

Date: 03/19/2009 - 09:05 am Title: Chapter 9
poor buffy and cassie but another great chapter, off to read more

Date: 03/19/2009 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 8
please do that to angel...work now then off to read more. loving this fic

Date: 03/19/2009 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 7
wonderful again...go buffy

Date: 03/19/2009 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 6
love how you are weaving the series into this story...brilliant...

Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:54 am Title: Chapter 5
wonderful and I still hate Kendra....off for the next chapter

Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 4
brilliant getting Spike and Cassie to work together..stupid Ford. loved it

Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter 3
poor Cassie, she's no Buffy..loved it, love the protctve Spike

Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 2
wonderful wonderful tale..loved eery word off to read more

Date: 03/18/2009 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
funny thing is Deprimere ille bubula linter, when using latin, loosely translates to press down the oxen linen. either way doesn't make much sense! ;D
Author's Response: Which proves the BTVS writers have no clue what they were saying, cuz I sure don't know any Latin.

Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 31/Epilogue
This is still one of my favorite series and I can't wait to see more from this. That includes the other stories and the sceneros that you haven't finished yet.
Looking forward to more when you can.

Date: 02/23/2009 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Love the way Dru talks in circles. Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 02/23/2009 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting. I think Giles will figure out who Beth is soon enough. This was a great update. I am totally hooked.

Date: 02/15/2009 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
The plot is very promising, but please get a beta reader. There are some mistakes in your story that could easily be avoided if you had someone to re read the chapters before you posted them. Those mistakes might seem little, but to me they are very distracting.
It's not my intention to offend you or to be mean. I'm giving you constructive criticism so your story will be better.

Date: 02/15/2009 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love how you wrote that scene. It was so much better than how it actually went on the show. So I take it that Dawn is supposed to come and that Glory will be looking for her key. I just hope that Buffy won't have to scarafice herself in the end.

Date: 02/15/2009 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Hey Fantastic story cant wait till its finnish

Date: 02/14/2009 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
Surprised Spike hasn't put two and two together in regards to the specter and Beth. Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 02/14/2009 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter 8
Absolutely loving this story!
Please keep up the good work :)

Date: 02/13/2009 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yike i hate Angelus and i hope he gets whats coming to him very soon. I was hoping that Spike would figure out who the specter really was but hoepfully soon.

Date: 01/31/2009 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Specter character is awesome Mary! I really like this story, glad I was able to sit down and read a few chapters today :) Well done!

Date: 01/30/2009 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
O creepy! I really love the way you've been tieing Btv into all of this, but at the same time making it all different. Xander is such a good guy in your story too! So many people tend to make him into a jerk.

Date: 01/30/2009 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like Spike and Xanders interactions it's very freshing. Ted always creeped me out but i like how you wrote it in to this story. i'm loving this story .

Date: 01/29/2009 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 01/26/2009 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ok I'm confused now. The last chapter was labeled chapter 4 at the top of the page, & although this is the 5th chapter, it's labeled chapter 6 at the top of the page. Was this just an error or is there a missing chapter?

Date: 01/24/2009 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 01/23/2009 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
It's amazing how instightful Dru can be when she wants to be. I loved the interaction between Xander and Spike it was really refreshing. awsome update.