing Willie as more of a friend than a total dirt bag/weasel like most stories portray his character.

Author's Response: Oh I know - I had to research that pen and when I saw all these super expensive ones I about DIED. I mean, hello... it's a freaking PEN, not a diamond, lol. Buffy is definitely having a hard time of it, both with Spike and fighting her attraction to him, but she'll get some of her own back.... eventually, *winks*. ANd yes, especially when it comes to the 24/7 time period - 2 more chapters for that to see fruition. The banner is gorgeous isn't it? I love Spike in a suit, drools. As for Willy, no one ever really uses him as a good guy so I thought why not get him in here and give him some proper screen time. I'm so glad you like seeing him here and thank you very much for the review darling - smooches.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 12:16 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

A $4,200 PEN??????? Holy chocolate covered moses! He may be a total ass, but stingy he ain't.

The UST is so awesome in this chapter. I love how Spike has these little flashes of thoughtfulness (setting up her laptop, noticing how chewed up her pen was, etc.), then turns right around and goes back to being his same dumbhead self. So clueless...hot and sexy, but still clueless.

My mind is going wild with the possibilities of what Buffy's got in her closet. Old prom dress from the 80's, perhaps? LOL

Author's Response: Yup - had to research that one, too. I couldn't believe it either. LMAO on the holy chocolate covered moses comment - too funny. And it's true that while SPike is essentially a pig, he's also thoughtful. It shows thru more and more as the story goes along. As for Buffy's attire, wellllllll, it's not a totally weird surprise, but, it will get's Spike's notice, *winks*. Thank you for the review my friend - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2008 - 12:02 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Hahaha, I can't wait to see what she wears!!

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you enjoyed the luaghs my friend - thanks for the review, hugs.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:35 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

I'm just loving how Spike and Buffy are playing off each other, the two of them working so closely together is bound to be even more explosive as time goes on. ;) And reading their inner thoughts is so much fun. :D
Now for Buffy's outfit... I get the feeling practically anything will turn Spike on... lol! Wonderful update!

Author's Response: They're fit for fireworks, no two ways about it but it's also part of the charm that makes them love to do it, well at least Spike for now, giggles. As for the oufit - you're dead on, Spike will like it no matter what it is, *winks*. Thanks for the review darling. Smoochies.

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:50 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

smashing chapter as usual :)
can't wait to see how this develops!!!!! im genuinely excited; please update again.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, and yup, we'll be getting in deeper and deeper week by week, *winks*. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:46 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Yay! Thanks for updating. :) I'm really diggin' Willie in this storey; he's not a character who sees much fanfic action, and it's rather refreshing to see him in a positive role. :)*

Author's Response: YAY, go Willy. I had to use him and for once, why not make him the good guy - I think he could use a break like that, lol. Glad you enjoyed it hon and thanks so very much for the review. kisses.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 10:32 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Oh, ho,ho.......I like it when Buffy has plans.

He's such a dick. And with them working in the same office, you know the rest of them are going to jump to dirty conclusions unless the door is always left open. And now if Buffy gains any success, people will probably say she's getting it by "catering" to the new boss. Can't believe he thinks he can get away with all that.

It's nice seeing Willy as a good guy. Buffy really needs friends right now!

Author's Response: Hee hee - she's got herself a plan alright, question is...... how will Spike handle it? Giggles. I suppose in a RL situation people would be thinking that, but here, they all know Buffy since she's been there for so long, so no real issues of the politically incorrect as far as the fic goes. I couldn't resist trying to write Willy for a change and as a good guy. I think he deserves it a bit. Thanks for the review darling. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: Pyro63 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:28 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Oh Spike is such a pig. So does it make me bad that I ab-so-fucking-lutely love it? And I love how Buffy hates him (cuz hey, right now, who wouldn't?) but she keeps having lusty thoughts about him that are completely off track from what she should be thinking about. you're right, the fire works are FLYING. I can't wait to see what she has in store for him. Absolutely brilliant sweetie!!

Author's Response: ROFL - nahhhhhh, it's not wrong to love a bad boy, their irreisistable - especially Spike. Buffy can't help herself, I mean yeah, on one hand she hates him on the other - she's still a woman with eyes, giggles. More fireworks ahead, LOTS more. Thanks for the awesome review sweets - hugs.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Oh I can't WAIT to see what she has to wear that will cause him a few intestinal difficulties! Personally, I like the neon dress from the thrift shop idea... kinky! Ooo and the desk and leather chair (hey, I'm fantasizing here) all comfy... mmmm. Holy crap, I know fountain pens are expensive (looked at a Mount Blanc one for $2300) BUT DAMN! Oh, they're getting a little closer....minty fresh breath closer. Mmm Mrs IBE where is their close up?

