

Date: 06/20/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Three
Well I hope you do manage to get over the block.
I wanna see where they end up.

Date: 06/20/2008 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm enjoying this soooo so much! Wishing your writer's block a quick death. Sorry to hear about the carpal tunnel too. That sucks. Any possibility you can type with your toes? Anxiously awaiting more!

Date: 06/20/2008 - 10:46 am Title: Chapter Three
Yay! I absolutely love this story so far. I really hope your writers block clears itself soon because I eagerly anticipate each update. :)

Date: 06/20/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter Three
You're building the tension between them beautifully, even if Buffy refuses to acknowledge it. Spike's already attached to her, worrying when she's upset and wanting to console her. The dialogue is sharp and in voice, and the situation is being played out for maximum entertainment.
I laughed several times in this chapter, but these lines were my favorites:
“That is the single stupidest thing I have ever heard,” Anya announced, flopping against the back of the booth. “And that’s saying a lot. I have to spend all day listening to Xander.” Your Anya is blunt and funny, and I love that she gets to insult Xander, too.
“Personally, I say go, Spike. Tap that vulnerable rebound ass.” Excellent Faith voice, and "vulnerable rebound ass" has a nice ring.

Date: 06/20/2008 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Three
good to see your update. did i tell you i broke my shoulder? yeah, its painful as hell, too! anyway, thanks for looking at my last chapter back in the previous ear some time. i'm hoping to get another one to you during my recovery...although one handed typing sucks a little -- i keep trying to remember that being able to type at all is a good thing. best, sd

Date: 06/20/2008 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Three
Not even a hint as to where he's taking her? :( Evil.

Date: 06/20/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter Three
oh my god this chapter was great i only wish buffy can figure out spike likes her seriously its just sad that she doesnt want him but i know its part of the story and you'll fix that soon i know you will

Date: 06/20/2008 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Three
So sorry to hear you're having problems and I hope they sort themselves out soon. Really enjoying the read.

Date: 06/19/2008 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Three
Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 execellent chapters.

Date: 06/19/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Three
Yay!! More please as soon as you can get it out! Poor writer, with carpal tunnel... Well, rest if you need it, but I'm completely antsy here. :)

Date: 06/19/2008 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Three
Sorry to hear the writing isn't going smoothly - but it would be impossible to tell from reading this. The snark and humor and UST are flowing quite splendidly.

Date: 06/19/2008 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Three
I hope Spike can get it through her head to change her attitude about her role with a man. It's horrible! She should be thinking that Angel's an asshole for treating her like that after sex, not that it was all her fault. Though it totally doesn't sound like she was, or is, ready to have a sexual relationship, anyway. She's primarily looking at it like the only way to keep a guy, that that's all she's worth as a female. Her self-esteem sucks!

Date: 06/13/2008 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Two
Write more!!! I'm so excited to see how Angel reacts to this new relationship. Your writing is really good and I love the personal thoughts in each of their heads.

Date: 06/11/2008 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love this story. And I wonder just when Spike will figure out why he does care. Gotta love teenager logic, too. Looking forward to more, whenever that may be. Sure hope the move goes smoothly and that you can find all your stuff again. (Maybe your muse is in a box with the towels? Important stuff should always be packed with soft things...) :)

Date: 06/11/2008 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Two
completely amazin!!!!
love it!
cant wait for the new chapters!

Date: 06/10/2008 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter Two
Buffy's so easily played by Spike's fake sincerity, but you've injected some emotion into him so it's not coming off completely sleazy. Just sleazy enough!

Date: 06/10/2008 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter One
This is a wonderful set up and it's hilarious. Yeah, they hate each other! The dialogue is fast and funny, and I'm loving how they're playing against one another.

Date: 06/09/2008 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Two
I really like your story! Thanks for updating!

Date: 06/09/2008 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Two
Yes, a new chapter in what I'm sure will be one of my favorite of your fics thus far! I don't care if the whole 'mortal enemies turned passionate love affair high school scene' has been done before, now it's being done by you, and I love it! I don't think YOUR muse could possibly expire, it probably just got lost in the move. I'm sure it'll find you soon. But in the meantime, LOVED this chapter! Spike's a sneaky little bastard, isn't he? He's totally gonna fall for her before he even knows it, and vise versa. And Angel and Harmony totally deserve each other. Looking forward to more!

Date: 06/09/2008 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter Two
It will be fun to see Spike teaching her without touching :-D
Enjoyed the new chapter; looking patiently forward to more.

Date: 06/09/2008 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Date: 06/09/2008 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Two
omg i love this fic
its so different from ne thing ive read
cant wait for an update
addie you are doing amazing

Date: 06/09/2008 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aw! Moving sucks. I hope you get settled soon and your muse becomes undead. This story is hilarious and snarky, I do hope to see more of it some time. take care!

Date: 06/09/2008 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh, I'm just so addicted to this fic already. I can't wait to see how Angel - and the rest of the school - reacts to Spike & Buffy as a couple.
Good luck with the move - you know we'll all be here *patiently* waiting for your muse to resurrect herself. :)
-Alyx
PS - Loved the 'Bangel' comment. :P

Date: 06/09/2008 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Two
That was hilarious! Spike is so baaaaad.