Solo una palabra Wow!

The irony that Spike finds his heaven, his perfection, in Buffy's hell. Wow. That was beautiful, this whole story is just so beautifully written. That she can still read emotion and her begging him, just begging her to touch him that her body still knows that it feels less alone when there is someone to love and to touch.

In some ways this really IS like season 6, because isn't that what Buffy did when she came back? She was in hell in her mind, and Spike was the only person who could make her feel anything, the only person who made her feel like she wasn't alone. You stay true to the characters even thgough the change in the story line.

Have I mentioned how much I love this story?

Excellent chapter! It's encouraging to see that he and Buffy can communicate somewhat. Can't wait to see what tomorrow brings in hell!

Aw it's so sad. To think she's been there for hundreds upon hundreds of years. Although truly in the real world it wouldn't seem like that but you can tell she's not Buffy anymore. Not now at least, and it's sad. Good job at writing that. Just thinking about Spike's three hundred years at the time of reading it, it was painful to think about the possibility of time for her. It would be interesting to see an insight into her thoughts of the time of these years. As she slowly forgot her family and friends, her name, her 'death'.

It's understandable as to why Spike let the 3rd rule slip. I mean you emphasized the other two so much in the story (which is good) to where even I forgot what the third rule was. As much as I don't want the story rushed I hope they find the true SOLACE soon he's seeking for them and getting out of there. Hell even I would want to see Buffy beat Spike up because then that would mean she's Buffy again.

Poor Spike. His slip was understandable, but the self hatred it's feeding is hard to read. Perhaps the cryptic markings on the wall hold the answer to freeing them both. In the meantime, cooling his heels in the slayer's makeshift bed should be some comfort.

Poor, poor Spike, he thinks he's ruined everything.
Hopefully they weren't seen as promises , more like just a statement. Maybe the writing is a clue? The ending was sweet ...he wanted the solace of her arms, just tonight. Please give me tonight. *so sad*
Great chapter and good luck on your graduation!

Esto es....simplemente hermoso y doloroso al mismo tiempo......siguiente por favor!.......Cómo saldran del infierno?.

Happy Birthday again, Holly :)
Greek writings... that's nothing I expected, you surprised me again. So it was Buffy that has written it. Weird... I wonder what did Buffy cause to write in Greek.
I forgot about it, that Spike did a promise. *checks* He said it will be alright in the last chapter. He said too he won't hurt Buffy. Not really a promise but it sounds like one. Does that count? (Maybe I overheard something.
Poor Spike, he's now so devastated. To sleep a bit won't help them get out but make him feel better.

It feels as though Buffy has chosen to put her trust in her new companion and it gives me hope for their future escape. The years of captivity have honed Buffy to a primal state, and it's making a fascinating read. I wonder what she has covered the walls of her modern cave in? Was she trying to retain her memories with drawings or words? I can't wait to find out.

OMG! Excuse me while i wipe away the tears, this is so beautiful and heartbreaking, awesome start, will be reading on.

What a twist... so Buffy seems to be lost. I wonder how you will solve this new problem. And what Spike saw in the warehouse.
~ Looking forward to more.

Oh my god! indeed you're so mean! i'm dying to know what's on the wall. I gather from your title that its some form of writing? but it has to be morbid right? it is hell so writing in buffy's own blood? i dont know lol! i'm dying! you need to update soon before i too loose my mind and my ability to speak! though that probably wont happen i'm just tryign to guilt you into something! dang it! just update!