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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Started reading this story and am enjoying it. Look forward to more chapters!

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Author's Response: Oops. Hit submit before I actually responded. LOL! Thank you so much for reading the story and letting me know that you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2009 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Enjoyed..



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Love this story... Please please continue!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

This is all so vivid and entertaining, I feel like I'm watching the action unfold. Spike is actually pretty charming when he wants to be, and it makes Buffy's attraction more understandable.

Darla's slutty actions with the camera guy made me sad that she wasn't voted off, but you saved the day with the arrest. Who the heck did she kill? I look forward to more of this fun story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for you kind words about the writing. It's reviews like this that I go back and look at when I'm having a rough day with my writing. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Spike is really walking a knife's edge here. His attraction is really interfering with his job and it's cracking me up. Nailing Angel with the camera was golden.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed the fun stuff. Thank you.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Ten

I like that buffy isn't letting Spike push her around. She's in the competition, and it's not her fault that Angel likes her. She's very likable! Her talent display was impressive, too.

That trip to Vegas is going to be tense!

Author's Response: Buffy is no push over. LOL! Thank you.

Reviewer: TammyH77 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Loved their exchange in the exercise room even if Spike was a little cocky. I totally wasn't expecting the end! Darla, arrested! Now I can't wait for the next chapter. More soon, please.

Author's Response: :) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Love reading this. Hesitate to give Spike her number. Is Buffy mad?

Author's Response: Thank you. And I know, Buffy is crazy!

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Dude, you should write for the show! I'm pretty sure this is way more exciting than what they usually have! Anyways, I love this chapter! Spike was adorable and I can't wait to see how Buffy lets down Angel. More please!

Author's Response: :) Wow! Thank you for the compliment.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

OMG that was some ending..Darla killed someone? I guess they dont vet these girls too well. lol Too bad that Fred is gone, and I'm glad that Buffy is not liking Angel too much. Spike acted very well w/B..did she give him her #? I hope so.

Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Now that's an awesome twist. I love this story. Looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so happy to have you reading the story.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Whoa, okay, I've never actually seen The Bachelor before, but I'm pretty sure something like that has never happened on it, which just makes things even more interesting. Who did she kill, one of the other girls perhaps? Oh, who cares, as long as one bitch is finally gone. At first I thought it was because they found out she was having a thing with a member of the crew, which had me more worried for Buffy, but then I realized the police wouldn't arrest her for that. Can't wait for more=)

Author's Response: The show has had some shockers, but I don't recall a murder arrest during taping. LOL! I'm so glad you are enjoying the fic. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

HaHa So Darla did a no no!! LOL!! Couldn't happen to a nicer person.

Author's Response: LOL! I know, right?

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Is Kate a cop in this fic? I wonder if she had anything to do with it since Darla got picked over her in the two-and-one date. And is there any fact behind the idea that the brass are making the choices like keeping Darla and Cordelia around because they cause static in the house? I'm thinking of the possibility of it coming down to Buffy and Faith at the end and Angel gets pressured to pick Buffy the -girl-next-door type rather than Faith the sexpot.

Author's Response: Kate is cop. I can't say for sure what the brass do and don't do, but if I had to guess, I'd say yes. :) Keep reading to find out who the last two are.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

OH MY GOD!!!!!! You arrested Darla for murder right at the end, Where do you come up with these things. I hope Buffy gives Spike a chance. I hope Buffy totally rejects Angel sometime hehe, tells him his forehead is so big its almost scary, and are you loosing your hair?

Author's Response: Where do I come up with this stuff? LOL! I sort of let the characters loose and this is just what they do. I love your scenario for a rejection, but I have to tell you that IF it happens, it doesn't quite happen that way. I want to see this rejection idea of yours in a fic that you've written, one day.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Oooo what a cliffhanger!! That dramatic ending was so unexpected!! Can't wait for the next chapter :-)

Author's Response: :) I'm glad I can still surprise my readers. That's not easy to do.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Wow, the ending is really dramatic.

Author's Response: :) Thanks. I just have to shake things up a bit for time to time.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Woah. Didn't see that coming!

Author's Response: LOL! I think I shocked just about everyone. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Guess that makes Darla a felon! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Yes, it does. :) Next one coming up soon. Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Good that Spike found out who was the other girl. Still - Buffy is right, they have to be careful.
Oh my god... didn't expect Darla to be out of the game. And the way she went out. Wow... drama.
Good cliffhanger :D But evil too.
~ Enjoyed the read, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: :) Good and evil. Thanks. I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

more more more!!! What did Darla do? Can you tell I am into this story? Love it, thanks for sharing :)

Author's Response: :) I can tell, and I'm thrilled. Thank you. More on the way, soon.

Reviewer: Elly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Holy crap!! I totally did NOT expect that ending. I'm on pins & needles. I'm loving this fic so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad that I can still shock with my story lines and you are enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Just caught up on the last couple of chapters. Really enjoying the fic, especially how you're building up the relationship between Spike and Buffy.

That last part of this chapter was a shock, really looking forward to finding out what happens next :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm thrilled that you reading and that you are enjoying. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Darla ... a murderer.... LOL too bad Angel didn't pick her.. as his final girl..

Author's Response: LMAO! Wouldn't that have been fun? :)

Reviewer: Slayerfest99 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2009 - 06:15 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

WOW! Darla a murderer? Does that mean that Fred might stay? That'd be nice, I like Fred. I LOVE this story, amazing job on this chapter, just like all your chapters lol. :D Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Unfortunately, Fred won't be coming back. I've never seen an instance where anyone was brought back after not getting a rose, I didn't write that in. :)

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