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Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 02:46 pm Title: Baby Steps

Loved the end of this chapter with Spike going on about his past and Buffy falling asleep. Nice domestic moment.

I'm thinking I know who's lurking in the shadows.

Author's Response: I just thought he has so may memories of his past to tell her! Glad you liked it! If you are right - i'll give you a cookie!! lol! :)

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 02:36 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Arggggggggggggggggggggg! That has to be the MOST ebol cliffhanger EVER!!!!! *pounds head on desk*

Can't wait for the next chapter :P

Author's Response: Hi Avalon - sending headache tablets to you as i write!! Won't keep you waiting too long!! :)

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 08:17 am Title: Baby Steps

who is the suspicious and dark stranger? please don't let them hurt spuffy!

Author's Response: hi there! Brace yourself there is trouble ahead! Can't say anymore just now!! Tee hee!! thank you very much for reviewing :)

Author's Response: hi there! Brace yourself there is trouble ahead! Can't say anymore just now!! Tee hee!! thank you very much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Baby Steps

Great chapter. Who is that figure. It is after Spike.

I want a Spike. Pouts, iz jealous of Buffy

Author's Response: You and me both being jelous of B!! Tee hee!! I'd share spike with you honest!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: Baby Steps

Well I'm always looking forward to read the new chapter(s) :))
Awe, little steps but he made it :) Good to see him walking again even it wasn't far.
And even better that this old misunderstanding is out of the way now. :)

Author's Response: Yes, had to clear up the Immortal thing!!! tee hee!! Thanks cordyk!! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 11:32 am Title: Baby Steps

Having a hard time picturing Spike willingly using a walker! LOL
And, like most of the fans on this site, hated "The Girl in Question" (did the writers actually think that that we would buy that Buffy would move on that quickly?)
Kind of a slow chapter, but thanks for giving us a more tolerable reason for the whole "Immortal" thing! :)
See you next update!

Author's Response: I think he sees it as better than the chair!!! But sure he won't be a fan of it soon!!! Had to get the Immortal thing out of the way - i'm sure they only wrote it like that cos SMG wouldn't guest in Angel!!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing!!! :)

Author's Response: I think he sees it as better than the chair!!! But sure he won't be a fan of it soon!!! Had to get the Immortal thing out of the way - i'm sure they only wrote it like that cos SMG wouldn't guest in Angel!!! lol!! Thanks for reviewing!!! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 11:15 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I'm still having trouble getting used to this Angel!
I do like that he is trying to help Spike and Buffy though.
I love how you blend canon/non-canon and your character dialogue. Your miror reference (Spike saying how Buffy would worry about her ass looking was dead on! LOL) and then the Thanksgiving reference. Having Buffy driving the Viper. Spike's coat in the closet - and it being too clean.
Great chapter as always. :)
Hope your mares/foals are doing well. I'm sure that is exhausting work! :)

Author's Response: Well, I'm not a big Angel fan so I decided to make him nice!! lol!! Sonce he had to be around so much!! Plus Spike and Buffy are all he has left!! Glad you liked all the references to canon! The mares are hanging on to their babies this yr - keep going over due which means we have to sit up more often!! If floors me but will soon be over!! :) thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:42 am Title: Baby Steps

Oh come ooooon, who is that figure? And growling? If it's Harm wanting him back I might giggle uncontrollably...

LOVE how he's improving step by step (literally this time). More soon please! *bats eyelashes*

*hugs*

Author's Response: Oh no!! don't lay the responsibility for the eyelashes on me again!!! *chuckles* Won't keep you waiting too long!! *big hugs* :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:07 am Title: Baby Steps

I just caught up with all the new chapters - spring break here last week and we had company so I didn't have any reading time. Great as always - I'm looking forward to finding out who the mystery person is.

Author's Response: Hi Michelle D hope you had a great time!! Glad you liked what you had waiting for you! :) Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 08:50 am Title: Baby Steps

Somehow my fav sentence in this chapter is: "There was a horse this one time and …” :) Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Hi serinah - I liked that sentence too so it made me smile when you noted it! :) thanks for letting me know! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 08:09 am Title: Baby Steps

that was great! Its so nice to see Spike and Buffy happy together. And this mysterious stranger, hmmm. I wonder who it is..
Great stuff luv!

Author's Response: cheers Puska! Glad you liked it! All will be revealed fairly soon....:)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Baby Steps

aww how sweet . i love it ! and good for spike! he really made a progress! so am i going to know who this mysterious "peeping Tom" is anytime soon?? cause i know he isnt human (i mean ha growl)

Author's Response: When my horse is naughty - trust me I can growl and I promise that I'm human tee hee!! but as for the figure.....who knows? Oh right - I do but you'll have to wait a little while longer!!! Tee hee!! Thanks Spuffy :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 01:42 am Title: Baby Steps

That was sweet, and I can't wait to see who these figures are.

