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Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 04:33 pm Title: 1

ohhh! Im excited to see what happens!! This is a really good idea and very original! I havnt read anything like this so i cant wait to see where you go with it.

Author's Response: So glad you started reading! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 02:06 pm Title: 18

Wasn't that just the sweetest ending? I loved it! And I'm also glad that you made Dru turn "sane" somehow and not just let her be the crazy ex girlfriend. Though she'll always be a bit crazy, right? ;)
Anyways, great job with the story!! *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, really happy you liked it! *hugs back*

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 09:39 pm Title: 18

You know it's never too cute for me...lol! This was just the right amount of cuteness and yes, they did deserve it. Congrats on finishing another story, job well done=)

Author's Response: So happy you didn't choke on the cuteness. *lol* Thank you so much!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 09:19 pm Title: 18

YAY!! a happy Spuffy ending. Yeah it was totally cute, but damn they deserve it!
Great story, really liked it. =)

Author's Response: Don't we all love a happy ending? :) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 09:04 pm Title: 18

I loved this fic! The epilogue was fantastic too!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 04:54 pm Title: 18

Oh they deserved it :)
I'm glad it worked out for them. Sad is only the William never will know if the child was his or not.
Dru will hopefully be better off somewhere.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 - 03:50 pm Title: 18

Yes, for the happy ended... And glad that even Dru is on the road to recovery..

Enjoyed..

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 - 09:38 pm Title: 17

Feel bad for Spike for not knowing if the baby was his or not. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Final chapter is up. Thanks so much for your review! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 07:23 pm Title: 17

So Dru lost the baby... they still could do some test but it won't help them, just getting the truth out.
I'm glad William didn't touch the knife in case Dru accuses Will of doing it (trying to kill her / the baby). Dru needs some help. *nods*
Loved Buffy reassuring William.

Author's Response: Yay, happy you loved that part. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 03:34 pm Title: 17

Grreat chapter. Thank God William didn't get blamed for anything. Too bad about the baby , now he'll never know if it was his. I really like this Buffy...she's mature , loving and understanding. William and Buffy will make great parents one day.

More soon please! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The (most likely) final chapter will hopefully be up tomorrow.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 02:59 pm Title: 17

Here's for Buffy and Spike.. She's definitely become his anchor..

And for the sad situation of Angel and Dru...

Enjoying...

Author's Response: So glad to hear you're still enjoying. Thank you!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 - 02:25 pm Title: 17

Wow, she was one crazy woman and the last few chapters have been intense! Poor William. At least he has Buffy to hold him up, otherwise it would have been way worse. As for Dru and Angel, as they say, there is somebody for everyone. And hey, hopefully Angel can distract her from harming any other innocent men.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: 16

Sorry, you feel that not very many people are interested in this story. I'm sure that isn't the case at all. Just people that are most likely too lazy to leave a review. I will admit that I don't always leave a review. I know I should because writers take the time to write these wonderful stories. Readers should at least leave a comment. With me, I usually like to write a little something. I can't write just " great chapter" or anything of that sort. I like to leave a little something more. Like what is my favorite part of the chapter. What I like I liked the best. So, when I'm really lazy that day. I won't leave a review. But I guess something like "love it more please" is better than nothing. It is sad to hear that you intended this story to be longer. But feel that hardly anybody is interested in it anymore. So, you are going to cut it short. I enjoy this story so much. So, whether you plan to it soon or make it longer. I will continue to read. As for this chapter. Dru is nuts. She really is. I bet William never would have imagined when he starting dating her that she was this crazy. Look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Maybe you're right. It's just that when I write, I write for my readers, not just for myself. And the only way for me to know if the readers like my stuff or find it to be crap is by them leaving a review. Just the smallest comment, like 'great chapter' means the world to me as an author. Just like it makes me really sad when no one bothers. Anyway, I'm really glad to hear you enjoy my story. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know! :)

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: 16

Whoa....just... Whoa

Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 08:29 pm Title: 16

Dru is clearly out of her mind!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: It's up now. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 07:11 pm Title: 16

OMG that was a totally evil cliffie! Holy shit. Dru is even crazier than I thought. Poor William having to see that and the poor baby. At least Buffy's there so hopefully William won't get in trouble if she decides to say he attacked her or something.

I' m sorry to hear your muse is gone on this story, cause I really love it. It's so good.I'll keep reading.=)

Author's Response: So happy to hear that, thank you! Not much left of the story though. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 06:51 pm Title: 16

Too late for the warning, I've read it now ;)
~ When you answered the comment I thought for a moment that you would kill of Dru in some way. Didn't expect her to kill the baby all by herself.

Author's Response: At first I played with the thought of offing Dru but I changed my mind. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: 16

you can't just leave it there
post more soon

Author's Response: Sorry, just updated though. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 04:17 pm Title: 16

I hope that he doesn't get implicated for this! She is so wacko. That is awful! I sure hope that an update comes soon, it will be so hard waiting! Why oh why didn't I least wait till the end of the day to read this chapter!

Author's Response: This soon enough? *lol* Thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: 16

Whaaaaaat?! Is she know completely insane??
You're really evil leaving it there ;) I liked the chapter though!

Author's Response: Know I'm evil *lol* Glad you liked, thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 01:35 pm Title: 16

Too weird.. Dru stabing herself to get rid of the baby..

Sick... and sad for William. That 's her game. Control at all costs..



Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2009 - 12:25 pm Title: 15

Now, that Spike might be ok with having a kid. Dru is thinking about getting rid of the pregnancy. I really don't know which way you plan on going. Is it going to be spike's baby and Dru has an abortion. Is is going to be Spike's baby and him and Buffy takes care of the baby together. Or maybe it isn't his baby at all. You have me stump on this story, Pet. Congrats on that, haha

Author's Response: Or maybe I have something else planned entirely. *lol* Nice to hear your theories. Thanks for leaving me a review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2009 - 06:31 pm Title: 15

You have me on the edge of my seat! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Just posted next chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2009 - 06:26 pm Title: 15

Paternity seems to be important to the guys... too bad its not to Dru..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2009 - 05:19 pm Title: 15

Dru and her plan... I wonder if she will go through with it. I don't think Liam would mind because it isn't his... but William, if he ever finds out. So I still hope it isn't his either.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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