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Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 08:38 pm Title: Second

I don't have any idea where you are taking this story but so far I am beyond intrigued. My only hope is that Buffy doesn't stay 15 for long. As a diehard Spuffy I just can't go there with him an adult and her a child.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 08:34 pm Title: Second

This story is awesome and I really like how natural it flows. Don't about how often you update. It'll come to you

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:52 pm Title: Second

I love your writing and really am happy with anything you put to paper... err computer. The muse will do when it does, don't sweat it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2008 - 07:39 am Title: First

boring.

Reviewer: zo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 - 09:31 am Title: First

I WANT MORE!!!!!

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 - 10:25 am Title: First

i really like the idea and i think if you take the time to write it out in detail like you have for the 1st chapter it will be a really great stroy

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 - 05:49 am Title: First

Fabulous. I usually avoid au-human stories, but this one I'm going to read.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 06:22 am Title: First

wow. very intriguing first chapter.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 02:58 am Title: First

Freaking cool! If this was the opening to a movie or TV show, I'd so be hooked. Right away, you're into the grittiness of police life and making us care about the case.

Can't wait for more, hon.

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 01:48 am Title: First

This is truly captivating !
I'm so glad you're writing another A.U human!story !

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2008 - 01:06 am Title: First

Very interesting start. i'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:34 pm Title: First

First chapter and I'm already hooked!!! more please!!!

Reviewer: Tigress Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 05:58 pm Title: First

a wonderful start to another wonderful story! can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 04:26 pm Title: First

Oh pretty banner. Would be a shame not to upload it. (Regarding the banner I can't say how the 'post story' feature does look like now but the FAQs talk of a Image/Banner field where you have to put it. Before you just had to use the HTML tags. Maybe you only need to put the img src tag without the link back to Scrapbook/LJ)
Thrilling start, you already have me hooked. There seems to be an interesting back story with Spike; I hope we'll find out more about it.
Oh and Buffy... who she is. And who drugged her. In short words:
More please :)

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 12:34 pm Title: First

Awesome start - can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:59 am Title: First

Your narrative and Spike's thoughts keep the style edgy and atmospheric in this story which is a completely different setting for all our familiar characters. For Angelus to die right at the beginning - an unusual swerve. Look forward to the update.

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:41 am Title: First

Excellent start. Looks like I found myself another new fic to follow. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:27 am Title: First

Great start, you keep me on the edge of my chair constantly. I like Spike's character and job in this story. Thanks for getting Liam out of the story early.

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 - 09:51 am Title: First

I am totally intrigued! Want more. :-D

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