Author's Response: You won't be waiting long!!! Thakns for reviewing - much appreciated as always! :)

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: See Yer Later, Peaches

Wow, 25 chapters in a month, I ordinary read only finished stories, but I have read some of you're other works and loved those.
So I will read this one, and gotta say that you're first chapter was incredible I can practically see Spike really freaking out.
Now about those many chapters, keep on going and don't leave us waiting for too long.
Tootles!

Author's Response: thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review! That really keeps me scribbling away! I am the queen of quick updates I think! Work's interfering a little but hopefully will still be able to write three chapters a week at least - I have no life!! :) Thanks again and keep on letting me know! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:44 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I love the banter between the three of them. It sounds like something straight out of the show. Love it.

And good luck with the horsey's. I have some myself and they're great fun! (though sitting up with them must be tiring)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I love writng dialogue :) The sitting up does seem so bad if they foal - it passes the time and keeps you awake - but when they don't it really knocks me for six!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Great chapter Mabel , really enjoyed it. It's that shanky ho Dru , isn't it? She spotted them and has now follwed them, It wasn't the disgusting Immortal because he/she said Spike , the immortal (Pooey) would have said Buffy name, so it is Dru right ? Oh what am i doing , you won't tell me anyway . I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter so those foal's better hurry up and foal already ( I bet there adorable) so you can write some more. Til next time.

Author's Response: Hi Jo! glad you liked the chapter :) You're right that I won't tell you who or should that be what the stalker is!! :) Thanks for reviewing. BTW some of the foals are cute but one I'm sure is the spawn of the devil!! Tee hee!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 03:14 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK I'm officially stumped with who the mystery being is - and don't you just love that?!! Loved it as ever.

Author's Response: You're stumped...what about me...? Tee hee! Seriously though, you won't find out for a little while!! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for letting me know :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK, WHO IS THE FIGURE FOLLOWING THEM????

*pouts* I knew it wouldn't all be hearts and roses now on, wicked woman!

Hope RL clears up some,
*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks sotia! I love having my readers nervous! Will update asap!! but will the next chapter tell you who or what that is....? Tee hee! *sniggers evilly*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 12:58 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

love the chapter!
and you better update soon!!! i wanna know who is it!!! (the one that folowing him)

Author's Response: Hey spuffy! Will update as soon as I can but not sure that you'll find your answer in the next one!! Tee hee!!! ooh the suspense! *sniggers evilly* thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 12:13 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Glad to see Spike enjoying the water / doing better. I wouldn't have thought to worry that the pain gets less but he's right, they told them it was a sign for the healing. Hopefully it only means he is almost healed.
Angel did a lot of work; it will be good for Spike to be able on his own (=wheelchair) at the Hyperion. The fooling around (duster, wheelchair) was fun.
But I wonder who did follow them? Must be a human.
~ Looking forward to find out who it is (and to read more).

Author's Response: Thanks Cordyk! All will be revealed but maybe not right away!! lol!!! Thanks for your reviews always look forward to them :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 11:27 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Angel is being such a sweety. Can you play matchmaker for him? He needs a nice girl. I absolutely love the Spuffy domestic bliss they've go going on although I am a little nervous about this mysterious new arrival.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I have plans for Angel! More about that later! As for the mystery person/creature/thing...lol!! Time will tell - but nervous is just how I like my readers!! Thanks for taking the time to review Francine - it's always appreciated :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 11:33 pm Title: Making A Splash

aww, i love that last line. Its good to see Spike regaining his confidence. Great stuff hon!

Author's Response: Thanks puska! Had to nip back to see what the last line was! tee hee! Yes B has always been able to push spike's buttons!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Making A Splash

Another beautiful update! Keep them coming honey! I was delighted at how Buffy helped him overcome his fear even as I felt sorry for him for bearing the weight of his dad's loss on his shoulders!

*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks Sotia, glad you liked it :) I like saying why Spike's dad wasn't around - did it in UV too! more soon! *hugs back*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 01:05 pm Title: Making A Splash

Oh that ... Brad wanted to take Spike swimming. That would in fact help his legs without hurting Spike. Didn't expect Spike's past with the water. It takes courage to go in the water with that fear (bad memories).
Fun, Buffy teasing Spike with the swimming trunks *gg*
Enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it Cordyk! :) thought of Spike in surfer dude shorts tickled me!! personally i wish he'd opted for the black pair!! lol! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 11:26 am Title: Making A Splash

Great chapter, as always!
Loved your use of canon. Explaining Spike's fear of water and then having Buffy helping him with her own fear. I especially liked how you used the sub - that *so* sounds like somthing Angel would have done. (plus one of my all-time favorite scenes is when Spike does the "You can just swab my deck" LOL and God he looks so adorable in that uniform... hmmm....) Okay... I'm digressing... back to review...
Also the First Evil "drowning" - had to be a reason they did that since vampires can't drown.
*hugs*

Author's Response: I nearly forgot about the submarine ! Then when i remembered nearly scrapped the chapter! then managed to work it in - Spike with black hair looked sooo different didn't he? So glad you liked it! :) Thakns for letting me know.

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