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Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:59 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

This is so great!! Loving every snarky comment and the Spuffy goodness. Witty, sparkly and a really good read!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the compliments, I truly appreciate it. I do love to make people laugh and the personality clash I've created here will hopefully keep everyone in stiches. Thanks for the review - huggles.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:57 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Can't wait to see what her outfit is! Thanks for the update, read ya next week!

Author's Response: Hee hee, she'll be trying her best to get even with him - the thing is, will it work, or will Murphy's Law come into play yet again, *winks*. Thank you for the review darling.... hugs.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:10 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

*rofl* Loved the long chapter! It was brilliant as always. Love that she's affected by him on some level, even if she'd never accept it, and he's such a bad boy... Yumm! And I do emphasize the boy part, he has some serious growing up to do. *giggles* But what a delicious journey I'm sure it'll be. Fantastic chapter and yay for weekly updates! It was a pleasure to help you, you know that. I should be the one thanking you for keeping me sane. *smooches*

Author's Response: She's definitely not immune to him but she's fighting like hell, huh? Giggles - UST, gotta love it. And thank you thank you thank you soooooooo much for putting up with me last night through all the preparation, it means the world to me as do you. Luv u carino.

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Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:10 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

Oh, honey, I love, love, LOVE every single word of this story!

I can never get enough (as you must have figured by now :P)

Can't wait to see what Buffy is planning on wearing the next day! *giggles*

Luv ya lots!!!
*hugs you tight*

Author's Response: Giggles - it was a fun chapter huh? And thanks so much for all your help - I ove your suggestions to death. Luv ya boo - smooches.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2008 - 11:09 am Title: Could Things Get Any Worse?

i am really looking forward to seeing Spike get what's coming to him, hope its buffy leaving for a better, higher paid job with thier opposition!!! He is an ass and i love it
more soon please

Author's Response: Hee hee, welllllll, it may not be that as they'll be stuck together, but she does try and get a bit of revenge on him. Glad you liked it honey and thanks for the great review. Hugs.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 07:43 pm Title: Beneath Me

Another fantastic chapter. The tension is on its way to spiking very soon.

Author's Response: Giggles, oh yes, the tension is spiraling upwards for sure. Glad you liked the chappy hon, thanks for the great review. Hugs.

Reviewer: ooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 03:39 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Thanks for the recommendation theartist. I'm looking for AU stories though. Her stories are based off the show. Where Buffy is the slayer and Spike is the vampire. I great appreciate your help though.

Take care.

Author's Response: Good suggestions she had, but yeah, they're not AU. Kisses darling.

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 01:33 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Oh my god!!!! Just got through with the 3rd chapter and I'm dying for your next updates. I love this, the constant sparring of words between these two is hilarious, yet at the same time like verbal foreplay. Buffy is definitely good at giving back to what Spike dishes out. Please please please let the updates come soon!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL, that's great. The next update will be soon, I promise. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it dalinrg and thanks so much for the review. Smooches.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 09:14 am Title: First Impressions are Everything

Great start! I bet they are going to work together ;) This will be hilarious :p / Ariadne

Author's Response: Thanks darling, I hope you continue to enjoy the updates. Huggles.

Reviewer: theartist Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Who's the Boss

First of all, I just wanted to tell you that I've enjoyed all of your stories. At the moment, I'm enjoying this story as well. Keep up the good work.


P.S. To oooooooooooo
I recommend you read some of dreamsofspike's stories. I don't know if you've ever read any or not. There are a couple of her stories, for example Belonging, that portray Spike as the tortured vampire, and Buffy as the one who needs to be redeemed.

Author's Response: Great suggestions, though I think she's looking for an AU. And I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story so far. Thank you very, very much for the review sweetheart. Kisses.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2008 - 10:43 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Thanks again for understanding where I'm coming from IBE. Instead of just criticizing your fic she turned it personal. That's what upset me. I'm sorry for turning your fb section into a war zone, but I just couldn't let this go. But from here on out I will acquiesce your wishes and speak of it no further. No hard feelings? I hope so. I also hope this hasn't killed your desire to continue on with this fic. That I would really regret. :(

On the upside I'm glad I could make you laugh. I do try to keep some sort of balance by injecting a sense of humor into my "fiery" rants. If you're going to wank, at least be funny. That way I don't feel like a total loser nerd for arguing on the internets.


