[Report This]Date: 03/01/2008 - 11:07 am Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Uh-oh, not good... I just love this story, it's very original. Waiting eagerly for your next update. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pet! Update within a few days!
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2008 - 07:45 am Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Hmm.. Why couldn't have Willow explained a little more? :) Although what she said was very interesting. :) And Ripper was great. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks, Anna! I'll update soon, and yup, more and more will be revealed as the story continues! Glad you liked Ripper!
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2008 - 12:00 am Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Spike to the rescue
Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps! Thanks for reviewing, jess!
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 11:56 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Yikes! William/Spike where are you? Buffy could really use a nearby diversion right about now.
Very intrigued about about what the root cause of this reality switcheroo is.
Author's Response: A diversion would definitely be helpful! The explanation of the switcheroo will be revealed bit by little bit...thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 10:20 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Now thats bad, loved it though and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nicka! Glad you're enjoying.
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 10:09 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
What a fantastic ending! William is wonderful but I can't help but wonder if Buffy will ever get back to her world, and what Spike might think of how she might have changed in how she reacted to him. I also can't wait to hear more and I love your take on what Giles as Ripper as a vampire is like, the differences and similarities. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you, Ann! You're definitely not wrong in your wonderings about the future of this...universe. Glad you liked Ripper, too, He's just so deliciously evil.
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Ooops!!! I meant to write I enjoyed the five entertaining chapters I just read, not four... looks like I forgot how to add today... lol! Sorry, again.
Author's Response: Heh, no problem! Glad you're enjoying them, no matter how many you read.
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:40 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
Yikes! I've gotten behind in my reviewing! Sorry about that *hands you a plate of cookies while asking for forgivness* I'm usually so good at catching new updates too. :( On the plus side I got to read four very entertaining chapters all at once, gotta say I'm really enjoying how the story is playing out. *bites nails* Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
Author's Response: Oh, no problem! I'm just glad you're still reading! Mmm...cookies. So glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: Welcome to the Cruel World
ACK! Edge of my seat, fingernail biting intensity...and you just left it! *clutches heart*
You mean, wicked woman! lol
Please, please, please, update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, I am so wicked! Hope your heart is okay, though. :) Yay, I'm glad it was all intense and keeping you on the edge of your seat!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:57 am Title: Make It All Okay
Oh - methinks that things be heating up a bit : ) Great chapter! So this dimension shows other sides of the same persons - cool! Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Thanks you, Heidi! Good catch on what this dimension is actually showing...glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:03 am Title: Make It All Okay
I really like the fact that I have no clue where all of this is going: is this really an alternate dimension, what's going on with William's feelings for Buffy, etc., especially now with the Slayer dream on top of everything else. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're in the dark, so far! I'm intentionally making everything...ambiguous. Thanks so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 04:14 am Title: Make It All Okay
Aww, I loved this chapter! Please gimme more!!
Author's Response: So happy you loved it! I'll be updating soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2008 - 03:42 am Title: Make It All Okay
Aww so close
When i was reading this i was like "kiss, kiss!!" Lol
I luv this chapter and can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, they were SO CLOSE. But too many things are in their way right now. I'll post a new chapter soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:59 pm Title: Make It All Okay
Great update! Buffy adjusts to this new situation pretty well until she actually thinks about it. :) Seeing Willow as a vampire just makes everything so real and overwhelming. Nice scene with William comforting Buffy.
I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Author's Response: Yup, denial is bliss, for the most part. Any sort of...realization of her situation drives Buffy up the wall. Glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 08:21 pm Title: Make It All Okay
A new chapter... it made me very happy. I'm liking the way you are building this up... but I must admit that I'm definitely looking forward to some action.:)
Author's Response: Oh, next chapter will have so much action you won't know what to do with it all. :) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 07:48 pm Title: Make It All Okay
oh boy so william was already in love with buffy is his buffy meeting up with our spike. our are we never gonna see that side.
Author's Response: Nope, you won't be seeing the other side, and you'll find out why within a chapter or two. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 06:42 pm Title: Make It All Okay
I can't get over how sad I am for poor Buffy. While she's adapting to this new situation, she still seems so alone. The bit about how neither teachers nor students noticed anything was off was just.depressing, though your Buffy shrugged it off rather casually.
Wonderful, as always, with a nice bit of sparkage there at the end. :)
Author's Response: She is having a very hard time of it. But I suppose out of all her problems, the reactions of people who she doesn't even know are at the bottom of her list. Glad you liked the sparkage. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2008 - 06:16 pm Title: Make It All Okay
Very interesting, more please.
Author's Response: Thanks! More this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2008 - 03:59 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Mmm Spike and Buffy are getting along :) Spike noticed very well how Buffy looked *gg*
Oh vamp Willow does magic... not god makes her more dangerous.
Author's Response: Magic skills plus vampness is a very bad combination! And oh yes, the getting along will continue. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Great update! Poor Dru... (think that's a sentence I've never used before) Looking forward to more of this fic.
Author's Response: I know, how strange is it to feel bad for Dru? Thanks for reading, Pet! So flattering.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:46 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
I can't believe I'm about to say this: my heart hurts for Dru. You've certainly got Evil!Willow down.
Enjoyed the easy banter between Buffy & Spike (when she's relaxed, at least). Also nice to see she's not oblivious to whatever it is that's between the two of them.
Lovely update.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to hear that Dru is sympathetic and that Evil Willow is deliciously evil. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:45 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
I'm really enjoying this story and i'm looking forward to seeing whehter Buffy makes it back home but I just had to point out one little thing, Starkers means naked...lol
You can use the term Stark staring mad or Bonkers to mean crazy but yep starkers means naked :D - it always bugged me that the scriptwriters for Buffy never got the English slang right, it used to really annoy ASH who is a Londoner himself.
Hope you don't mind me mentioning it :)
Author's Response: No, thank you so much for mentioning that! I'm going to edit it right now because I hate to have made such a silly mistake. Glad you're enjoying otherwise though, and thanks for pointing out my error!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 04:36 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Wow. Much more involved than I had expected - and I can tell it has a ways to go. Thanks.
Author's Response: Yup, there is definitely more layers and layers coming. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Very good, loved evil Willow, but I can't wait till Buffy figures out she and Spike have something going on.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying, Nicka! Buffy is definitely getting the idea.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2008 - 02:07 pm Title: Sometimes It Hurts
Loved the update. Can't wait for more! So, was there something between William and Buffy before? And I like that you used the nonchalant exchange between Buffy and Amy--always makes me laugh.
Author's Response: Thank you! William and Buffy are...complicated. You don't want me to spoil anything, do you? And yeah, I love that Buffy/Amy exchange too.
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