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Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 05:33 pm Title: Who's the Boss

great update, hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Thank sweety, and thanks for the email too - hugs.

Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:44 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Boy but Spike is an arrogant prick isn't he? He's certainly met his match in 'Just Plain Buffy' tho. Poor girl, good thing she can certainly hold her own. Though I have to agree with him that Angry Hte Sex is pretty hot... lol
Great update, you left me amused and pining for the next one.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he's as bad as they come, welllll, not quite - you'll see what I mean in a few more chapters, *winks*. But yes indeed Buffy roasts his goose good thru it all. Mmm, mmm, mmmmmmmm, hot angry sex - i'm a sucker for it, guilty as charged, lol. Glad you like the chappy darling and thanks so very much for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:40 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Seems as if Spike loves to upset (prick) Buffy a bit or he really doesn't know how she was taking that. Well he knows now ;-)
So there is more to Spike getting the job as only getting back to Buffy. *wonders*
Mmmm Spike is already impressed.
Indeed, banter and fireworks :)
I wonder whom Spike is calling now.
Still with you :) And looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi sweety, thanks for getting in touch with Edgehead for me, we chatted this morning and she's a wonderful person, very witty and smart. Yup, SPike does appreciate Buffy for more than the obvious, and that will go a long way with him during the story. As for the phone cal, *giggles*, you thought you saw fireworks before - heee hee heee, be prepared, that's alllllll I can say. Thanks for the review my friend. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:24 pm Title: Who's the Boss

First of all, I like to thank you for taking the time to reply back to me.

For me, I personally am tired of reading Spike the ass and Buffy the "saint". Spike learning the errors of his ways. Buffy the sweet one who he changes for. Please Buffy and come save Spike and make him a better person. He would have never be a good person without saint Buffy.

I wouldn't be as tired of these stories if authors took the time to write it the other way around. Where Buffy is written so bad that readers don't like her. Not that I want to see bad Buffy and innocent Spike. But I would love to read an AU story where Buffy has to redeem herself.

You say that there are some AU stories out there like that and other authors have told me the same thing. But I have trouble finding them. So, if you could please list me some of the stories out there like that. I would be most grateful. So, far all of the people I asked have never listed them. I wonder if it is because they don't want to or because there are no stories like this. I don't want stories where Buffy is a little bad. I want her terribly bad like some of the stories have Spike.

You also say that writing Buffy a man-eater is like Faith. I have that seen excuse so many times. But this is an AU and people have no trouble writing Buffy the complete opposite from her character on the show. She would not be like Faith. She would be like a woman who treats men like things and uses them for what they can give them. talking about gold diggers and such. Also, why write Spike a womanizer if you want to keep characters in canon? Spike is by far a womanizer. If anything he is the opposite. The only woman he uses was Harmony. That is Harmony we are talking about. But Dru and Buffy used him so much. So, why write Spike as the womanizer. I personally think because most authors are women. It is better writing the man as the ass and the woman the sweet one who he realizes that he is beneath her and must change into a man she can loved.

Sorry, to hear that your husband is away. That must be terrible. I like stories that have nice sex scenes. I am just not too crazy about stories that are just about sex. Not that your stories don't have plot. But I love your writing and it would be nice to see a story that isn't about sex with them at first. Part of loving Spuffy, Is that there was a lot of sexual tension between them. But I always believed it was more than that. So, when I read stories I like seeing the soft side of Spuffy. The loving side which I find more appealing. Like when Spike says to Buffy that holding her was the best night of his life. Not the sex but being that close to her was. That is why reading Spike as the womanizer is hard to do. Cause when I think of his character from the show. he so is not a womanizer. He is love's bitch. A man who does anything for love. Not a man who uses woman. If anything it is Buffy the one who uses the men who love her. Riley and Spike.

So, if you could please direct me to those AU stories that have Buffy terrible. I would be most thankful.

I thought this story was going to be a little angst. Now, I read that you are planning to write Spike a major ass. Yeah, going to pass on this. Have had enough of these stories. I mean I might tried reading this. I might be able to stomach another one of these stories.


Author's Response: No problem sweety, I always answer reviews. It sounds like you’re having a hard time finding a fic that suits your particular predilections. It’s not that authors don’t take the time to write things the other way around, believe me. We, I, take a lot of time to write, hours in fact, but it’s to write things the way we see it rather than what readers want. There are so many readers here and on other spuffy sites, that it would be impossible to please everyone and a fool’s job to try and take that on. I write what’s in my head and it doesn’t come easy or fast by any means. When I post, I know what I create isn’t going to tickle everyone’s fancy and I’m okay with that. Call me dull, but I prefer the classic stereotype themes and it probably is because I’m a woman, lol.

