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Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2008 - 06:24 am Title: Two

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2008 - 05:21 pm Title: Two

Poor William! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2008 - 02:40 pm Title: Two

I just read both chapters and I really like the story so far. Buffy and William are just adorable as kids. Can't wait for more, please post another chapter asap! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 08:23 am Title: One

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 02:43 am Title: One

Great first chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment :)

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 01:08 am Title: One

“Do you think there will still be some tadpoles at the pond in a week?” LOL Sounds just like Buffy!

Great start. You asked for suggestions, so here's mine: keep the tenses consistent. You start off in the past tense, switch a bit to present, then go back to past. If you put it all in the past tense, it will read better.

I can just see those two getting up to such mischief! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Because I'm such a spaz I uploaded the wrong draft. Please check out the edited version.

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 10:35 pm Title: One

This looks like a really great start. These kind of stories are my favorite, so I'm really excited to see where you go from here. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thxs, happy to have you onboard :)

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