Author's Response: Thank you darling and of course there's no hard feelings. I just felt it was best to post my own review before it got any worse. I'm still working away on ML, matter of fact I have 18 chapters total that are finished - just need polishing - and perhaps 5 more to go before finishing. So I'm in too deep to quit now, giggles. Oh yes, I thoroughly enjoyed your sense of humor and agree if your gonna say something, inject a laugh or two. Thanks again hon for respecting my wishes. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: oooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I completely agree with you IBE. Again, which is why I feel that if the author does not have a problem with it. Others really shouldn't say anything cause it is only going to start something.

Part of the reason why I didn't blow up is because you have been nothing but respectful. You truly seem like a classy woman.

I can understand how my opinion may offend some people. Opinions can do that. But like I said, I stand by it. I will continue to stand by it until I see some AU stories where Buffy needs to be redeem. The more new AU stories that I see that has Spike a womanizer, ass, dick, jerk, and so on. Where Buffy is written to be the person he changes for and no AU stories where Buffy needs to be redeem. The more I stand by my opinion. People don't have to like it. It is my opinion.

I will try to no longer post this stuff on your review page. Ari may not like me. I don't see her disrespecting you though. So, I think we both will back off.


On to more positive things.

I am pleased that you will read my story. That means so much. You are a wonderful writer. I will get in touch with you when my story is done or where I think it is ready. All I can is getting ready for angst though. Buffy being verbally and physically abusive is not pretty.

Thanks again



Author's Response: Thank you hon, I truly appreciate it - and am looking forward to seeing what you've come up with for your story. Take care.

Reviewer: ooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:07 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Call me what you want Ari. It is not like I give a fuck on what you think about me. Like you shouldn't give a fuck on what I think of you. I don't think badly of you right now anyways. So, call me a misogynist. It doesn't hurt me. I would really have problems if I hated women. Being that I am a woman. But think what you want.


Yes, Buffy was a hero but so were many others on the show I don't hold her as any more special than the rest of the scoobies. Who also put their life on the line to help save the world. They were all heroes and they ALL made huge mistakes.

Of course Spike wasn't even close to being a saint. He was a vampire for goodness sake. But what he was able to do. Turn away from what he is and what vampires do. Really makes Spike special.

Yes, I would like to read an AU story where Buffy needs to redeem herself. Is it so wrong that I want to read something different. That I don't want to read the same stereotypes stories. I am sorry that bothers you. Sorry if you think I am a women hater. I am not.

Anyways

IBE, I have a favor to ask from you. I want to know if you would like to read over my story when I am finished with it. It would probably be a while. But I would like to get your opinion on it.

My story has William and Buffy as a couple. Buffy being abusive to William/Spike.

So, one can say that I am kind of keeping the characters in canon. Well, at least Buffy. Buffy abusing Spike where you see in season 6.

So, would you want to read once I am finished with it. I will understand if you didn't want to read it. I mean if it bothers you or if you don't want to read it. It is a hard story to read and heartbreaking.

Thanks IBE. No hard feelings if you don't want to read my story.



Author's Response: When I’m in beta mode, nothing bothers me, so I’d be happy to take a look at your story whenever you’re ready, darling and you can contact me through my home page here at TSR.

Reviewer: Blood Faerie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 06:57 pm Title: First Impressions are Everything

I find it funny that the people who leave rude msgs on these sites are the ones that don't have the balls to create actual accounts or sign in to theirs...

Author's Response: Good point, very good point, thanks boo, luv u to pieces.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Read between the lines? When you say that, do you mean you don't believe she said anything against women and I'm just being oversensitive and misinterpreting her words? Or you do see that she said some personally offensive things about all of us here but choose to accept and allow her insults? :(

And I did read between the lines which is why I'm pretty sure I know what I read and it made me feel really uncomfortable. Besides basically calling you and all your readers here man haters. You have to wonder about someone who so DESPERATELY wants to see Buffy, a character known as a strong female heroin, be turned into a horrible despicable bitch that needs to be redeemed by a good man. ZOMG she's cured of her sinful ways by the healing powers of Spike's magical cock. LOL. Gag me. Sounds like a typical misogynists wet dream to me. She can deny it all she wants, but someone who truly favors women and men equally wouldn't care for either extremes.