As for other stories out there that may, may, contain what you’re looking for, the only 2 I can think of – off the top of my head - is Wish I was Your Someone by beasleysmom and Silently Broken by Suzee. You can also try using the chat board on the home page here at TSR and ask around and/or search LJ communities centered around spuffy as there are stories that authors only post there and no where else. If you can’t find anything among those sources, my only suggestion would be for you to possibly consider writing one yourself, the process can be grueling but fun as well.

To me, meaning just me personally, a man-eating Buffy is a Faith type personality, it’s not an excuse sweety, that’s just how I see it, just me. I don’t ever intend to write a really bad Buffy that needs redemption – perhaps one who makes mistakes and needs to earn forgiveness as in the case of TE but that’s as far as I’ll take it.

Also, please go back and re-read my previous response from ch 2. I never said I want to keep the characters in canon or even as close to canon as possible, I said I try to keep a certain level of canon in their personalities. As with any AU, they’re going to show differences in action and responses to situations that are fictional which subsequently requires an author to ‘make it up’. True, most authors here are women, but there are some male ones as well. You can try out stories from lostboy, TestaALT and drkdevin. Those I know for sure are men.

Beyond that, I still believe this isn’t the story for you and would be more than likely a waste of your time. You should consider taking up writing and perhaps simply write what it is you want to see, your own vision and what speaks to your heart the most. Though it is a serious investment of your personal time, it’s also a very a rewarding experience you wouldn’t regret. Take care sweety and good luck on your fic hunting.

Reviewer: Fia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:13 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Argh. You're evil! Can't wait to see what Spike has in plan (what's the phonecall all about!?) and feel a little bit sorry for the fellow - I sure as hell wouldn't say no to a lunch date with Spike. Update soon!

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, he's got a plan for her alright, just wait and see what kind of fireworks go off after he's executed it, hee hee hee. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Fia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:07 pm Title: Beneath Me

Poor Buffy! No promotions, although I am guilty of wanting Spike to drive her crazy by being her boss! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHAH, adn he will drive her crazy too, no doubt about that. It's how she handles it that will make his life more interesting as well, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweety. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Fia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:02 pm Title: First Impressions are Everything

Absolutely loved the first chapter. Love how you've captured Buffy's fierce nature, combined with Spike's cocky arrogance which makes the perfect battle of wills! Cannot wait to read further.

Author's Response: YAY - I think the strong personalities will make for the best fireworks, so I chose them to be that way. Can't stand a weak minded Buffy myself. I'm so glad you enjoyed it hon, thank you so much for the reivew. Kisses.

Reviewer: jennybear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 03:02 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Woah, what a jerk Spike's being. He is showing that he acknowledges how competent and smart Buffy is, but he still gets his kicks ordering her all over the place. He must know how much it sucks for her that she should have gotten the job. Buffy’s a bigger chic than me, because I’m not sure I could handle a situation like that too well. I know she’s got finances to think about, but to have to swallow her pride that much must be truly difficult. The sparks are exploding all over the place though, and that’s so intriguing. I am guessing that Spike’s going to move her into his office somehow, and it should be interesting to see how Buffy handles that. I can’t wait for the tables to get turned on him though. He’s used to having whatever woman strikes his fancy and so right now Buffy’s just a conquest. But, I hope soon Buffy gets some of her own back here. Your storytelling is amazing as always. I am thoroughly enjoying it and I can’t wait to see how Buffy turns this around.

Author's Response: Indeed he's a right ass - but he'll keep getting it handed back to him, no worries on that end. Buffy is a tough gal here. A little later on, he'll see things from her pov and that's when he begins to soften a bit, I promise. And yes, the sparks are going to fly once his plan goes into action, *winks* - hope you enjoy that part when I get to it. I really enjoyed your review hon, it was awesome, thank you. Hugs.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 02:18 pm Title: Who's the Boss

I'm loving this fic! Looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I'm pleased you're enjying it. There's more fun ahead so stay tuned. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 02:03 pm Title: Who's the Boss

God is Spike hot when he's above Buffy, on every level! *wink* luving the story, cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you like him this way and I promise more to come soon. THank you so very much for the review sweets. Kisses.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:19 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Lost my post... so.

Enjoy the banter between the two.. even though Spike is definitely an arrogant ass. But Buffy is tough. Can't help but think he is moving in to her apartment or moving her next to him.. from your summary.." together 24-7 and forced together in everyway"? Hmm

Wondering the reason for Liam's appointment of Spike.. already a hint we will find out soon.

He doesn't seem to mind the age difference.. today not a big deal. Just so he can get her in bed.. and prove to himself that he is still irresistible. LOL

Enjoying..