Author's Response: Oh yes, it's safe to say his stomach will be in knnots, *winks*. LOL - minty fresh breath closer - love that. And their close up??? Pretty soon, pretty soon, promise. I'm thrilled you liked it my friend - YAY - thanks for al the reviews, big sloppy kisses for you.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: Who's the Boss

LOL, sorry that was me, IBE! I forgot to put my name, you flustered me so!

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHAHHA, np, boo. smoochies.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Ok, I'm reminded of Dolly Parton in 9 to 5 with Dabney Coleman trying to look down her dress! And I love the 'assets' line...I've heard it a million times! Oooo and I want to haul off and kick the shit out of Spike, LOL! Can't wait to see what little cocky britches himself has planned for poor Buffy!

Author's Response: Ah yes, I remember that movie, it was great. Couldn't help the assets line, it's just too perfect not to have in here, hee. Spike will get a little bit tortured here next chapter - that's all I can say for now, *winks*. But he does continue to be a bad rude man, giggles. Thanks for the review hon. Hugs.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:27 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Great story and I am sure hard to write - the funny ones always are. Can't wait to see what she wears.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the compliment and review. Yes, it isn't always easy, but after it's put together I do have a good sense of satisfaction when my readers have a good laugh. Thanks again darling. Hugs.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:17 pm Title: Beneath Me

See? This is why I wait a couple of chapters before beginning a story... I don't like dealing with cliffys, even though I love dishing them out...yeah, I know, hypocritical of me. Oh well! I did see this coming, but oh, I know it will delicious! It will be interesting to see how long they both last...him falling in love and her giving in. Sigh.

Author's Response: lmao - I can understand that, I do that too sometimes, just wait til a few are up. Cliffies are so deliciously evil aren't they? HEE HEE HEE. As for the falling in love - oh yeah, it'll happen, but it will be a stubborn ride on both their parts, *winks*. Thanks for the review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 07:00 pm Title: First Impressions are Everything

Ok, so I love your fics...In the Army Now was just mmmm mouthwatering. So I'm trying this one too :D. I LOVE snarky, cocky, full of himself Spike! And I have to say, I've acted like Buffy before, and been called a beotch in the process. I can't wait to see with this one goes! And I love her thought: I feel offically violated now. It just struck me as funny...haven't the faintest idea why. I'm crazy, who knows? Great beginning, and I'm reading on!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHA, I can't imagine anyone calling you a beotch darling, you're so sweet and funny. Yeah, I got me a weakness for a cocky Spike - guilty as charged. But of course I like an equally strong, take no shit, Buffy too. I'm so glad you've begun reading ML and are enjoying it my friend - and I'm off to answer your next review - thank you darling - smooches.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

The entire business with Buffy's broken heel was laugh out loud funny, and I love that her myriad of complaints has just prompted Spike to move her into his office. There's no escaping him now.

Poor Buffy, she can't catch a break. She's softening toward Spike despite herself, and it's a lot of fun to read. Poor Spike, too. He pushes Buffy's buttons even when he's trying to be generous. The expensive pen, rather than making Buffy all warm and gooey, made her seethe with anger. Maybe once she's gotten a couple commission checks, she'll feel a bit more kindly. Yeah, right!

Thanks for another highly entertaining chapter.

Author's Response: Giggles - she just keeps diggin her own grave in a way, poor thing. But Spike will get his, he will, *winks*. He can be nice too of course - little things here and there, but yeah, he loves to push her buttons and won't be stopping any time soon. Glad you enjoyed the chappy darling - thanks for the great review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 06:47 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

you have just completely made my day. this was fantastic. always love your writing, :D

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for the compliment and review. I'm just glad I was able to make your day in any way. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 04:44 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

More, more, more, more!!!!

I can't get enough of this!!!

Author's Response: LOL - I'll provide, I promise. I'm thrilled you're enjoying it so much sweety and thanks for the review. Huggles.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 02:58 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

That was fun I loved it. Can't wait to see this outfit.


Author's Response: Thank you honey, glad you enjoyed the laughs and of course thanks for the great review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 12:12 pm Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Ok... just moving her into his office.. Still wondering about her apartment.. You did say 24-7...

Oh that UST.. and she is a tough little thing.. and of course he is a jerk.. but determined.

Enjoying.. waiting to hear about the outfit..

Author's Response: Oh yes, 24/7... that part has yet to play out though, and it will very, very, soon, *winks*. I think you'll get a kick out of what happens in that arena. I'm pleased you're enjoying the UST and banter, poor Spikey, he has so much to learn, lol. Thanks for the review sweety. Kisses.

Reviewer: zyromos Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: First Impressions are Everything

LOL, where do you come up with this stuff. Its great!

Author's Response: Giggles - the dark recesses of my perverted and somewhat twisted mind. Glad you're enjoying it sweety and thanks for the review. Hugs.

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