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Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2009 - 10:59 am Title: Broken Promise

Whoa...literally, I went whoa...love the curveball, things we're getting too cozy...good cliffie

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Date: 06/20/2009 - 08:22 am Title: Broken Promise

Good luck for your move!
I had a bad feeling when Spike was hiding and Buffy wanted to know. Would have been best if Spike hadn't said anything a all but now when Buffy had the impression he was hiding something I wondered if that would be something that would influence her or better said: the trust she has in Spike. She still has issues... sadly it seems I was right with my worry ~ if Spike doesn't have a very good reason/explanation won't Buffy have to worry that he would do the same to her?
Hope he has a good explanation for his cheating. Otherwise I don't know if Buffy can bear the thought - except it was with her, the cheating (in his mind or so). But I don't think that could be the case.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 02:51 am Title: Broken Promise

...and the other shoe drops.

Interesting twist in that it was Spike that was the downfall of the Spike/Dru lovefest.

To be honest is brutal, hence the term brutally honest. Buffy's initial reaction will continue to sow seeds of doubt into her bergeoning relationship with Spike. She stewed about it all day and into the night until Spike returned--that's why it's so hard for Buffy to remember the giddiness of the very consummation of their relationship.

She, too, is not without feelings of guilt--at what they were to each (step-siblings) and what they are to each other (lovers). Shades of season 6 color their guilt. It's going to be interesting to see the circumstances that lead to Spike's past behavior--because he's always portrayed as the loyal one. The fact that you make Spike so fallable makes this story a more realistic read.



Author's Response: I'm glad you think so...I obviously love the character of Spike in the show, but like you said I did want to make him more fallable because he is human here and he's not a William sort of human, he's Spike, so he's made mistakes and they're on a Spike kind of scale...thankyou for the review and please keep reading :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2009 - 11:53 pm Title: Broken Promise

Uh oh! This can go in lots of different directions! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Broken Promise

yep, that's what i guessed, it's refreshing seeing as how dru's always the one to cheat, but now buffy is going to have even more doubts, like if he did it once, he's capable of doing it again, but i'm hoping that's not the case here. i wonder who the other girl was.

Author's Response: All will be revealed (though it may seem an obvious choice, as I do like to go back to the show)...thanx for the review, I'm glad you found it refreshing, it was because I noticed that Dru is always the one to cheat that I made it Spike...I didn't want to write crazy evil Dru, I just wanted her to be a normal girl in Spike's past that he'd hurt, thats why in the first Chapter I didn't give a reason for Buffy's dislike of her, I just said they didn't get on...

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2009 - 09:19 pm Title: Broken Promise

Wow! Didn't see that coming - at all! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad I can still suprise people! =D

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2009 - 01:32 pm Title: Space Monkey

I think this chapter worked really well, I liked the fact it had no dialogue until the end, looking forward to more

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Date: 06/16/2009 - 08:58 pm Title: Second Sight

I really liked this chapter. It was interesting to see their little argument/facing of fears.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 10:00 am Title: Space Monkey

That was intense...it illustrates their NEED for each other

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2009 - 02:13 am Title: Space Monkey

Wow! (fans self)

You've captured what is definitely the sexual growth of Buffy and the explosive compatability that is Spuffy.

Spike is both lucky at recognizing how special Buffy's gift is to him and bordering on obsession. Despite his age and the awareness of the desperation in their couplings, he just can't help himself.

You've done such a good job with showing them as a couple, that I can see things going bad for the two of them before they settle into bliss.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much :) you seem to really understand what I'm trying to write, so I hope you keep on reading...thanx for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 10:25 am Title: Space Monkey

Very hot! Hope the upcoming angst isn't too intense. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 02:51 am Title: Space Monkey

I'm leaving a review about the last chapter as well. I loved the last chapter and Buffy didn't want Spike to go. I love seeing that it is Buffy for a change that doesn't want to let go of Spike. Who can blame the girl. I wouldn't want to let go of Spike ever either. I laughed so hard when Spike was trying to go to work but Buffy was trying to get him to stay there with her. So, there is going to be angst. I hope hope that isn't too much angst. I don't know if I can take a lot of angst when Spike and Buffy just go together. Thanks for the great chapter.

Author's Response: There may be a lot of angst, but it'll work out!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Space Monkey

You did a fine job! Although, I did want to mention a couple of spelling errors. Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Okay didn't see any myself before uploading and spell checked it just now and didn't find anything...

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 06:14 pm Title: Space Monkey

Who needs words? Loved that chapter.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 03:57 pm Title: Space Monkey

No dialogue....so sexy. So completely sexy.

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 01:10 pm Title: Space Monkey

What a nice greeting :)
Good they were okay after what happened before Spike went to work.
~ Angst to start soon? Hopefully it won't be too much to bear for me. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 07:09 am Title: Second Sight

Loved it, glad Buffy and Spike got to talk and that Buffy is feeling a little less confused about her feelings for him, glad to see another chapter up too =D

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 - 07:13 pm Title: Second Sight

It's good they were able to talk about it. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 - 11:30 am Title: Second Sight

Ah... Buffy is thinking more about what the others will say about the issue (including her parents, huh)? I don't think she is honest to herself.
Sounds as if she was ready to give this relationship a try at the end of the chapter (with Spike's help).
*fingers crossed* that this will get through

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 - 04:30 am Title: Second Sight

I'll wait for as long as it takes. Was a little worried there and I'm so looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, it'll come as soon as possible :)

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: Second Sight

Thank you for another update! I'm looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 - 09:46 pm Title: Second Sight

Whew! That's my sigh of relief that it was nothing more than guilt that caused the friction between Buffy and Spike. Even though they haven't been "siblings" with each other for a while, Buffy's feelings are understandable because of her inexperience.

I've always been patient with this story of yours, so I will read-on when you're ready. I'll be waiting :)

Author's Response: Thankyou very much :)

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 - 09:40 pm Title: Lady Of The Flowers

Having read this right after chapter 12, I was left with Spike in the "Huh?" camp.

The lack-of Buffy perspective leaves the reader perplexed as to what Buffy is feeling, but it's probably because she's so confused with first-time feelings coupled with the Sex with Spike! guilt. I'm going to read on with chapter 13 to actually find out what happened. I'm so glad that you updated so quickly as to not leave me in torment.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 - 09:37 pm Title: Because I Want You

Gosh, I don't know how I've missed catching up to your stories. I'm not even sure which chapter I last reviewed, so I'll start with the smutty, even though I've read-up to the morning after.

Now that they've finally consummated their growing and very non-familial desires for one another, it should be apparent to Spike that this is probably something more for Buffy. She gave her virginity to him, which she probably could have unloaded off to some secondary character out-of-story (Angel? Parker?) which makes is a big deal.

When Spike tells Buffy "you've never been in love" you know that that's going to have to do with things later in the story. Buffy will either 1) admit to loving him, and Spike won't know what to do with her love or 2) Buffy will run scared because she doesn't realize that what she has with Spike IS real.

Anyway, this was a fan-worthy, ice-cube crushing-with-my-teeth-type of chapter. Well done!



Author's Response: Thankyou so much for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 - 12:11 pm Title: Lady Of The Flowers

Good luck for your exam :)

Seems Buffy was a bit overwhelmed because of what happened before. And this was such a sexy way to wake Buffy up. Seems that talking would have been better. Hindsight...

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