Love it, love it, love it! :) Especially these lines:

Her golden hair spilled across the dark gray cement in a halo of rain soaked strands. Pale skin illuminated the night, her petite form shaking lightly against the cool night air.

So beautifully written! :) And I liked the fact that Jonathan was the one who found her. Looking forward to read more! / Ariadne



Author's Response: You always leave the nicest reviews! Thank you so much. I'm glad to see that you followed the story and are now on the sequel!