Author's Response: Ahhhhhhhh, got your wheels spinning I see. I think you'll be pleasantly surprised how what your thinking comes around and happens, *winks*. THat's all I can say without giving too much away. And of course its banter all the way to spuffy luvin at the end. Nope, he doesn't mind the age diff. It's not that huge a gap and isn't frowned upon much in this day and age - thank god. Thanks for the lovely review - smoochies to you, darling.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:12 pm Title: Who's the Boss

The snappy dialogue between Buffy and Spike is awesome. Spike might be a pig, but Buffy is definitely holding her own against him... I just love when Buffy is all fiesty like this. :D Wonderful chapter!
You have a great week too! :D

Author's Response: YAY, i'm pleased you like their personalities - they're equals in a way, the ying to the yang so to speak. Thanks so much for the review and I hope you enjoy next chapter as well. Hugs.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:03 pm Title: Who's the Boss

Honey you ROCK!!! Absolutely loved their banter, and the way Buffy gives as good as she takes!

You had me giggling throughout the chapter but this:
Liam may consider him an asset, but she felt he was off by two letters. had me ROFL!

Can't wait to read what's next!!!

Love you (and love this ass of a Spike too!!!)

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHHA - you know me, gotta let Buffy have her opinions. Thanks for all your help on this darling - SPike wouldn't quite be the ass he is without you and Dusty, hee hee hee. Luv you boo.

Reviewer: smokey56 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 12:42 pm Title: First Impressions are Everything

I relly like this so far! Spike is such a conceited jerk! Buffy is in for a hard time dealing with him. Can't wait to see how you are going to deal with these two!

Author's Response: Giggles, they'll go back and forth until the inevitable - spuffy love, *winks*. Hope you continue to enjoy the ride and thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 12:33 pm Title: Who's the Boss

This story just keeps better and better and despite Spike being a womanizer pig, I can't stop liking him. *shakes head at self* Of course, I also love how Buffy cuts him down to size everytime as well and how she tries to stay in denial over her attraction to him, while her thoughts betray her. *giggles*

It's a pleasure helping you, darling! You know that. *smooches* Love you, cariño!

Author's Response: Giggles - I have a penchant for him like this - i'll probably go to hell, but what a way to go, giggles. And who doesn't like a Buffy that can stand her own ground, giving as good as she gets and putting him in his place, woo hoo. I like strong women figures especially when writing this sort of Spike. Yeah, she's definitely attracted to him, I mean sure he's an ass, but he's got the looks that can't be ignored, hahahaahah. Thanks for all your help my darling - I could not do it without you, it's true. Luv u boo - smooches.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Beneath Me

I wish I could say I love this Spike. Looking forward to see how Buffy handles him until she finds another job! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Spike will definitly be the bad guy for awhile, a lot of folks won't like him at first, but things will eventually turn spuffy and he'll come around from being the pig he is, I promise. Glad you liked the chappy and no worries on Buffy's part - she can handle her own with her sassy mouth., *winks* Thanks for the review darling. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 04:21 am Title: Beneath Me

I look forward to reading another one of your stories! The sparks between Buffy and Spike are enough to ignite a bonfire. What a truly fun start.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the fireworks between our couple, there's more of that one the way, *winks*. THank you so very much for the review darling - smoochies.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Beneath Me

OT: If I remember correctly Henry isn't a romance writer at Blood ties (but he is at the book) *g* So he is kind of a colleague of you ;-) Looking forward to see them later this year.
And no, not so obvious what would happen, just this would be the perfect Murphy's Law.
What a shame ... it's sounds like the reason Buffy thinks of is the reason why she didn't get promoted. Very bad she spent the money already that she doesn't have.
Yeah, surprise on both sides now :) The banter has started again *grins* ~ Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Correct - he produces comics, well, not comics, but draws adult comic-book type drama... jeez I can't think of the correct title right now for that kind of work. Nope, not obvious, but oh yes, follows Murphy's Law to a 'T'. Thanks for the review hon - more banter coming up, more fireworks, you name it. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 10:04 am Title: Beneath Me

Poor Buffy but then she did count her chicken's before they'd hatched and my glass is always half empty - couldn't fit any more metaphors into that sentence!!! I'm not sure that this Buffy is going to be as straightforward as Spike seems to think and I can't wait. Loved it - as always.

Author's Response: Indeed, she was overconfident. LOL, love the metaphors and how true they ring here at ML. And very, very good gues on Buffy's personality - but that's allllllll I can say for right now, *winks*. Thanks a bunch for the review hon, I really appreciate it. Hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 07:55 am Title: Beneath Me

OHHH i can't wait for her to start working beneath him, wish you hadn't made him so much younger and Angel wasn't in this one but I know your fics are nothing but my favorite spuffy so even if i get bit squeeked along the way ( but hope not) I still read. Really liking all the conflict beywwen them , give me more sister and soon , please.