I know you said you respect all others but don't you think there should be a line? Like pedophiles, rapists and serial killers why should I respect anything they have to say? With scum like that in the world I totally disagree that there's no such thing as a wrong or stupid opinion. Some people just don't deserve to have their opinions respected and someone I have come to the conclusion is a deeply stupid closet misogynist would be one of those people. I'm not trying to convince you to take my side. Actually I just simply couldn't resist my compulsion to spread my message of hatred, wank and cuntiness to the world. Mwahaha. *snerk*



Author's Response: No, I don’t think you’re being oversensitive at all. She clearly has a strong opinion, one of which I may not agree with, I just don’t think it behooves me to step outside of being anything but neutral for fear of causing a complete upheaval and then have the review system abused as a means of bickering back and forth. I do think it offended a lot of people here what she said, and though I could have taken some of it personally, I’m choosing not to. In saying that, the only I thing I’ve allowed thus far is for the reviews to remain posted, however, if anyone comes back here, her included, to simply continue to insult you or any other reviewer, I reserve the right to delete the comment. I don’t think Pari or RoMo would approve of me allowing a personal war to dominate the review section of a story. Yes, there should be a line drawn here, I agree. I don’t like how abusive it’s getting, to see you upset, or anyone for that matter. So what I’m planning to do is to post a review on my own story here asking people to please just use the chat box or leave email addresses for one another and leave it at that. In a day or two, I’ll delete it. I do have to say you had me rolling with laughter at Spike’s magical cock and the cuntiness comment. Thanks, I needed that laugh, I really did. I sort of had a headache at this point. Thanks darling.

Reviewer: ooooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 09:12 am Title: Who's the Boss

//I see it as I see it too. I see that the reason why there there are ton of stories where Spike is an an ass and Buffy the saint is because it is women who write it. They want to to see that men are the evil ones and women are the good ones. It is the way I see it. It is so typical.//


Forgot to add that my quote above this. Is what I truly believe. Until I see more or I should say any stories where Buffy is horrible and needs to redeem herself. I will continue to believe that. The more I see different authors continue to have Spike an ass and needs to redeem himself. I will believe more and more what I said.


Sorry if that offends anybody, It is just my opinion.


Most of all I am sorry to IBE. That is why I say what I say. If you don't have a problem with me. Which I take it you didn't. Other people should not say anything. Unless, it was like those couple of people who were trying to help me. Other than that something ugly usually starts when others come in. Again, just my opinion. But look what happened with Ari. So, it turns out to be true.

I will no longer post about my feelings on this issue anymore, IBE. That is unless, someone else may reply to my post. I usually reply back. Just like you. I like to reply back. I hope nobody does though. I don't want to start a big mess on your story.

I might tried reading this. If I can stomach it. But if I do. I will be sure to leave a review. If not. I will be waiting for your next story. Hopefully, one where Spike doesn't need to redeem himself. Maybe, where it isn't all about sex with them at first. I know hopeful thinking. LOL

Thanks again.

Author's Response: I don't have a problem with people's views, not even if they clash with my own. Being able to see things from every perspective and angle outside of one's shoes helps me to round out and balance my thinking. It doesn't matter whether I still stick to one opinion or another, what's important is that I appreciate and respect all others - a personal philosophy of mine. I wouldn't try and dissuade or persuade anyone to my line of thinking other than to put it out there for consideration and what they do with it is out of my control. If you do choose to continue with ML, you can also wait until a few more chapters have been posted. That's always helped me sometimes when a story is difficult for me to continue for awhile. Though it's still more likely than not, not going to be what you're looking for, I can only hope you overlook what you don't care for about it and find some measure of enjoyment in it for other aspects. Take care, hon.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 08:39 am Title: Who's the Boss

Oh Ari, you make me laugh. You got it backwards though. I will not lower myself and call you names . You already are lower than me by doing that.

I am female not a male by the way.


That is why I say that people who have a probelm with me besides the author should not say anything. They are only looking to start something.

But thank you for not putting words in my mouth this time. Much appreciated.

Sorry IBE. Ari, must be on her period or something.

Author's Response: Uhmmm, I'm gonna leave this one alone only because it wasn't directed at me. I appreciate your apology though sweety and hope you have a good day.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:42 am Title: Who's the Boss

I hereby volunteer to be beneath Spike at any time day or night.

Anyway - love it!!! He now respects her, maybe she'll see some of his strengths too.

Loving the dialogue! and the snarkyness!!

Author's Response: Amen to that sister - call me what you want, but I love bad boys, even dated a few in my single days. They're just so bad, you gotta love them. And yes, he does hold a healthy respect for Buffy's brains and she will come to realize - rather quickly I might add - his better attributes as well. It's a ll in the works and it all serves a purpose. Thanks for the great review sweets and take care, kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:30 am Title: Beneath Me

He he - well since it was in the summary it was har not to see it coming - but it was still gooooooood! Loved the piggiebank immagery. Can't wait for more - so I wont - I'll just go straight on to the next chappie since its up ; )

Author's Response: Good, glad to see the delivery of the predictable went well - it had to be done, so I tried to make it as humorous as possible. Giggles, glad to see you're still enjoying it and of course I'll be looking for your next review and hope you like ch 3 just as much. Thanks for the great review, hon. Huggles.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:18 am Title: First Impressions are Everything

First off I so happy to see you back here and writing, because I love your stories. This one rocks so far - cant wait to read more of the UST with Buffy coming out on top in this chapter, but I have a feeling that might not last.

