[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Great chapter .. i hope buffy is okay
Author's Response: Thank you! Buffy will be fine...physically, at least! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
You just keep those twist coming don't you. More please soon.
Author's Response: Twist and turns aplenty! Like a roller coaster. I'll post soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
I knew it, I knew it!! HAHAHAHHAH, does the dance of joy for figuring things out - to a degree anyway. As for Fred.... hmmmm. I'm not totally convinced, the reason WHY is b/c of Gunn. I've got a sneaking suspicion that Gunn is behind Giles killing - maybe sided w/ Angelus b/c he fell for Fred and was having an affair with her maybe? He was, after all, a street punk to begin with and had access to Buffy's necklace if she left it in there room and was missing for a bit before Buffy showed up. So my wheels keep on spinning. Lovely chapter and a big eeeep for Buffy.
Author's Response: Hah, glad your instincts and deduction skills were right on so far! Fred is...problematic, as is Gunn. Of course I can't tell you what's what and what's right, but I love that you're trying to figure the myster out! Keep spinning those wheels. So very very happy you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
A-ha! I had a feeling it was Xander that Willow called. I knew his thinking Buffy looked familiar would come up somehow.
Very worried now about blacked out Buffy.
Fab chapter(s), of course. Don't make us stew for too long wondering what's to come!
Author's Response: Thanks you, Tanit! I won't make you wait too long, just a few more hours. Good job picking up on Xander's role!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Oh Cliffhanger - evil is thy name!! The suspense... Oh and VERY nice twist with Xander being undercover - didn't see that coming at all : )
More of both your fics soon - please.
Author's Response: I really am evil. Have never denied it! Glad you enjoyed the twist! Both stories will be updated within the day, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
I haven't reviewed before - sorry - I just read everyting up 'till this chapter now - THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD!!! I was reading double time to catch all the action, the exitement and the little twists and turns. So well done!!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Ahh! Clifhanger!
Author's Response: Quite a cliffhanger! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four
shit shit...noooo...
Author's Response: Hehe very suspenseful, wans' t it? Thanks for the review, daswn!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Please please PLEASE give me more!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
yay willow...
Author's Response: I love Willow, at least most of the time. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Willow knows something? Hmmmmmm, very interesting indeed. And I wonder – was that Xander on the phone, maybe he’s now a police chief? Hopefully Willow is truly going to help her friend – sorry, my wheels are spinning madly trying to guess things. And thinking back on last chapter – Angelus has to have known who Buffy and Gunn were, b/c how else would he have known to send someone to kill Giles, assuming I’m correct in my speculations anyway. Can’t wait for next chapter sweety – well done on this one.
Author's Response: I love that people are trying to work out the truth...it's fun to keep you all guessing! Good catch on the fact that Angelus must know who they are...wonder what he's planning to do next...Thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
SOrry I'm so late to the party here in reviewing - had a hectic last couple of days. OMG, Giles, dead? ANd Buffy framed - ooooooooooooo, I smell Angelus all over this one. But I hope that by Buffy making her decision to rubn, she find whatever proof she needs to get herself cleared...... eeeeeeeeep. Onto the next chapter now.
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Wow! Very intrigued now! You have a fantastic style of writing, you pull me into the story every time! I wonder if Willow is good or bad... I'm hoping she works for Buffy's side but you never can tell....
Can't wait to read your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! So glad you're enjoying
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
So... I'm catching up with your story because I didn't have much time to read in a little while. And I have to say... fantastic storyline. But I worry about Spike (of course) and whom Willow called! Hope none of Angelus men. It could be Fred... and I really hope it will be her.
I'm so looking forward your next update. Have to say.... at first I really didn't want to read any undercover story because I love Criminal Games and I didn't want to spoil my imagination how your story will be. But... I love your story exactly the same :) ... so... please continue.
Author's Response: I looked up "Criminal Games', hadn't heard of it before! I'll have to read it soon if you think it's good. Glad you're enjoying my story, and that it's different enough to intrigue you!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
And the plot thickens some more. This is so good I am now bouncing up and down on the edge of my seat. Fab.
Author's Response: Yay, I made someone bounce! Haha. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Do I sense a... Xander coming...? :)*
Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps. You'll find out soon! ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
OHH I WONDER WHO SHE CALLED!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im SOO glad that she went to willow and that shes helping buffy out. i REALLY hope that spike is ok and that gunn comes to his senses. also i hope that angelus ends up in jail soon and that buffy and spike get together and are happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Thanks, sarah g! Glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Oh I wonder who Willow called.
Author's Response: You'll find out soon! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Willow! Yay! Or not? Why did she tense up when Buffy began the Spike part of her tale?
Who is Willow's mysterious phone buddy? Have we met them before? hmm... I can hardly wait until tomorrow! :)
Author's Response: Hmmm wonder who it is? You'll find out soon though! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three
i hope spikes okay and Buffy has help now so hopefullly everything well turn out good.
Great chapter ...love this story
Author's Response: Thanks, beastie! Hope things turn out a way you like. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Two
hey gr8 chapter...i'm so hooked on this story!!!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you're hooked! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
oh no! everything that could have gone wrong did go wrong! i hope everything will right itself soon
Author's Response: Yup, everything just keeps getting alllll screwed up. Life is crazy like that. :) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
This is entirely too intense to not have the conclusion! I can't wait for more, thank GOD you're a quick updater or I would probably die of a heart attack!
Author's Response: Ahh I don't want you to die! I'll post tonight, but I don't know if it'll ease your stress at all...but don't worry, everything will be resolved soonish! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Great chapter. I know you won't tell me but did Gunn do it? You replied to one of my reviews that you hoped he surprised me and I thought it would be a good surprise but he could have done it. Just love this and am still on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Of course I won't tell you. What fun would that be if you knew all my secrets? :)
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two
I bet Gunn's been the mole!! otherwise he wouldn't have managed to get the crystal
loved the update and looking forward to more
Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Can't tell you whether or not you're right, but it's so fun to hear people's theories!
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