Author's Response: Ahhhhhhhhh, I have you duped on something. Angel hasn't enetered the fic yet.... *winks*.... hasn't even been mentioned either, *double winks*, giggles. True, Spike is younger, but there's only 6 years diff here and I thought, why not make him younger - give him a chance to learn something from an older woman. And at least he's not a teenager, so I do hope not to squick you out. GLad you like the conflict sweety and hope you stick around because the conflict gets worse before it gets better - that's just my style I guess. Thanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 07:30 am Title: Beneath Me

well done

Author's Response: Thank you sweety. Smooches.

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Date: 02/02/2008 - 05:17 am Title: Beneath Me

Wow! This second meeting was as equally explosive as the first one, the Spuffy sparks are definitely flying. Loved the dialogue, and the glimpses into Spike and Buffy's heads throughout the chapter. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Indeed and it gets even more explosive in the next chapter, ooops, gave that away, didn't I? LOL. Thank you darling for the wonderful review, stay tuned. Huggles.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Beneath Me

Yay! another update, and dont have to wait long for the next either! u are really spoiling me now! lol! loved the chapter, mmm, office sex... wait i mean, love the chapter, cant wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Hhahaha, and I'm glad I can spoil you darling. The possibilities are endless, aren't they? And I do hope you enjoy the next chapter as well, thank you soooooo much for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: ~^^~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2008 - 12:44 am Title: Beneath Me

Such a speedy update ~^^~ I was thrilled to get off of work and see this posted on the site! Wonderful end to a long shift!
Poor Buffy, this just isn't her day! Spike is obviously thrilled to bits. He had just better watch those bits with her around tho, cause she is clearly not going to "play nice"

Author's Response: I'm so glad I could entertain you after a night at work hon and help you unwind/ Oh yes, this is not Buffy's day but you're right, SPike does need to watch out for her claws where his bits are concerned, hee hee. Thanks for the review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: oooooooooooooo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2008 - 09:11 pm Title: Beneath Me

Again, Spike is a womanizer. You writers sure do love Spike being a womanizer. I would love to see a story where Buffy is a manizer. Believe me there are lots out there. Lots of women using men and what they can get from them.

Anyways, I will continue with this story since I see that you have mild angst. But if Spike is made to be just another dick, ass, jerk, or anything else like that. I will not continue.

I like how you have Spike smart and young. William seems like he would be really smart.

You also seem to love writing lots of sex in your Spuffy stories. Why? Have you ever consider writing a Spuffy story where it isn't all about sex at first. Just wondering. Not a meant to be a put down or anything. I would love to read a story from you where it isn't all about sex with them in the beginning.

Author's Response: Yes, while it’s true that a lot of authors, as well as readers, like Spike as a womanizer, it doesn’t account for everyone. I enjoy reading him as such because I like to see how he redeems himself and eventually finds love as well as the challenge of writing him as a jerk and his redemption – simply a preference of mine. I can tell you there are definitely stories here at TSR where Buffy is the man-eater (though it’s been awhile since I’ve read one) and that’s great, too. Like you said, they’re out there. I think, (personal opinion here), Buffy in BTVS was rather conservative with her sexuality up to Season Six and it’s easier for me to see things from that perspective. Although I write AU fics, I try to keep a certain level of canon in their personalities and a man-eater Buffy would, to me, be a Faith

While I’m glad you enjoy ML’s Spike as young and smart, I can tell you up front this story is definitely not for you. He gets worse, much worse, (he’s a complete ass in this fic, concentrates on sex though I can say he won’t see any from Buffy for quite some time) before he gets better and as I’ve said in my first a/n, this story is meant to get people riled up. If I can’t move people to feel passionately one way or another, I may as well give up as a writer.

As for me, personally, writing a story that doesn’t involve sex up front, it’s possible, but you’re also talking to a woman who has to live without her husband under the same roof for about 3 years and running now b/c he’s gallivanting the globe with the military. I’ve sex on the brain, needless to say, and I write nothing below nc17 as a preference. In the future I may decide on a plot that isn’t centered on sex from the start, but as to when I can’t predict. The muse has to have a proper plot bunny for that and I find I can only concentrate on one or two fics at a time. Though I hate to lose you as a reader, this story will definitely turn you - and possibly many others - away. It’s a risk all authors run no matter what kind of plot they choose to write.

I do want to thank you very much for the review and tell you that I respect your views as an individual. Hopefully in the future I’ll gain you back as a reader with a different story. Take care, sweety.

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