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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Four

I saw your other story (Time After Time) on top of recently added and thought you had updated again but I've read it already :)
Spike torturing Buffy, no wonder it was hard to write. But he felt sorry for doing it (made him like Angelus, torturing his victims in a way).
He let her go though... I wonder if the burnings will be permanent (have done permanent damage) and how Angelus will react to see her hurt and not so pretty as before.

Reviewer: Feydruss Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Four

It was a visceral, moving chapter. Good job. Keep going! (But don't forget about Time After Time)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Four

really fresh stuff look foward to more

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Four

Wow! That was some heavy stuff. Excellent visuals. This story is getting more and more intriguing. I look forward to more.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Four

wow. really good. terrifyingly painful, but good.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Three

I'm glad you're having such a good time writing this, because I'm definitely having a -great- time reading it.

I've never read a fic in AU non-canon where Spike is human, and Buffy's the vampire. It's usually the other way around, so I'm really loving this.


“I love him,” Buffy repeated, softer this time, her voice choked with sobs. “I…I’d burn before I turned on him, but I… Please, just don’t kill me like this. Make it something quicker. Please.”

I loved this part because it shows a more human side to her. I wasn't sure how you were going to represent Buffy in this fic....souled or unsouled? Pure evil or having some sort of heart? I'm glad to see that as a vampire, she has strong emotions.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Three

Wow! Started reading this one last night (unfortunately falling asleep halfway through the second chapter-- never try to read intense fics too late :P) and I am loving it! Can't wait for more. :) Vamp Buffy fics are AWESOME to me.

Reviewer: BloodStainedSnow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Three

I'm really enjoying this so far. Buffy's fear of turning to nothing and her fear were well done, and I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: BloodStainedSnow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter One

I love your writing style and the imagery here. It's easy to visualize what Spike's seeing and feeling.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Two

great start unique character starts

Reviewer: jess2357 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter Three

Nice plot line - highly believable reason for the two of them to get to know each other. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Three

I'm glad you're having such a great time writing this 'cause I'm having an awesome time reading it. I do love me a good vamp Buffy story, and with their strong and painful histories I can't wait to see how this is going to develop. Really amazing job, and looking forward to more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh right... Buffy in the bathtub makes taking showers a bit complicated. *gg* Not well thought indeed. But it did get him a chance to get back to Angelus.
Maybe Buffy will teach Spike something about being a vampire (like being able to love). That was unexpected for him. But for now Buffy lives (eh un-lives). I wonder who has more patience, Buffy or Spike.

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter Three

I'm really loving this fic so far. It's an great plot, and I'm anxious to see what's going to be happening in it.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Three

I don't know what it was about this chapter, but I'm hooked.

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Three

I enjoyed this chapter very much, especially the part where vampire Buffy thinks about how terrible it would be burning to death. I always like it when vampires think about the end of their unlife. Can`t wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Three

What is Spike going to do with her? If Buffy won't cave and he won't kill her ......? Really really enjoying this and am so looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Three

Oh god... that was pretty intense but I loved it :). The whole story is really perfect and I'm looking forward seeing Angelus doing nothing for Buffy and Spike being a little bit nicer. Only a little.. he doesn't have to be a gentleman :).
Don't stop writing... I'm selfish... I need something to read and distracted me because I should write my thesis :(.

Reviewer: gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Three

love it so far please let there be more to it please

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Three

Interesting situation, love it though, more please soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Three

Turn Spike's world upside down. A vamp that claims to feel love. How the shoe is on the other foot. Always a fan of twists. Can't wait until they are forced to reveal more of themselves. Great chapter.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2008 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Three

LOVED IT, CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX

Reviewer: mellissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Three

Thanks for the new chapter. I do appreciate you updating so early. Love that Buffy's already getting to Spike.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three

Poor Spikey...didn't know Buffy would spoil his plans quite like that. Can't wait to see how she surprises him once again!!!

Reviewer: GD) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2008 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Three

Chained to the bathtub? hee
So Spike has to rethink if vampires love. And Buffy really loves Angelus. aww.

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