Author's Response: THanks hon - it really does feel good to be back. And yay, i'm happy you liked the first chappy and hope you like the next two as well. It's one of those bumpy funny rides on the way to love. Yup, lots of UST to come first before things finally happen. Thanks so much for the review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 03:57 am Title: Who's the Boss

Still here, right with ya! More ASAP, please!
And, I dunno, this Spike is sorta fascinatin', iif he wasn't such a Prick, in a bossy, a la 'James Spader' "Secretary" sort of way....can we expect Buffy to start wearing restraints any time soon? LOL!
Thx,
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~

Author's Response: LMFAO - it's so funny you mention that movie, I thought about it myself several times while writing this story. Alas, no cutting or shitting thyself on one's boss' chair, ewwwwww, LMAO. More snark to come and witty banter soon. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter - even though Spike really is an ass, lol. Thanks sweety - smooches to you.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 03:19 am Title: Who's the Boss

//I see it as I see it too. I see that the reason why there there are ton of stories where Spike is an an ass and Buffy the saint is because it is women who write it. They want to to see that men are the evil ones and women are the good ones. It is the way I see it. It is so typical.//

Would you shut the fuck up and go away? Now you're just being offensive making blanket statements about women. You don't fucking know me or anyone else here personally to pass judgment like that. But I've read enough of the bullshit you've spewed here to realize what a woman hating misogynist YOU ARE. Heck yeah I am better than you. And from now on I will not lower myself any further by continuing to engage with some.... thing like you that's not even worth the shit on the bottom of my shoe. *throws you into a landfill among the rest of the garbage you belong with* HAHAHA

I'm sorry I'mBloodyEnglish. I don't give crap what that dumbass thinks about me but I hope you can understand what set me off like this. For the sake of all females I freaking pray that that was a man who said all these asinine and ignorant remarks because the alternative is just depressing. I would explain point by point on how whateverthefuckitsnameis whole POV is rooted in deep misogyny and possible self-hatred if they're indeed a woman, but I'd like to think it's not necessary for me to do so? I seriously feel like to puke.

Author's Response: I understand sweety, I do. Sometimes it's tough not to get offended and hey, you've as much right to you're opinions as the next person. I try my best to take a step back and read between the lines before I react, and even then sometimes it's difficult. I guess for me, it just isn't worth my time to do battle with anyone when I have enough RL daily drama and consider writing as my outlet, my escape, my special haven so to speak. I'm an upbeat person for the most part and to be dragged down by anything or anyone is just so draining and my kids need me too much for me to be in a bad mood over something that has nothing to do with them. I do understand what set you off and I appreciate your fiery enthusiasm - you even made me laugh out loud at a couple things you said. I can honestly say you've no need to apologize to me sweety, you did what you felt you had to and that takes more guts than anything. I do hope you enjoy the next chapter I have planned - a bit more of the snark and then the chapter after that, Spike's surprise it revealed, *winks*. Hugs you tight, honey.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 01:23 am Title: Who's the Boss

Forgot to ask something. This is what you said IBE

"I said I try to keep a certain level of canon in their personalities"


Right. That is why I asked. Why write Spike as a womanizer if that is the case? If you have no problem writing Buffy unlike Faith as you put it. Again, I am not telling you what you can't write or can write. I would never tell somebody that. So, those who read this please understand that. I am just asking. I just don't understand.

Thanks IBE. You truly seem like a great person.

Author's Response: I guess I'm just not explaining it very well. It's still too early in the story to see the smidgeon bits of what is canon about his personality. From what you've seen so far, the only canon thing about him that's visible is the snarky comments related to sexual innuendos. He never did shy away from making innuendos in btvs towards Buffy. I guess that's the only way I can think of to explain it. It's still too early in the fic for the other stuff to become visible, plus I'm not borrowing tons of canon Spike for this story, just little bits here and there, that's why I said a certain level. It's always a delicate balance in AU how much to include, when, where, in what form, in what situations, but no, as for btvs SPike being a womanizer, he never really was and that's not a canon SPike at all. You said it well when you explained his devotion to Buffy and Dru and that Harmony was the only peron he really used. So that's not the canon I was inserting into his personality at all, that's purely my ficitional make up of him for AU's sake . For now, it's tiny things here and there, very subtle things. Hopefully I did a better job of explaining it this time. Take care darling.

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Date: 02/07/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Who's the Boss

Again, I would like to say thanks for your reply.

