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Date: 10/28/2008 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Hope nothing will be happening to Buffy during the three days Spike has to hang there for! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 10/28/2008 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Ah... even if I didn't believe it I hoped for Spike it was really Buffy. Would have been too easy indeed.
But Spike did well, recognizing the trap.
And when Buffy seems so near he has to hang in the spider web? Even more torture for him. That makes the wait harder.
And I can't believe that it is only about hanging in there... I wonder what Larry has planned now.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2008 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Of course it wasn't Buffy. It was a nice and creepy facsimile, though, but II enjoyed Spike's vague reference to having the 'bot and finding it wanting. There's no way a soulless, cruel carbon copy would suffice. This new trial is already scary. I can't imagine how mad with hunger Spike will be at the end of the three days. He still has to rescue Buffy once he finds her.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2008 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter Eight

I don't think waiting is going to be the problem, Spike. Perhaps, surviving long enough to actually wait......... he did say 'rough' equivalent of a SPIDER web, didn't he?!!!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2008 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Eight

YAY Spike got thru the second trial..Larry is so snarkyLOL. Spike caught in a web..Now has to hold on for 3 days . We all know our antsy Spike will have a hard time holding on for 3 minutes *hugs him*

Glad you have your chappies done , now we get faster updates.:) Loved it btw.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Caught in a spider's web.. and so where is the spider?

Enjoying.. ... Spike can sit still for 3 seconds much less 3 days.. and Larry will be back to tell him .. LOL Not that dumb.

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Hmmm.... but IS that the real Buffy or is that all part of his next task? I'm thinking it's a trick. Can't wait to find out! Please update very soon!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2008 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I'm enjoying the super annoying Guardian, and the way he flicked Spike into the first bath was an awful surprise. The description of Spike's hair and skin melting was vivid and horrifying, and having to do it twice was excruciating. I find it difficult to believe Spike's already found his prize, but I guess I'll see if it's really Buffy soon enough.

Thanks for more of this emotional, vivid story.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I think there should have been one more rule---don't believe what you see, cause I don't believe that is really Buffy. I thought she'd be in worse shape than this. I thought she'd be in so much pain that she didn't know who she was, not cracking Spike a smile. It must be in his head. Like that dream he had before when he first passed out. Hopefully this will give him hope and strength.
And if this is really Buffy...well....I'm surprised.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Seven

YES ! he did it . If he keeps his wits about him and not let his emotions get the better of him he should be able to figure things out,hopefully. Of course it's going to get worse *shudders* Don't think it's Buffy , can't be that easy. The Scoobs need to know what he's going thru, they need to know what he is WILLING to do for Buffy.

MORE soon please I am

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Did I tell you how great the guardian demon is? Not to mention naming him Larry.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Chapter Seven

This couldn't be Buffy. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Seven

loved it...more please

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Mmmmm very intense chapter. Glad to see Spike couldn't die. Even the trial was very hard for him.
Not 100% sure if that's really Buffy. For Spike's sake I hope she is the real one.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Hmm... seems too good to be true... That first test was a right bitch, tho'! :P*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2008 - 02:45 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Buffy already... too easy and I still like Larry..

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Date: 10/22/2008 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

And what type of water would be a vampire's greatest fear.. Are some of these trials Spike must pass... just like Buffy . part of his greatest fears? And .. not real?

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2008 - 12:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

Wanted to drop a line and let you know that I am enjoying your story. The first trial is turning out to be quite interesting.

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2008 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Six

Poor Spike. :-( Looking forward to seeing how he gets past the holy water.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Six

That nightmare was a doozy and it did an excellent job putting me on edge. No matter how amiable Larry appears, he's protecting Hell's rights to Buffy. Spike would do well to stop listening to the demon.

I can't wait to see how you're going to get Spike through this holy water pool and through a doroless wall...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Six

How on earth will Spike get through Holy water?? Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Six

I was a bit confused at the start, thought Spike was back or dreaming. But I think now it's part of the trial.
Even if Larry says not, it felt like it. Well or a nightmare.
Ah I wondered if hell could have holy water; normal water wouldn't be a trial. That's bad for Spike; I hope he'll find a solution.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Six

ouch. a little harsh. holy water? i wonder what is going to happen

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter Six

Love it.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Six

Great chappie. Poor Spike, this is going to be bad.
He just has to figure it out, love that he's so determined. Story just gets more interesting.

Can't wait for more...Soon? :)

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