OMG I CANT BELIEVE HE THINKS THAT AND I HOPE THAT NOTHINGS WRONG WITH HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im sad that she was going to tell him and that he miss interpreted him. i really hope that they talk and get together. also i hope that his mom is ok and that everything works out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

whoaaa.. awesome chapter.. please please please write more soon

Oooh! Buffy finally realized what she was feeling. I'm glad she was able to act quickly and break things off with Angel.
And William pondering a Hollywood-style Big Romantic Gesture! So cute!
And now, off to read 12.

Oh I hope you were able to save your files on your computer too. It sucks to loose stuff.
My spuffy heart is happy that Buffy broke up with Angel; it's only fair to him too. But it was hard for her... well two years isn't nothing.
I just didn't like the way Angel reacted but I guess he was hurt. But he lashed out, that was uncalled for.
Enjoyed the new turn though :))

Poor Buffy. But I'm so happy she finally broke up with Angel. Loved the chapter!

Glad Faith knows what's the what. And it does kind of suck for Angel, but things change. It's hard to know who you are when you're that young. Still, I'm glad she cut him loose, and I am eagerly awaiting Williams romantic gesture! Great chapter. Please, update soon.

Oh, didn't expect that...

Hello William ... get working on that song..

Enjoying..

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woo hoo! Buffy Gets a Clue! The dancing was sweet, and the moms are very cute. And Buffy and William's innocence is charming. Now Angel is going to interfere, isn't he? meep!

Sweet chapter with them dancing and the mothers' watching them (at last before Angel came by now).
And at last Buffy noticed that she has feelings for William :)

*lol* Poor Buffy. So sweet when they were dancing, and Joyce and Anne watching. :) Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

“But the contrast…the marshmallows help show the true depth of the chocolate. Sometimes things are more themselves in the presence of that which is other.” -- Talking about hot chocolate, but really, it's totally the two of them, but as the author you totally know that. Love how that's slipped in. And I love Cordy's, “That would be Buffy’s other boyfriend.” -- line. He totally is, hearts desire and all that. Wonder when she'll notice. Gotta wonder what kind of damage Faith will do, too. Truly looking forward to more. Really enjoying it so far.


Author's Response: This is my favorite review ever!!! I laughed out loud when I read "but as the author you totally know that". I wish I could pretend that the line hadn't been intentional. Thank you so much for all of your reviews-updates will be frequent.

Love that he's in love with her. Hope she see's it soon. Also love her description of her frisbee game. Very similar to mine. :) Great chapter. And William's little silent request for her to just "see him," physically made my heart ache. Really snuck some great emotion into a light hearted story.

Author's Response: Yeah-my frisbee game is pretty bad also. When I was little I actually got hit in face and blinded for a few days-since then I've basically mastered ducking. ;) Don't you just love how I took that traumatic childhood experience and rewrote it to include a hot British boy. I should warn you that as generally light-hearted as this fic is there will be a touch of angst. Thanks again for your review.