I see it as I see it too. I see that the reason why there there are ton of stories where Spike is an an ass and Buffy the saint is because it is women who write it. They want to to see that men are the evil ones and women are the good ones. It is the way I see it. It is so typical.

I am writing a story where Buffy needs to be redeem. It is almost finish. But I probably won't post it. At least not anytime soon. But it isn't the same when you are the author. I have tried so hard to see if an author wants to write a story like this or to find stories like this . I haven't had much luck. Which is why I believe what I believe. Men= Ass Women= Saint
To most Spuffy authors.

The stories you listed I have read. I didn't see Buffy as terribly bad in those stories. Just a woman who is confuse. Not the same way on how authors make Spike. Where Spike is so mean that you don't want Buffy and Spike to end up together. Thanks anyways.

I still don't understand how Buffy will be like Faith if she was a man-eater. But just a woman who is a man-eater who could be such a different person than Faith. . I just don't understand why people say that. But to each their own I guess.

You are right. This story isn't for me. Spike needs to be redeem and he is beneath Buffy. Sounds to cliche for me.



Hi galatea.

Nice to see that many people are interested in what I have to say.

I didn't say that stories that Spike is an ass gets more reviews. I said that I have noticed that stories that do have Spike as an ass tends to get tons of reviews. There are certain authors and certain type of stories that usually gets many many reviews. Like you said Addie is one of them and HollyDB. Which is great for them. I just feel for those authors who don't even get nearly half of those reviews.

I agree with you that on the internet people have a right to express their opinion. Believe me. I am all for having the right to express your opinion. Good or Bad. But I also believe that if certain people have a problem with me or with my review. Which I still see nothing wrong with it. Then people shouldn't reply to my post. It really only makes me want to reply back and so on. So, to each their own I guess. Really if the author doesn't have a problem with it. I really do feel that some people are looking to start something. That is just my opinion.

I want to thank you for listing some stories for me. I am appreciate it. LIke you said though, those are not AU stories. I want an AU story where Buffy needs to redeem herself for being so bad. Terribly bad I must say. Thanks anyways.


To Ari

I think we have clash before.

First of all. I am not an Angel/ Buffy fan. So, why will I want to read those stories.

Second of all. I never said that Spike wasn't an ass or was a saint on the show. I am tired of people putting words in my mouth. If you want to reply to me. Please, don't put quotes in my mouth. I said that Spike really wasn't a womanizer. There is a difference.

And I agree with you. That part of makes Spuffy, Spuffy is all of the snark and sexual tension. That doesn't mean you have to prefer stories that are all about sex. Or where there is graphic sex scenes all throughout the story or a lot of sexual innuendos . My preference is that there are sex scenes but it doesn't need to be a whole lot. Not to say that I don't enjoy stories that have a lot of sex in it. It is just not my preference.

And here is a direct quote from you, Ari

"Keep doing what you're doing Im_bloody_English. You're always gonna find a few readers who aren't happy until Spike is completely neutered and housebroken but I think the majority of us have enough braincells to realize you don't really condone his behavior but you HAD to create those scruples in the character for the purposes of the story...."


Really. Do you think you are a better person than me by putting me down like this. When I have not say one bad thing on here. I have never said that IBE condones Spike's behavior. Don't put words in my mouth.

No hard feelings those sweetie.


Thanks again, IBE for the reply. That was so great of you.



Author's Response: Sorry the stories I listed didn't work out, those were the only 2 I could think of that might have come close to what you were looking for. And I think cordykitten was just fab to put the links out there for where you can go to post a challenge. If you do, I'm sure somebody will pick up on it, most challenges get picked up and pretty fast too. That's great to hear you've been writing and are almost finished. Please don't shy away form posting though, it can be really scary to do at first, hell, I always have a huge case of the bundled nerves whenever I put something new out there, but it's a risk worth taking b/c I know some will enjoy it. So I encourage you to do so when you're finished and beta'd and all that. I enjoy the classics, I admit, but I wouldn't be opposed to reading your version of Buffy at all - it sounds interesting. It's hard, especially as an author, to come up with something original and you have an origianl idea that I think people would jump on. Take care sweety and email me if you need or want to concerning your story if I can be of any help.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Who's the Boss

God, what is he planning. I am so looking forward to what's next. Their sparring is so much fun. Lovely, devious, chapter.

Author's Response: Hee hee hee - just wait and see - it won't be apparent until next chapter, but then again it won't actually happen until the chapter after that. I felt the need to build it up a bit. Glad you liked the banter - its part of the fun and sparks our couple share. Thanks for the review darling. SMooches.

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