Reviews For Embracing Darkness
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Reviewer: SlayrGrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 12:36 am Title: Prologue:

I wanted respond about why I write in present tense. I've been criticized as well as praised for it but in the end I don't write in present because of the opinions of any of my readers. I regret that it bothers people enough for them to choose not to read one of my stories; however I feel that present tense adds a sense of urgency to a story and can help suck a reader into the moment of things. Also, I feel that there are too many clichés out there, especially in fan fiction. The ways that things are described from one fic to another has started to feel too similar from one story to the next to me and I want to separate myself from that; writing in the present is in part a way for me to try and be new and original. Thank you to all of my readers.

Reviewer: SMac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 12:07 am Title: Prologue:

I think tihs is a well written story and I love the premise but it's written in present tense which I just can't read, it's a thing. I'm so sorry about this because I really wanted to read this but the tense is impossible for me. I wish you well of it, and hopefully you'll write other equally good stories in third person in the future. I really want to read your stuff! :-)

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 11:59 pm Title: The Thing the Darkness Fears:

Sweet! Two undates in one day! Thanks! I like how you have different banners for each chapter, that is pretty neat. Update soon!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 09:18 pm Title: After the Daylight Fades:

I LOVED IT :) Please update again very soon I need to know what happends next.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 06:48 pm Title: After the Daylight Fades:

Good summary - they get ready for battle. I hope there plan will function. If not - then they are in trouble.
~ Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 09:47 pm Title: Let Love out of the Dark:

Enjoyed! More please!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Let Love out of the Dark:

I hope Willow will be really okay with Tara coming back; glad that Anya could talk with Xander.

Loved the spuffy scene, good to see Buffy telling Spike how she feels.

Reviewer: b-mac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 08:22 am Title: Passions Brought to Light:

Only Spike could have sex with four bullet wounds in his stomach. LOL

Great story. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 - 06:16 am Title: Passions Brought to Light:

Mmmh I just love Spike's speech ("you're the one").
I like that Buffy isn't running again. So back to business.
Enjoyed 'the break' :))

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: Dueling at Dusk:

Wondering if Buffy can forgive herself for what she almost did. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 07:46 pm Title: Dueling at Dusk:

Bad, Wood attacked again. Hopefully he noticed now that he won't have a chance *fingers crossed*

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Date: 06/10/2009 - 07:36 pm Title: Hope Through Dawn:

Ah good idea to bring the balance back. But it will be hard for Willow, seeing Tara again and let her go.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 - 03:19 pm Title: Hope Through Dawn:

I love this story so much. I feel bad for Williow it won't be easy brinning Tara back and than sending her away again.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 07:37 pm Title: Playing Florence Nightingale:

Thank you for solving that cliffhanger soon :)
And it takes Anya to tell some blunt truth. But she is right.... Buffy is immortal now, that will change some things.
You being a vampire has nothing to do with me fighting by your side. True too.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 06:09 pm Title: Dont go Toward the Light:

Loved the update! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 - 02:03 pm Title: Dont go Toward the Light:

Like I expected sooner or later - Wood tried so do something. Sounds as if he has failed *hopes*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 01:25 pm Title: Divulging Dark Theories:

Wood doesn't sound as if he wants to help now, now that he believes Buffy has 'gone bad'. But I wonder what he thinks of all the potentials there; they should know that Buffy is a vamp.
Lovely Buffy/Spike scene. But bad news what Giles told.
~ Till next part :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 04:38 pm Title: Daymares:

Wonder what they'll find out while researching
Awe :) What a gift for Buffy, being able to go out in the sun.
Even if it is only under water.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 03:50 pm Title: Daymares:

I started reading this today and I must say it's very touching and perfect. Your doing a great job and I can't wait to see where it goes next.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 - 01:22 am Title: Nightlife:

I like the closeness between Spike and Buffy. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 06:49 pm Title: Nightlife:

Doesn't sounds as if Xander will ever accept Buffy being with Spike (at last at the moment).
I wonder how much Buffy will adjust (if that includes making decisions against what her friends want).

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 - 07:08 pm Title: Power Illuminated:

Really loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 - 06:20 pm Title: Power Illuminated:

The fight with the Uber-vamp proved that Buffy's slayer dream seems to be right, it make her strong enough to fight it.
But the FE was teasing Spike.... sounds as if the FE is lying now (I’m here to tell you that you’ve done exactly what I wanted you to.).

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 - 11:32 pm Title: Rising Darkness:

Great update, glad to see Buffy is handling it well but Spike is right it's part of who she is now I hope she can accept the soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 - 06:44 pm Title: Rising Darkness:

It's good that Spike is there to help Buffy through all the bumps she'll be experiencing. Can't wait for the next update!

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