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Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 9

So when are they finally meeting face-to-face?

Author's Response: soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

Sneaky first meeting :)
Good for Buffy to be so independent. Neither Angel nor Xander have a chance to do something silly (for now). *wonders if Spike will be at the Bronze too*

Author's Response: soon

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

... And with THAT I suspect Angel of blowing a gasket...BIG time!!! I am enjoying it, thanks so much for continuing it, and for the new update! It's a lot of fun to see an empowered Buffy early on in the timeline, as well as the whole gang including Joyce, tossing their hats into the ring all willing to totally commit & help out. Angel is hilarious, he is being (and does it just come naturally if Buffy is in the same timezone as he?) a total tool. Promise of Spike early on is absolutely
a plus PLUS!!! Please keep up the good work. Y'know, this Buffy almost (and I know Joss and many hated it) the feel of a continuous Buffy from the Movie, continuing the brave, headstrong, pampered, yet stand up as well as think for herself (and be quite vocal about it) kinda girl from Buffy the Movie... and here she has more shoulders to instantly spread the weight of the world across, as well as assistance that does not have only two-tone vision---delightful.
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~



Author's Response: thanks for the awesome review. i know i felt a more stronger was needed the friends controlling was just to much and turned me off she is suppose to be a warrior not door mat spike soon

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 7

I am really looking forward to Buffy so clearly preferring Spike and Angel's reaction, and then how Spike will react to being first for once! Love the Angel-bashing and Joyce getting a role in the group. Now can we see more Spike? I'm dying for him to come into contact with Buffy, especially if they fight as the sparks fly!
Great update.

Author's Response: Spike soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Did Angel understand now? No I don't think so ;-)
Must be good for Buffy to know even if (when) Nyaya has to go again she'll still help her.
Good to see an update.

Author's Response: thanks for the review and spike soon

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

I am glad you updated this story. Of course Angel has his own ideas about what is right for Buffy. Please bring on Spike. I can't wait to read what will happen when they meet.

Author's Response: sorry for the late update beta had family things to deal with Spike soon

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: chapter 6

Loving the concept of this story and looking forward to reading more.

A word of advice, the flow of the story seems rushed a bit more meat on the bones is needed.

B

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2008 - 04:10 pm Title: chapter 6

Your Angel here isn't very understandable. He doesn't listen when Buffy is talking, he hears only what he wants to hear. ;-)
Good that Buffy knows what she wants. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 5

Didn't expect (or forgot) Angel being there. At last Buffy isn't believing him. ~ Looking forward to what Giles will find out.

Reviewer: ashmo21 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's been a while but worth it ^_^!!! But now all I wanna do is read even more *pouts*...heehee... I can't wait 'til you update.

Author's Response: hopefully have something this week

Reviewer: June Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Happy to see this updating, and really looking forward to meeting Nyaya. And that last line of dialogue... You know all of us are desperate for Spike to come in and see Buffy handling Angel. I'm really looking forward to their first meeting and his first impression of her. Please write more soon!

Author's Response: i am glad you liking my story should have update very soon

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter 4

that was hilarious! I loved B`s forehead comment!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:56 am Title: Chapter 4

When Nyaya is coming to Sunnydale maybe Giles will believe Buffy.

Box? Was that Spike at the end? *wonders*

Author's Response: could be....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3:Spike and Dru

Dru can't decide if Spike is her dark or her white knight, huh? But Miss Edith told he already that Spike is not hers to keep.
Interesting, Angel was worried about Dru? Till next part.

Author's Response: i hope to have that up sometime this week

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 3:Spike and Dru

Oh, I love it so far!
Spike getting already confused and going to the Hellmouth being Dru`s idea is brilliant!

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing i am having fun writing this

Reviewer: June Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 3:Spike and Dru

I really like this story, especially Angel and Buffy's reaction to him. "No woman could resist his dark, brooding good looks." HAH! I can't wait to learn more about how you've created demon history or society or family bonds, especially when I get a feeling there's going to be some claiming going on. I love that Buffy in this story can see shades of grey and that it isn't so cut and dried. I think it would be nice to see some more actions in scenes to show how feelings or thoughts come to be instead of just a list of thoughts about someone or whatever is going on without really being shown. Good job with the Dru-speak and I hope to read more soon!

Author's Response: oh you might be right on the claiming. thanks for the good notes and my beta is great with helping with dru speak which is not always easy i have to keep watching her to get it right

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2

I like the start, sassy Buffy. Good that Giles will read the books first before he acts.

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

GO Buffy for putting them all in their place. Just love this verison. Oh, I wish..

Reviewer: Bigbird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love the premise of this story Buffy as the agressor for once. Be careful that you don't lose the characters in too much aggression though.
Please get yourself a beta the paragraphs are a problem, so is the grammer and missing words.
Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: chapter 1: the beginning

Please separate your paragraphs more. You need to create a new paragraph when a new person speaks.

Author's Response: thanks I am working on it

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

i don't want to discourage you or anything, but this needs a lot of work. for one thing, you need to break up your paragraphs more, a new paragraph should start whenever someone different speaks. it looks way too cluttered, just something to think about.

Author's Response: thanks for the advice I am in the process of working on this

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Pretty cool story. i would like to read a little more of it.

Author's Response: thanks so much

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