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Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

lovely sweet chapter, looking forward to the next one

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aww..I love this little twist on things. So...Spike's chipless and in love. I hope that Parker doesn't show up again. LOL

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

such a sweet chapter, i'm loving this spike, and your buffy is much better than the show.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2009 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

So who is the biological father?

Nice little twist with Dawn. And Spike .. always thought of him as a great Dad..

Author's Response: Um, well, the father is Parker. Maybe I should have been a little more specific with that, it's not something I was trying to hide or anything. I guess maybe it wasn't as obvious as I thought. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

First - your chapter is a link, close the tag to the image. Thank god the font is still big enough to read :D

Ah.. Spike isn't included in the spell regarding Dawn. Interesting.
And Buffy has a child? Parker sounded like it. Gotcha, not exactly Buffy's sister, huh?
Very interesting end of the chapter too :D
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks, I've tried to fix that a few times now, but I'm not sure how. It's never done that before, I didn't even notice until you pointed it out.

Author's Response: Okay, it should be all fixed now. I just uploaded my picture to another site.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely LOVE it! Cant wait for more

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow i never saw that coming i thought for sure he was back for a fight but nice twist please update soon.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm loving this... great start! :D

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Really good beginning. They seem to have laid all their cards on the table so lets see what they do with them. I for one can't wait.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

This should be good. So Riley's not in the books and Dawn is the daughter... can't wait for more!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

great start, it's nice to see a new story from you.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like, I like!!!!!! More please!!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love the beginning of this! Not that I'm very surprised, since your stories always are amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please tell me you'll post it soon! :)

Reviewer: beastie08` Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

im loving the way this is going already. cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh. I'm already in love with it! Please continue!

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