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Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: Seventeen

Gulps. Wow that was hot... Please post the next chapter... you can't just leave it hanging like that!!!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 03:13 am Title: Seventeen

Great chapter, I like when they interact without sex being involved. The chapters were kinda starting to blend together with it being constant sex. But anyways great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 02:47 am Title: Seventeen

Awww I love you! Write faster...update more! I'm really enjoying this story. xox

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 12:55 am Title: Seventeen

Interesting, I wonder when shell figure out he loves her.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 08:07 pm Title: Seventeen

I react to stories as if they were RL.. and that can be a problem sometimes.. but I realize it is just a story so bear with me.

Buffy is far too immature.. emotionally and is still in the land of best friends. As much as Will loves Buffy and always will .. Angel or someone needs to intervene before this relationship sends him off the deep end.

Will needs someone that wants and needs him. That is not where Buffy is at this time. If he is on medication now just to be able to talk in front of students.. what will happen will he accidently lets out the word love and Miss I am having a good time having sex with my Teacher and Best Friend Will gets that deer caught in the head light look on her face. Like "Who Knew"?

Things seem to be getting quickly over the top for Will and right now I say send the little Pop Princess home. Obviously she is an imitation of our Kentwood Louisiana darling in that teenybopper Catholic girl outfit. What else will he do to prove to her he is a man and not the boy she knew in the U.S.

And the guilt trip about his "sexual feelings" for her when she was a little girl..low blow. Time to let Will be Will.. And as far as I am concerned .. let Buffy go home.

Sorry.. I do like the story but you need to add angst to your description.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 07:10 pm Title: Seventeen

Didn't think William would react like that. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 06:16 pm Title: Seventeen

You are absolutely evil fro ending that chapter there!!!!

Reviewer: pheonia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 05:41 pm Title: Seventeen

whew... buffy is... not so bright.

get on my knees=kinky??

oh yes happy thanksgiving ^^

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 05:00 pm Title: Seventeen

OMG HOW COULD U END IT THERE AND HOW IS SHE SO CLUELESS!?!?!?! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that she took his statement as him being kinky and not him loving her, how can she not see his love for her??? also its not that i dont like liam, hes cool, i just really cant stand her with anyone else, even if its only an illusion, ill just have to read how it plays out to see if i like him. i really hope that william doesnt freak her out with this little game and that she finally realizes that he loves her soon. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX SO MUCH!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 04:36 pm Title: Seventeen

No need to duck :)
Buffy isn't aware that Spike loves her, don't want another girl. No need to worry for him or wonder why he hasn't a girlfriend.
And she couldn't know that her costume hit a bit too much the truth.
Enjoyed :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 02:08 pm Title: Seventeen

Oh silly, clueless Buffy. She has no idea that Will loves her. :( The role playing was kinda confusing...Will was so upset but then got into it , not sure how to think about that. I'm afraid Buffy is gonna break poor Will's heart and leave and get a bf after her "lessons".

Thanks for the update, more soon please. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 12:33 pm Title: Seventeen

So sad that Buffy hasn't got a clue. That she knew he had had sex with Drusilla and seems to be quite "good in the bedroom" .. and he would have problems picking up girls..

Will almost let his feelings be known with the little girl outfit but quickly fell into the game. And where did the bad man come from.. guess sex with Buffy in a game is better than not having her at all.. Kinda of Sad really.

Waiting for his breaking point.. and my best guess is when she decides she wants to play the game with someone else.

Reviewer: pheonia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2008 - 09:25 am Title: Sixteen

hyaa! please update, I'm dying here!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Sixteen

Okay, so I just discovered this story, and I am loving it! I hope that Buffy figures out that Will really does feel something for her soon, because I'm really feeling bad for him :-( Poor guy.

I hope you post again soon!

Reviewer: lola Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: Sixteen

I just read the entire story now! I love it! keep it coming!

Reviewer: Aurelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 09:51 pm Title: Sixteen

On the first question, I think, deep down, she knows he's serious. She's only lying to herself, thinking it's just the sex (however wonderfully naughty it is). As confident as she tries to make herself seem, she's afraid of getting hurt, especially by Will.
WE know that he's serious, HE knows he's serious, and even SHE knows he's serious. She just needs to wake up and smell the Spuffy love... which kinda smells like sex and assorted fruit...

I love this so far.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: Sixteen

Cute flashback, and great love scene! Fantastic update! :D

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 08:50 pm Title: Sixteen

I loved the update. I hope that Buffy stays oblivious for a little bit longer or that a monkey wrench gets thrown it like her meeting someone ( not necessarily romantically) in England that's a little like past, unsure william. Gasp!

I'm a sucker for angst but I'm sure I'll love whatever comes next.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 06:51 pm Title: Sixteen

yay! excellent scene with buffy figuring out that she wants him. she seems to be catching a lot of william's signals. she knows him well so she sees the sudden mood changes, the intensity and hunger. so she could get a clue, especially as some of the newness of sex wears off and she's able to think a little more clearly. but then again, who could think in the same room as a naked spike?
i'm really enjoying this fic!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 11:44 am Title: Sixteen

Ooh, yay, finally an update! *happy grin* Great chapter, as always. And please, let Buffy figure it out! *lol*

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 05:50 am Title: Sixteen

amazing chapter!! I really can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 01:05 am Title: Sixteen

Knowing Buffy she will remain in denial as long as possible. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: the one and only Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 11:18 pm Title: Sixteen

I have SO missed this story.. This was a wonderful update!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Sixteen

AHHHH THERE BETTER NOT BE MORE LIAM, I HATE HIM AND SHE BETTER REALIZE THAT HES SERIOUS!! i LOVE this story sooooo much and am so happy that u updated. i really wish that she would realize that he loves her and that she loves him too or at least she wants to be with him. i really hope that she figures it out soon and that nothing happens with liam. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next between them. THANX

Author's Response: Really-you hate my Liam-cause he's kinda awesome and totally on the side of getting Buffy and William together. Maybe you have my fic confused with a different one?

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: Sixteen

More more more! Can't wait for the next chapter :o) :o)

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