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Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Five

I wonder if the other guest is Spike.

Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Five

That piece of slime has Spike doesn't he, i'm guessing that's the mystery guest but with this fic i've been doing a lot of guessing and getting aggravated. I hope it is Spike so than he and Buffy can bust their way out of there, after they spill Angel and companies entrail's all over the floor that is, Hee hee ( insert twisted and maniacal laughter here), can't wait til Saturday nite.

Author's Response: Heh don't mean to aggravate you TOO much. Just keep you on your toes! Again with the entrails! Such imagery! Thanks for reading, JO!

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Five

Well, I'll happily contribute reviews if it means you can squeeze some time into your day to update. You've spoiled us with your daily updates, it'll be hard to go without! lol

I don't think that Forrest found Willow & Xander, but who did he find? Fred? hmm. And where did Spike end up? I just don't think he's the 'other guest'. I'll be looking forward to tomorrow's update to (hopefully) find out!


Author's Response: I hope I can get back on track with the daily updates! Want to keep you all hooked in! The other guest is definitely someone we know...but you might not find out today. Tomorrow, maybe. :)

Reviewer: Helena Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Five

i love this story, cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Helena! Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Five

Please don't let what Buffy said lead them to where Spike is hiding.

Your writing talent continues to amaze me. You're
the BEST!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you oh so much! You're fantastic.

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

OH NO !!!!!!!!!! who's got buffy

Author's Response: Dundundun (suspenseful music). Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four

OH COME ON!!!!!!!! you *love* to leave me hanging like this dont you!!!

Author's Response: Hehe I do, I do. Cliffhangers are fun! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four

OH I hope everything works out and what a surprise turn of events.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, smlcspike! Glad you were surprised.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

NOOOOOOO!!! I CANT BELIEVE IT, I HOPE SHES OK!!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im SO glad that xander is with them and that they can all help spike. also im glad that fred is playing spikes side but is pretending to be with angelus. i really hope that things work out well and that shes ok. also i hope that spike is ok and that he and buffy end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for your enthusiastic review! Things might turn out the way you want them too, but I think a few more surprises might be in store! So glad you're reading!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

OMG do u have a twisted mind or what? Your making me crazy with all the twist and turns this fic is taking , now Forrest isn't dead! Ok , but where's Spike? where's Fred? , is she evil ? Is Buffy alright , who killed Giles , what's goin on? OMG i'm dizzy, thank God u update everyday , or i would become a blithering idio waiting for more.,

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm definitely twisted! Don't meant to make you TOTALLY crazy, but I'm glad I'm keeping you on your toes!

Reviewer: beastie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

Great chapter .. i hope buffy is okay




Author's Response: Thank you! Buffy will be fine...physically, at least! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

You just keep those twist coming don't you. More please soon.

Author's Response: Twist and turns aplenty! Like a roller coaster. I'll post soon!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

I knew it, I knew it!! HAHAHAHHAH, does the dance of joy for figuring things out - to a degree anyway. As for Fred.... hmmmm. I'm not totally convinced, the reason WHY is b/c of Gunn. I've got a sneaking suspicion that Gunn is behind Giles killing - maybe sided w/ Angelus b/c he fell for Fred and was having an affair with her maybe? He was, after all, a street punk to begin with and had access to Buffy's necklace if she left it in there room and was missing for a bit before Buffy showed up. So my wheels keep on spinning. Lovely chapter and a big eeeep for Buffy.

Author's Response: Hah, glad your instincts and deduction skills were right on so far! Fred is...problematic, as is Gunn. Of course I can't tell you what's what and what's right, but I love that you're trying to figure the myster out! Keep spinning those wheels. So very very happy you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

A-ha! I had a feeling it was Xander that Willow called. I knew his thinking Buffy looked familiar would come up somehow.

Very worried now about blacked out Buffy.

Fab chapter(s), of course. Don't make us stew for too long wondering what's to come!

Author's Response: Thanks you, Tanit! I won't make you wait too long, just a few more hours. Good job picking up on Xander's role!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four

Oh Cliffhanger - evil is thy name!! The suspense... Oh and VERY nice twist with Xander being undercover - didn't see that coming at all : )
More of both your fics soon - please.

Author's Response: I really am evil. Have never denied it! Glad you enjoyed the twist! Both stories will be updated within the day, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

I haven't reviewed before - sorry - I just read everyting up 'till this chapter now - THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD!!! I was reading double time to catch all the action, the exitement and the little twists and turns. So well done!!

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four

Ahh! Clifhanger!

Author's Response: Quite a cliffhanger! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: daswn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four

shit shit...noooo...

Author's Response: Hehe very suspenseful, wans' t it? Thanks for the review, daswn!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Please please PLEASE give me more!!!!!

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

yay willow...

Author's Response: I love Willow, at least most of the time. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three


Willow knows something? Hmmmmmm, very interesting indeed. And I wonder – was that Xander on the phone, maybe he’s now a police chief? Hopefully Willow is truly going to help her friend – sorry, my wheels are spinning madly trying to guess things. And thinking back on last chapter – Angelus has to have known who Buffy and Gunn were, b/c how else would he have known to send someone to kill Giles, assuming I’m correct in my speculations anyway. Can’t wait for next chapter sweety – well done on this one.


Author's Response: I love that people are trying to work out the truth...it's fun to keep you all guessing! Good catch on the fact that Angelus must know who they are...wonder what he's planning to do next...Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two

SOrry I'm so late to the party here in reviewing - had a hectic last couple of days. OMG, Giles, dead? ANd Buffy framed - ooooooooooooo, I smell Angelus all over this one. But I hope that by Buffy making her decision to rubn, she find whatever proof she needs to get herself cleared...... eeeeeeeeep. Onto the next chapter now.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Wow! Very intrigued now! You have a fantastic style of writing, you pull me into the story every time! I wonder if Willow is good or bad... I'm hoping she works for Buffy's side but you never can tell....
Can't wait to read your next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! So glad you're enjoying

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

So... I'm catching up with your story because I didn't have much time to read in a little while. And I have to say... fantastic storyline. But I worry about Spike (of course) and whom Willow called! Hope none of Angelus men. It could be Fred... and I really hope it will be her.
I'm so looking forward your next update. Have to say.... at first I really didn't want to read any undercover story because I love Criminal Games and I didn't want to spoil my imagination how your story will be. But... I love your story exactly the same :) ... so... please continue.

Author's Response: I looked up "Criminal Games', hadn't heard of it before! I'll have to read it soon if you think it's good. Glad you're enjoying my story, and that it's different enough to intrigue you!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

And the plot thickens some more. This is so good I am now bouncing up and down on the edge of my seat. Fab.

Author's Response: Yay, I made someone bounce! Haha. Thanks for reviewing!

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