

Date: 07/23/2010 - 07:44 am Title: Awakening.
Aww, lovely story. So glad another person wrote an alternate ending for smashed.

Date: 07/21/2009 - 12:46 am Title: Awakening.
I loved it!! It was soooo cute!! Love Spike stand up for himself for once!

Date: 07/20/2009 - 10:13 pm Title: Awakening.
If only the series could have been like this!!

Date: 07/20/2009 - 06:41 pm Title: Awakening.
That was perfect. I wish that was how the episode actually went. Thank you for a way better ending than what we had. :)

Date: 07/20/2009 - 06:15 pm Title: Awakening.
Loved it!

Date: 07/20/2009 - 04:43 pm Title: Awakening.
Argh! Why do I always do this to myself? I chose a short fic because I have something else to do later, but FORGOT this was a teeny-tiny little story. I really got wrapped up in it. Thanks so much. Does the Muse actually welcome ALL feedback? O.K> here you are: Dialogue: A Action & sex: B Grammar: C Ending: A. Endings are important because - this way you can continue from where you left off WHENEVER you choose - even a hundred years from now.

Date: 07/20/2009 - 02:35 pm Title: Awakening.
Yes.
I liked the way the night ended better than the original end. :D